Date: 10/03/10 06:50 am Title: Chapter 6
ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING WITH ME, JEN? -- JAMES STILL HAS LEIGH!
Date: 10/02/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
wow ok so Howie, Brian, Leighanne are dead, I have a feeling it may not be Ivanka that there is some kind of twist to this, and the killer might be AJ lol.
Author's Response: LoL oh AJ, the fingers are being pointed at you! :) We'll just HAVE to wait and see
Date: 10/01/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
FREAKING SWEET JESUS! GOOD LORD!!! GOOD LORD!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! JAMES! BAYLEE!!! GOOD LORD!!!!
Author's Response: LoL well if it helps, James still has Leigh!
Date: 10/01/10 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oye vey in a half shell!!!!!! How DARE they kill off BSB!!!!!! And their wives!!!!! Were they NOT thinking about their poor kids who'd be left parent-less???
Why do I get the sinking feeling it might be the Brian fan who did this??? *shudders* I mean, Brian's wedding ring finger being cut off ought to be the biggest clue of all here. Howie's wasn't cut off, so obviously the person was pissed with Brian.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I love your theory Lenni! Of course I'd probably prefer my finger being cut off rather than my whole head. But that's just me. :p
Date: 10/01/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay an update,it's to easy for it to be Ivanka and omg at everyone being dead. Howie,Brian and Leighanne,that leaves AJ and Rochelle and Leigh.I still believe it's AJ but now that's it not a game anymore should be interesting to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Yup we're down fifty/fifty on our BSB family! It's totally not a game anymore. Could AJ have gone off the deep end? hmmm Tune in next Friday to see!
Date: 10/01/10 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank your work for all of us for the use of the internet ;D
Date: 10/01/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMFG.................What a chapter......
Jen you are FAB U LOUS.......I can't wait to see how this story plays out...I still still Ivanka is too obvious......but that's just me :)
Author's Response: Oh the chapters are only going to get better now. This was the chapter I've been dying to post. :)
Date: 09/30/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter 5
I love the concept for this, it would be cool if the BSB really did this.
Date: 09/29/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
who wants a BIG comment???
hehehe Here we go!
WTH is happening to AC??? LORD!
'What was even more ridiculous was that the kitchen was closed off by two heavy double doors. Who encloses in a kitchen? Geesh.'' GEESH RULES GUYS!
''Even the tips of her ears turned red.
"Well, you found me," I said. "So you get a prize."
Her eyes widened. She seemed so shy. It was hot. I dug around in my pockets and came out with a copy of The Pendant, autographed by yours truly.'' Aw I would be bright red too! He's a charm.
"I've screamed a couple times," she admitted.
"So have I," I said. "Good luck." SO HAVE I!
''My 'girl-dar' must have been working at full strength. As my eyes adjusted to the dimness, I made out a female shape sitting in a chair. As I stepped closer I realized it was Leighanne.
With a knife through her stomach.
I almost screamed again, but I saw her blink.'' He's ALL about this radar. And Leigh... you surprises moi...
''She smiled, but she didn't say anything. Obviously she was following the rules more than Rochelle.
Imagine that.'' SEE HOW SHE SURPRISES US!
''I slammed onto my stomach and shielded my face. I swear the thing squawked at me. I was sure that it was a vampire bat. The thing was going to suck the last drop of blood out of my body. My gorgeous face that had gotten me a spot on the 21 Hottest People Under 21 was going to be reduced to a shriveled mess and...
"Nick, it's hiding up in the rafters. Just keep looking," Leighanne said patiently.
I looked up. I didn't hear any wings. I slowly stood up.
My eardrums hurt. I was pretty sure all my blood was hiding up there. I just wanted to get the hell out of the kitchen. I didn't know how Leighanne could justsit there.'' hahahah saw his PANIC moment there. His entire life passing by his eyes. WTH with Leigh calm with that thing there????
''So it wasn't the rope or the hammer. It wasn't Leighanne. It wasn't the Hall Coat Closet or the Library.'' It WAS someone.... ahahahah
''Leighanne's brow furrowed. I was pretty sure 'piss' wasn't as bad of a word as 'fuck.' That had gotten me defriended from Twitter.'' OUCH!
