Date: 01/30/11 03:15 am Title: Chapter 57
Whooot! SEx chapter! About damned time they did it right! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL there was only about fifty chapters in between! :)
Date: 01/30/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 57
Geez, you just made what could have possibly been the typical sex scene into something so unique. Haha. Is it dirty to say that I totally pictured me and Nick? Jesus, that was hot. Your descriptions of Nick are flawless. Right down to his smiles and his laughs. I seriously can just close my eyes and picture him right there. Oh, and kudos on the hands. I always thought he had the most amazing hands ever. I'm so glad, though, that he was so mature in this decision about both girls. It definately wasn't the expected thing to do. Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: He was mature in his decision...but I'm not sure how well that decisions going to work now. Ah, hell, it's still complicated, lol. Anyhoo, where Nick's concerned it's not hard to write sex scenes.
Date: 01/30/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 57
I gotta say that was pretty hot! Nick was shocked to see how she looks now, lol. But I'm glad they got together the sexual tension has been there for awhile now. Like always great update!
Author's Response: The sexual tension had to go away before anything can go forward. 'Nuff said lol
Date: 01/30/11 01:12 am Title: Chapter 56
LOL, he is so crazy about her!
Date: 01/29/11 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 56
Roflmao!!!!!! He SO has the hots for Shay!!! Hehe. I bet even Brian's kinda amused. :)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Bloody noses suck pretty bad too. Trust me, I was reminded of that fact today. Lol.
Date: 01/29/11 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 56
YAY!! made my day and I'm ready to read more! Great job!
Date: 01/29/11 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 56
ah im hooked on this story. i like eagerly check the page every hour to see if you've updated. i love this new shay! and nick cant wait for more!
Date: 01/29/11 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 56
Oh my God! Yes, finally, I was waiting for this! Haha. I love love love Jake and Nick. So much. And I cannot wait to see what happens w/Shay. Awesome updated. :)
Author's Response: LoL I think a lot of people were waiting for this. Maybe. :)
Date: 01/29/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 56
OMG i need another chapter amazing job loved it
Date: 01/29/11 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 56
this is so amazing
Date: 01/29/11 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 56
Great update. How awesome that Jake got Nick off the plane. lol
Author's Response: It's the Carter charm. :) Jake's just as good as his daddy...or better since Nick couldn't get HIMSELF off the plane, lol.
Date: 01/29/11 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 56
Is it possible for Jake to get any cuter? He definitely has the Carter charm batting those baby blues at that poor lady. lol. And Nick is in SO much trouble. I'm so proud of Shay she pushed herself and she got to her goal well almost. Now if only I can do that but I'm just lazy, lol. I can't wait to see what happens at dinner IF they make it.
Have I mentioned how awesome of a writer you are? I love how you portray Nick in your stories, keep up the great work! :)
Author's Response: Nick's human, aka he makes mistakes. This is probably THE hardest story I've written so far. I'm just so torn up the closer I get to the ending. :sigh:
Date: 01/29/11 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 56
Yeah Nick you are in trouble because not too long ago you were happy to be engaged to Lauren and now all of a sudden you want Shay? I hope he makes the right choice.
Marguerite
Author's Response: It's because it's Nick. 31-year-old Nick a.) hates to hurt anybody's feeling b.) still has problems making decisions.
Date: 01/29/11 10:09 am Title: Chapter 55
Oooooo I so cant wait for more. Amazing job
Date: 01/29/11 04:30 am Title: Chapter 55
Aaaw, I loved what he said to her ♥ Can't wait for more!
