Date: 10/08/10 01:31 am Title: Chapter 46
--Even the room approved of what I was about to do. Or at least that's what I imagined.-- too frickin funny, the room giving her the "green light" heeheehee
--"I'm sorry," he said. "I can't do this tonight."-- aaawww, Trevor.
--"It's not you. It's just..." he trailed off. "It's just that I feel guilty. I mean your parents got these rooms and they flew me out here and I don't feel right doing this knowing that."-- heeheehee, awkward :)
--"I can buy another room," I said meekly. He laughed.-- Oh, BooBoo, you crack me up!
--"How could you?" I asked Kay. Her eyes widened.-- Oh, Brooke... be careful....
--"Noah, she just used you. Just like all the others," I said sadly. "What number was he, Kay? Sixteen? Seventeen by now?"-- OMG, OMG, OMG! I can't believe she just blurted that out :(
--I might feel horrible about it tomorrow, but I would worry about that in the morning.-- there is no "might feel guilty." You definately will, Brooklyn.
Author's Response: Only a sixteen year old would have a silly comment like the green light giving approval. That whole moment was totally awkward. If I was Brooke, I would have been mortfied. And that mortification turned to a little moment of Brooke craziness. Her mouth didn't have a lock on it and Kay got the bullets.
Date: 10/08/10 01:24 am Title: Chapter 45
--"How's your eye?" I asked. It was already turning the odd color that bruises turned as they started the healing process.
"To be honest, I haven't even though about it," he replied. He smiled. "There were too many beautiful things today to distract me."-- aw, Trevor, what a charmer
-- Landon and Brenna were breakdancing (even through slow songs).-- what lil cuties :)
-- OoOoOh.... here come's the 'big' moment... possibly?
Author's Response: LoL I won't ruin it for you..just read on!
Date: 10/08/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 47
Oh no, oh no. Brooke needs to talk to Trevor and get him to see Kay view at least or clue him in. I really hope Kay is ok though, and this will help her tell Leigh what happened to her.
Author's Response: Brooke seriously does need to talk to Trevor. There are some character flaws coming out across the board here (except maybe for Noah, but even he is a little delusional sometimes)
Date: 10/08/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 47
"Is it raining?" he asked drowsily. Peyton ran up. Her face was lit with excitement. This was probably a dream come true for her.
"I NEED A BOAT!" I heard Brenna scream nearby. She scrambled up on top of a chair and was about ready to climb up on the table when Mason grabbed her.
--- After all of that drama these kids made me smile!
''Noah and I whirled around. Dad was heading towards us looking angrier than I had ever seen him. He never got mad at me.
"Do you realize how much damage you caused?" he asked.
"I'm sorry," Noah said. "I--"
"You two were horrible when you were babies and now you're repeating it fifteen years later," dad said. He turned around. "Come with me."
---oh these two.. I thought she would fall… oh NoNo and BooBoo!
''Uncle Brian started to smile, but then he caught a look at my dad's face. He tried (and failed) to adopt a stern posture. He started to laugh. Aunt LeighLeigh covered her mouth but I saw her smile. My eyes widened.
"I think that was a nice end to the evening, right Leigh?" Bri asked.
"We like to go out with a splash," she said.
"But--"
"Baylee and Claudia made a grand entrance about twenty minutes ago. They aren't coming back to the hotel until we're gone," Brian explained.
---Oh Leigh REALLY was smiling????? Oh Boy!
"No fire, all clear, but we need an ambulance on the third floor. Teenage female. Nonresponsive."
Our whole group turned towards the firefighters. I looked around wildly. I didn't see Kayleigh anywhere. I was sure there weren't many teenage females on the third floor.
I turned towards the door, but Brian and Leighanne were already on their way.
Noah wasn't far behind.
All I could think was...
What have I done?''
----NOOOOOOOOOOOO SHE TRIED TO KILL HERSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH BOY… NOW HER PARENTS WILL SEE HER AND KNOW WHAT IT`S GOING ON… OH BOY….. NOW THE STORY WILL BEGIN!