''The sixth clue appeared.
Howie Dorough.'' Man...
''I thought back to the actual game board. There was the hall...I had already been there. Same with the kitchen. I knew from the clues that there was a library, but libraries had never interested me''. – I GOT THS ONE!!!! Who read Coast got this! I MISS LIVVY!!!
"I thought you weren't supposed to talk to me until I found the first jump drive," I said with a smile. His mouth formed an 'O.'
"Can you give me a hint?"
Brian made a zipping motion across his lips. He lowered his head back down.'' After he remind Rok, he asks him! DAHM! He talks more than Leigh, just saying.
''I plugged it in. The seventh clue was drum stick.
"Drum sticks?" I said aloud.
"We thought that was funny," Brian said.
"How could you kill someone with drum sticks?" I asked.
"I don't know! It was AJ's idea." That`s my boy! Love this man!
Everyone will say that isn`t the killer! C`mon!
''I snorted. "You're something. Your wife's hanging out in the kitchen with a bat."
Bri's eyes widened. "Is she okay?"
"She's fine. She's in character." She is a dream!
''Bri held up his gigantic ring. I swear that he's going to have crippling arthritis in his finger for lugging that thing around for years.
"I'm taken."
"Trust me, I know." ALL of us thinks that! HA!
''Who was I deny a hug? She might have been scared and needed some Carter comfort. I wrapped my arms around her. When I pulled away she looked kind of dazed.'' I would ask a hug too.. just.. SHHHHHHSSSHHH I would hug another one too....
''I was hoping that she was headed to the kitchen. I had just met one of her family members flapping around in there.
As soon as I was sure she was far enough away, I came out from behind the curtain.
I didn't know where I was going next. The only thing I knew was that I was headed upstairs and as far away from Ivanka as possible.'' ahaha he is running from Ivanka and running for the rules. I put my money that Jen and Justin are laughing so damn hard watching all this!
NEXT!!!! We will miss you JEN!
Author's Response: Thanks Gabby! I'll be back in a couple days! I'm on my computer at work now. Already no internet access at home. :(
Date: 09/29/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am loving this,I am thinking it's AJ as the murderer we shall see but this is so much fun to read
Author's Response: AJ would make a hot murderer, haha. Glad you're having fun writing - I'm loving writing!
Date: 09/29/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
No More Updates.....REALLY!!!!!!!! AGhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........
I love it, only Brian would want to be in the kitchen to eat......like any one can really "eat" there!
Author's Response: Check back Saturday! I promise there will be an update!
Date: 09/29/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Nick really doesn't like ivanka does he lol! I agree with Nick, who could resist a hug? Also.....I like the drumsticks idea too lol that amuses me. It would be funny if Nick was the murderer after all of this....but I got a funny feeling something bad is gonna happen during this game. Loving the story!
Author's Response: Nick's SCARED of Ivanka, lol. I couldn't resist a Nick hug. No way. The drumsticks idea is cute. Only the goobers would think of it. :) I'm having oodles of fun writing this story...but will the fun continue? da da dun
Date: 09/29/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
Gah! How am I supposed to survive with no updates?!!?!?
Hehe. I loved when Nick dove from the bat! I would've too - though I woulda ran out the door thinking fuck the clue - haha.
And Brian...God, if I found him, no one would EVER get into that room! Lmao!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I'm sorry! :( I'm not even sure if I'll have an Only in My Dreams and Fallen Angel update today. :( I love Nick freaking about the bat...of course he handled it better than I would. And I second your thought about Brian. He couldn't escape from me in a locked room, lol
Date: 09/29/10 11:37 am Title: Chapter 4
ohh it's getting good,loving it. I wonder who is the murderer.
Author's Response: I wonder :)
Date: 09/29/10 08:33 am Title: Chapter 4
omg this is sooooooo scary eeeeeeekkk
haha and hides himself for I vanka lol
and the other girl ... Dirty Carter....
Looooooved it :)
btw do you know when the problems with the most rescent will be solved?
Author's Response: MABM was going through on the MR page until yesterday. Now it's stopped. I have no idea when the problem will be solved but now I'm not alone. Even Mare is having the problem I believe. Until then e-mail updates are probably the only way to know when I've updated.
