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Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 06:14 am Title: Shower

The ending was sweet. And I'm hoping we find out more about this Claire character. And about the toll this all takes on Nick's body.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 06:10 am Title: Sunset

So first let me say that I am SO glad that you're back and working on this great story again. Seems very different from the original but I'm excited to see how you go about this.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 04:39 am Title: Flashback : Daniel, 1969-70

Glad to see you back! This is a lot different from how I remember How to Save a Life, but I like it a lot so far! Very intriguing. The first chapter was really sad, and the next two were interesting. My only critique (and I'm sorry for being anal - I'm just bringing it up because it bugged me this whole chapter) is just a little historical inaccuracy - AIDS was not around in 1969, at least not known as "AIDS." It wasn't recognized until the early 80s. So even if Daniel had died of AIDS in '69/'70, he wouldn't have known it was AIDS he had. Sorry for being anal - I loved the rest!! :)

Author's Response: haha oops :p

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 03:17 am Title: Flashback : Daniel, 1969-70

I have to say I love this... Its very detailed and wow! I need more... can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 03:10 am Title: Flashback : Daniel, 1969-70

I love this, I really do. Keep it up!

Although I gotta wonder how Nick pulled off the audition. He can't die, but can he age? or reverse age? How'd he manage to look 13 when he met AJ?

Author's Response: You'll see. :)

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 11:09 pm Title: Shower

Awwww how sad but it's intriguing how you're going about this. Poor Nick, people may think it's cool to never die, but he has to see everyone he's ever loved die around him. :(

Reviewer: summer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 10:42 pm Title: Sunset

Aww yay, you're back! I just posted about your How To Save  A Life fic on the boards this morning. This one seems interesting and already has my attention. Can't wait to read more. :)



Author's Response: That's so funny you were just posting about it. I've been working on HTSAL for a long time but I couldn't quite get it to go where I wanted to the way that it was. I think the key to the plot's been fixed though and Time Watcher will actually get to be completed. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 10:21 pm Title: Sunset

Great chapter, so he gets to live forever?  Cool!

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 09:57 pm Title: The Sun, by Claire Elizabeth Lawson-Brunner

I'm glad you're still around! A lot of us were afraid you'd gone poof. Interested to see how you've changed things up.

Author's Response: I did poof for awhile. I'm thinking of picking up STDFB3 also.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 09:55 pm Title: The Sun, by Claire Elizabeth Lawson-Brunner

This looks interesting, I look forward to more!