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Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/14 02:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Momma Carter i can tell isnt going to be a happy camper!!

Author's Response: LOL is Jane ever happy?

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/12 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

oh the next chapter should be interesting with his mom... everytime I read Husband I think of Where the Heart is and Sister Husband... LOL .. I am glad that they have mended their relationship enough for Leighanne to be there for when he would need the support, with his mother.



Author's Response: This chapter came after the first cruise lol. So after seeing Nick and Leighanne dancing and having fun together at the deck parties, it inspired me to write their relationship as closer than I probably would've written it before. Any chapter featuring Jane is interesting lol.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

It's really nice to read Nick and Leighanne in this light! And oooh shit, Mama Carter's here!! >:(



Author's Response: I wrote this chapter after the cruise, it put their relationship into a different perspective for me. It made me wonder if Nick after he got his act together, started realizing she's not the devil lol. Cause at one point he hated her so much he was calling her "Yoko" in front of fans. Like on Masquerade Night he took Leighanne's hand and the two danced together on the upper deck, both were having fun and it was really cute.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 05:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Loved this chapter, even though it was a sad one (haha, who am I kidding? We both know I like the sad ones best!). I could feel Nick's sense of panic when he blanked out in the middle of the interview. I liked how you ended that scene, with him talking about the guys making everything less frightening. The montage of phone messages in the next scene was a nice way to preview everyone's reactions. I love that he and Leighanne are close; that's really cute. I love how she calls Brian "Husband" out loud in real life too LOL. I felt so sorry for Nick in the end, especially when he had tears in my eyes and told her he was scared. And then... dum dum dum... enter Jane Carter! Reading on!

Author's Response: LOL you loved it BECAUSE it's a sad one, who are you kidding? LOL. I love that you could really feel Nick's fear when he has his memory blackouts. I can only imagine how confusing and terrifying that can be, and it's not easy getting that across in just words. The interview was gonna keep going in that scene, but I loved that line and felt it was a perfect transition. :). And thanks about the messages! That was exactly the purpose of showcasing them the way I did LOL. Nick and Leighanne...I debated about their relationship, it was seeing them on the cruise dancing together that really decided that for me. They can be totally cute together. And she really does say it out loud in real life, it's so bizarre! But cute LOL. Thanks DR! Now I'll put my space suit on...

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 02:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Aww good chapter. I can see all the family reacting just the way you portrayed them, epecially his mom. Should be interesting what she'll have to say in the next chapter. Good job with the fast updating! Hopefully that trend will continue!



Author's Response: Thanks! I am always trying to keep his family accurate and it's not easy lol. Like his mom. I hope I can keep this up too LOL.

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 07:06 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

OMG, he forgot what he was doing on the interview :( This is going to get him fast :( I'm so glad Leighanne was there for him. Can't wait to see what is going to happen with his mom! Thank you so much for the update!!



Author's Response: He can't escape it, as much as he'd like to. :( Actually in terms of the disease, he's at the end of the early stage. It's going to get worse before it gets better. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 06:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Aw, this was so sad. Especially with him spacing out during the interview. You do a great job at showing how scared he is. I can't even imagine...I'm glad that Lauren called him and left a message too. And thats really sweet of Leighanne to come over. Now on to Jane...damn. *shakes head*

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always walking that fine line between scared and over the top. *hugs Nick* I try to imagine, but it has to be terrifying. I figure, even if they broke up, after seeing the thank you to Lauren in Nick's album, she would still call in these circumstances. And I think Leighanne would come by. She's such a sweetheart. I <3 her lol. And yes...now to Jane... Thanks again Sel!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 05:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Awwww :( wow its getting worse fast! I loved Laurens message on the machine, she is so sweet to him. I can so see Nick thinking how he doesn't deserve her. Nick's mom coming should be VERY interesting to see. I loved Leighanne as well, she means well but its annoying how she always calls Brian "Husband"....still love her though. Can't wait for the next update Rose!

Author's Response: Definitely, and though I've been hinting at it, it was time to confirm it :(. Lauren's been awesome to him in real life, so I wanted that to translate in here, even though they're not together and haven't been in almost two years in this. Nick's mom, oh yeah, that's gonna be a story of it's own LOL. I'm glad you loved Leighanne! I love her, but yeah the "Husband" thing always bugged me too. But I try to write her to real life, and she does say that when referring to Brian LOL. Thanks Tracy!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 04:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Thanks for the update. This is so sad. Can't wait for more with Jane...

Author's Response: Thanks :). Jane was supposed to happen this chapter, but at the rate it was going it would've been like 6000 words lmao. So I had to cut it off where I did.