Date: 04/30/09 05:07 pm Title: All Good Things Come To An End
Oh you're going to get it!!!!!!! Lol.
This is by the worst cliff hanger ever known in fan fiction!!!!! Ugh now I have to wait another week to find out what happens, you are cruel cruel cruel lol.J/k.
Aside from the huge cliffe ending this was a good chapter. I like how you made sure everyone is aware that Adie has "ballooned" up. Nick completing the nursery was a sweet thing. I really liked how the two of them were talking and just being content.
I hope everything works out for Nick & Adie and I can't wait till you update again. I wish you didn't have to work!!!! Update as soon as you can lol.
Author's Response:
You should know by now that cliffie's are what I live for! I have to say that they effect me to because after I post a chapter with a cliffie like that all I want to do is start writing the next chapter but this time I couldnt as I had to get up early for work! All day at work I was thinking I need to start the next chapter like this... I need to make sure I include this.... I must research this before I do that...
I felt it was important for you guys to realsie how far she is along now, how big she is liekly to be and how excited they are about the arrival, that was before I snatched it all away from them. Thanks for reviewing hun.
Date: 04/30/09 08:17 am Title: All Good Things Come To An End
Really hope it is all a dream from b/c that is one thing horrable that can happen. This close to home for me too my sister lost her baby he was still born. My sister went for her scan he too was not moving she only has 3 months to go.
Author's Response: I'm sorry about that, like I said earlier it has to be awful to go threw and I hope that I can capture that correctly and sensitivly enough in my story. Thanks for the review hun.
Date: 04/30/09 07:06 am Title: All Good Things Come To An End
you. are. messed. up. lol
that is so sad. one minute everything's going in the right direction and this has to happen! it was too good to be true. :(
sad but good chapter! can't wait for more.
Author's Response: LOL! I know I know but this is fanfiction and the story would be boring if they got to live happily ever after! LOL!
Date: 04/30/09 03:14 am Title: All Good Things Come To An End
Things were too good to be true in the beginning, so I had a feeling something bad was going to happen. I didn't expect this at all. I'm sure you have your reasons, although right now I'm not sure I see them, if the baby has died in utero and Adie has to delivered a stillborn I'm not sure she can recover, or her and Nick can recover.
You are evil to leave a cliffie like this...update soon!
Author's Response:
Darby always the pestimist! LOL! Well you were right I will give you that! I don't think may people were expecting this but I do have my reasons, reasons I don't really want to share with you yet as it will ruin some of the story for you. This is going to test them to the brink, this type of situation either makes you as a couple or it breaks you, I have sadly seen it happen numerous times in my line of work. The next few chapters are going to be extremly difficult and sad.
Thanks for reviewing hun! Left a message on the forum!
xx
Date: 04/30/09 02:32 am Title: All Good Things Come To An End
OMG! Are you seriously going to make us wait another week to find out what's happening! Cruel :P
Author's Response: Yep I am because I am evil that way! HAHA! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/30/09 02:18 am Title: All Good Things Come To An End
Oh my god. No. This chapter just hit close to home. A friend of mines cousin went for a checkup and the doc couldnt find a heartbeat. :( I really hope Adie is dreaming, or Nick is dreaming. Nooooo. Now I know why you said it was going to shock me. :(
Author's Response:
I'm sorry about your cousin's friend, I can't imagine how awful it must be to have to go threw something like that. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 04/30/09 02:01 am Title: All Good Things Come To An End
OMG!!!!!!! more soon!!!!
Author's Response: I am aiming for wednesday of this week.
Date: 04/30/09 12:22 am Title: All Good Things Come To An End
NO... you cannot let this be happening.. please let it be a dream Adie is having... I know now why you said you hope to have the next chappy up by next week.
Author's Response:
I would love to say that it is but sadly it is not! Thanks for reviewing hun.
Date: 04/30/09 12:15 am Title: All Good Things Come To An End
no woman. you cannot be that cruel. no no no. not necessary. they have enough isuses.
Author's Response: I know they have enough issues but the world doesn't work that way! Sorry! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I know they have enough issues but the world doesn't work that way! Sorry! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/29/09 11:56 pm Title: All Good Things Come To An End
Omg.....
Author's Response: OMG indeed!
Date: 04/26/09 03:54 pm Title: Use Somebody
FINALLY remembered my password! Anyways you totally got me at the end there. I soo thought she was leaving him AGAIN! Awesome chappie.
Author's Response:
I like to keep you on your toes! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/25/09 02:41 am Title: One Step At A Time
awe! more soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks hun
Date: 04/24/09 11:54 pm Title: One Step At A Time
Great chapter. I think the way you portray some of the fans is spot on. lol Their some crazy girls out there. Anyway keep up the great work and now I'm waiting for the drama coming up. I can't even guess what it is. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review hun. You will get drama in the next chappie I am sure and I think it will be very shocking!
Date: 04/24/09 10:52 pm Title: One Step At A Time
I liked this chapter. Adie is definitely coming along and I can't wait to see her progress even more. I'm really glad that she told Nick about that dream, that's something that has been plaguing her for awhile now. It was a really sweet paragraph that you wrote, where Nick was talking to her belly.
You named the baby!!! You just threw that in there and kept on right with the story as if that part didn't really matter,lol. It's a cute name and I can't wait to have her arrive/included in the story.
I like the way you ended this chapter, I was wanting a nice fan encounter for her to know that not all fans are crazy/stalker/psychotic. We all really do care for Nick and we do want him to be happy.
It sucks that you have to go back to work!!!! But hopefully you will be able to update at some point. Update when you can!
Author's Response:
I thought it was important to let her see that not all fans are against her because it definetly gave her more confidence in herself and the talk with Leighanne definetly reiterated that as well. She is being a lot more open with Nick as well although I am not one hundred percent convinced she would have told him if he hadnt have walked in on her.
Sdaly this happy stuff isn't going to last and naming the baby is going to be very bittersweet in the next chapter!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/24/09 07:03 pm Title: Don't Let Me Get Me
Great Chapter. Iwould laugh out loud if she actually did tell a fan to Fuck off!
Author's Response: Thanks hun, i think I would too!