Author's Response: Landon and Brenna are always my comic relief. NoNo and BooBoo ...those two are still dangerous together. Of course Leighanne was smiling! It's all about big entrances and exits after all. :) LoL ah, we'll see if the story is just beginning. Or is it ending? hmm
Date: 10/08/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 47
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! KAYLEIGH!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LoL I think that's the same response I got on the chapter with Brooke and Garrett. haha.
Date: 10/07/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 47
OMG!!!!!!!! Please update soon! I'm dying here.
A couple things: the fact that Noah pulled the fire alarm is hilarious. And lol at Nick freaking out on them. I also loved Landon and Brenna in this chap. Funny stuff :)
Author's Response: I don't want anyone dying! But...I'm not writing anymore until tomorrow. I just survived another thirteen hour day and my bed is very comfy. :) I'm glad you pointed out the funnier points of the chapter...I love that Noah pulled a "Liv" and set the fire alarm. And of course Landon and Brenna...
Date: 10/07/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 47
wow Brooke is going to blame herself poor wonder why Trevor wants to tell ppl maybe he knows someone like Kay i knows she needs help.
on aprilw121 review he never done anything to her he just talk to her and left her
hope Kay is all right but ppl do not blame Brooke or Trevor it is something about this that why Trevor taking it to heart
Author's Response: Oh course Brooke's going to take the blame. The whole thing up there got way out of hand, words were said and not meant...so much angst.
Date: 10/07/10 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 47
No responsive.......Agggghhhhhh what did Trevor do?
Date: 10/07/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 47
OH MY GOD MOREEEE!!!!!!!
Author's Response: TOMORRROWW! LoL
Date: 10/07/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 47
Omg u can't keep leaving chapters like this lol. Super amazingly good. Can't wait for more. Hope Kay will be alright.
Author's Response: But it's SO much fun to do cliffhangers! What's bad is I only have like five notes for the next chappy.
Date: 10/07/10 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 46
Oh I really hope you can update this story soon, i need to know If Noah gets to her. I only hope that this doesn't bow up in her face like some of the hot tempered things Nick has done lol.
Author's Response: There are some days I wish I could just sit and home and write. Today is one of those days, but alas I work 8-5 and then have class 5:30-9. but if you mean soon as in by sometime tomorrow, then I can promise you I can do that. LoL
Date: 10/07/10 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 46
awwwww omg what a gentleman is trevor :)
and kay and nono yeeees and i bet they are in love and kay didn't use him.... She just was to shy and inscecure to admit right????
Hehe i guess i finally need to start reading fallen angel lol
update plzzzzzz
Author's Response: oh you better read fallen angel. LoL you might retract your statement. :)
Date: 10/07/10 11:21 am Title: Chapter 46
Ahh.. I'm a sucker for teenage drama, my teenage years was filled with it :) I understand that Brooke feels jealous, hurt and protective over her brother, but telling Brian and Leigh now will not do anyone any good.
Just hope Noah and Kay had a chance to talk before they got into the hallway, and maybe she opened up a little to him?
And Trevor is a keeper :)
Author's Response: Ah, Team Trevor...I'm feeling it this morning going through all the reviews! I'm a sucker for teenage drama too...I had a little bit of it myelf. And, just to clarify...Brooke's not going to Brian and Leighanne first....mwhahaha
Date: 10/07/10 11:00 am Title: Chapter 46
Nah... eh... wh.. NOO! Brooke, what the hell.. stooop! Oh god, she doesn't know NoNo wasn't a virgin anymore before he even had sex with Kay! She's going to ruin the whole wedding by telling Brian and Leighanne! She can't do that! Oooooh when will you post the next chapter??? If you could see me right now, my eyes are nearly popping out! (Btw, Trevor is soooo sweet. Just thought I couldn't leave him out of my comment)
Author's Response: Lol I know...everyone's tacked Trevor onto at the end when they remember him. I don't know when the next chapter's going to be...this week has been hell. So..just stay tuned. :)
Date: 10/07/10 06:16 am Title: Chapter 46
oh my oh my oh my.so cant wait 4 more
