Date: 09/29/10 03:41 am Title: Chapter 4
I still don't trust Ivanka one bit - lol. But because we all don't trust her, watch it be one of the big-breasted fans - maybe even the Brian fan - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: You SO can't trust the Brian fan! rotfl :)
Date: 09/28/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
''Some of you might say that strategery isn't a word, but I disagree. President Bush used the word. I figured it a President makes up a word it should automatically go in the dictionary.'' go figured why ppl haven't made a Carter Dictionary!
''Rochelle had a rope around her neck and she was swaying in mid-air. Her mouth was open and a thick line of blood dripped down off her face.
I know it was stupid, but the first thing I thought was that AJ was going to kill me.
I ran over. She looked even more grotesque up close.
"Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh--"
She began to laugh.
"Gotcha!" hahahahha I've screamed together! hahah Ro's an artist, so she's at her own environment... sort of... I could see she sitting and playing with her legs waiting for Carter to find the clue.. Loved their 'chat'. About she saying that isn't the one, well, it's true, but... uuuuu
I HAVE A HEART CONDITION! So dramatic!
I wish it would Leighanne too.. DAMN IT!
Dirty mind Carter... good you saw the crazy lady first!
The kitchen.... here we go!!!!
Author's Response: A Carter dictionary would be amusing! I can so see Ro having a great time just 'hanging' around. Nick and her have a great comraderie!
Date: 09/28/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
Go Nick.......this is such a great idea!! love the story!
Author's Response: I'm so totally excited about this story. It's the first one since WTB that I know exactly what's going to happen and I don't think I'll stray too far away from the plan.
Date: 09/28/10 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love NIck's thought process thru this whole thing..its hysterical! He's so fun to write! And another appearance of the Nicky kiosk!! YAY!!!
Author's Response: So far I'm having a VERY easy time writing through Nick's POV. Hopefully I can keep it up!
Date: 09/28/10 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
awwwwwwwwwww love this story soooo much but I would prefer to see Livy as Nick's gf lol I know it doesn't belong the the Coaster Series hehe
and awwwwww Nick gives away prizes I bet he would love to give away more then autographs and stuff if you know what i mean lol
and yes ivanka is scary i shiver everytime I read her name.
update sooooooooooooon thanks :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the series! It's sad, but I feel like Liv is missing whenever I write a story outside of the Coaster realm. :) And you're right...Nick would like to give away more. It's that hot-blooded Carterness in him!
Date: 09/28/10 09:04 am Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm I sense trouble, but its Nick lol trouble always follows him! Loved the star wars reference, Howie amuses me. funny chapter can't wait for more
Author's Response: Oh Nick always equals trouble. That's what I love about it. :) Howie as a Wookie...:)
Date: 09/28/10 08:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Uh oh Nick lol he does look cute in glasses. I agree, howies hands do get around. Love the jokes in this chapter. So funny!
Author's Response: Nick looks HOT in glasses. I love when Howie tickles fans too :)
Date: 09/28/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 3
I totally picture the house from the Everybody video.......LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: haha that was kind of what i was aiming for. Not so 'castle-y' on the outside but completely spooky on the inside!
Date: 09/28/10 02:25 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm enjoying this, can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/28/10 02:00 am Title: Chapter 3
When I say fun I mean all great twists and turns are about to be alot of them I am sure.lol
Author's Response: LoL okay I can agree with you on that one!
Date: 09/28/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 3
So far so good,I am loving it. it's going to be fun to see what happens next. the fun is just getting started.
Author's Response: Oh the fun IS just getting started :) But maybe 'fun' is the wrong word. Hmmm
Date: 09/28/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 3
I think this is my favorite line so far.." I was a walking kiosk." lmaooooo!!!
And look cute..that's a no brainer for YOU Carter!
I'm so loving this story..can't wait for the dramatics I know you have planned!!
Author's Response: Dramatics? Me? Oh hells yes! LoL I love that Nick's a walking kiosk. I would buy from him any day!!
Date: 09/28/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 3
What a cool storyline. Loving it so far! And lol at Howie and the Wookie head. Personally, I find him pretty hilarious. Lol
Author's Response: I think Howie's a hoot! But compared to Nick and Bri he's mild at best. :) Glad you're enjoying!
Date: 09/28/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 3
What a game with those rules, Jen! Congrats!
It's a masquerade, a love parade, so stay with me and kill the night.... hehehe
Comments:
''I personally thought it was all very Matrix-y. BSB didn't mess around.
I glanced over at Leighanne. My money was on her.
I patted my pockets. The guys had loaded me down with all sorts of goodies - stickers, lanyards, autographed pictures. I was a walking kiosk.'' I put my money on Littrells, of course! And the kiosk comment: LOVED! I wouldn't mind to make some purchase at Carter's kiosk... shhh
''Everyone headed up the old creaking stairs. Little bits of dust flew up into the air. The realtor had told me that nobody had lived here for a long time.
She didn't give the reason why.'' SOMEONE DIED THERE, DAMN IT!
''I grinned. I wanted mind bumping into four of the girls in a dark hallway...'' Any comment....
"So we'll be locked in with Brian?" Alyssa asked. I knew she wanted Bri!
"You will," Justin said slowly. "But you'll also be monitored. Jen and I will be up in the control room. We also have a security guard. Since you guys all passed the background checks, I'd assume you aren't going to murder anyone in cold blood." He grinned.
The girls laughed. Well, except for Ivanka. She just snickered.'' Oh the rules.....
''They had their game faces on.''
"Have fun. We'll be watching."
He disappeared up the stairs. I looked around.
My goal was to get clues, look cute, and hand out prizes to the girls if they bumped into me.
I could handle that.
I brushed my shoulder again.
What I couldn't handle was any more spiders.'' They will be first to DIE! LORD!
This Ivanka crazy lady... she is evil!
Clue #1: Rope. Checked!
Author's Response: LoL it's not the rope! :) And you're right...spiders will be the first to die with Carter around!
Date: 09/28/10 12:24 am Title: Chapter 3
I would've screamed even louder if a spider had landed on me - haha. Ivanka is creepiness defined - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
