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Reviewer: Poster_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

who in their right mind would want to look like paris? I know a lot of people may want to be skinny but if it means looking like her? no thanks.



Author's Response: I know I wouldn't. Maybe Liv Tyler...but not Paris. LoL

Reviewer: Poster_Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

the jumping pixie, little screaming gremlin. man i'm loving this already.



Author's Response: LoL I love trying to think up new descriptions for him. :)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/10 06:43 am Title: Chapter 6

okay im reading this now too! :) how do you keep track of all these stories? you're such a powerhouse



Author's Response: It's no problem keeping track of the stories in my mind :) Unfortunately, I'll probably be slowing almost to a stop in the next week or so. All of my semester projects are due at the same time and I HAVE to get started on them...

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 6

Lmao Nick checking her out. For some reason I couldn't add this to my favorites....but I'm checking most recent every day to see when you update. Loving this story. I also read Seven Days, I gotta review but I love it. I'm gonna actually try reading the coaster series, I just haven't had time since I have been busy with my own fics. Awesome chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, Chaos disabled the favorites. They're trying to figure out the issue some of us have been having with fatal SQL errors. :) I'm glad you enjoyed Seven Days! That's actually the last book in the Coaster Series. :)

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ohh.. Nick bashing Aarons head in, I still feel bad for that poor lightswich on HoC.. :) An old highschool friend of mine had seen that episode on cable, and when I met him this winter he was like.. "Didn't you use to like that Backstreet Boy, the blond one, the one with Paris..? He looks pretty crazy.." :) 

And I see sparks between them, and wonder what will tear them apart. Kinda hope it is Shay that messes things up.. Would be a nice change in fanficland..! 



Author's Response: I love that you feel bad for the lightswitch!!! Crazy Nick is still hot...that's probably wrong, but oh well. :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 6

''The day that this show would get Shay to look like Paris Hilton was the day that I would join N'Sync. I don't mean that in a bad way necessarily. Shay was a curvy, er, fluffy girl. There was no way she'd be able to look like Paris.
Of course, I didn't even want to think about Paris. I had almost bashed Aaron's head in for mentioning her.
I considered her 'dark history.'''
---That would be the day where AJ would take his tattoos off too!


''I had no doubt the show was putting Simmons up in a five-star hotel while the rest of us were bait for Freddy Krueger or Jason to show up.
--- I bet that he was eating grapes and all.... btw, I used to love watch Krueger.. oh boy!


"I do. Boobs are much nicer to look at. I mean, you have a nice set."
She stopped. I stopped. We must have been walking like turtles because everyone had already gone in.
"What did you say?" she said.
I was sure I had a deer-in-the-headlights look on my face.
Sometimes my mouth didn't know when to quit.
This was one of those times.''
--Tell me about it .. it's another Carter thing...



"Er, I don't remember," he said lamely.
"You said I have a nice set," I said. He held up his hands.
"I'm a boob guy. Don't hurt me."
The feminist in me wanted to launch into another speech about sexism. The female in me just wanted to take it as a compliment. I smiled.''
---hahah tell me which guy isn't a boob guy? Yes, Shay, sometimes it's nice to just smile and accept a comment like that.


"That fat white boy had eyes for you when you took off that moomoo," she said.
---Carter drooling....


''I was surrounded by the whole wide world. The stars were shining like little nightlights. I shook out my second blanket and tossed it over me.
As long as I didn't get attacked by bears, snakes, or any other critter, my sleeping situation was going to be just fine.''
----she wouldn't e surrender by a blonde guy too....
I'm loving this story!!!
NEXT!

Author's Response: haha yeah the day AJ takes off his tattoos WILL be the day right? :) I can see R. Simmons eating grapes at a hotel while Shay has to sleep in a rickety chair. Ain't that the way..

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 6

lol at Nick's non-existent mouth filter. They totally like each other, this is a romance story, after all. Thanks for another chapter.

Author's Response: I'm a sucker for a good romance story :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 6

Shay is such a likable, strong character :) Lmao at Nick and the "girls creaming themselves". I died! You do such a great job getting into his head.

Author's Response: LoL I had to put that line in there...it just sounded like something Nickolas would say...

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 6

"I don't see the difference between a crack or boobs spilling out," she said. I smiled.

"I do. Boobs are much nicer to look at. I mean, you have a nice set."

Out of the mouth of Carter! LOL To Funny~

Author's Response: LoL what else would you expect from him? :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hehe way too funny chapter hehe. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh Nick you are boob obsessed. But I guess that is part of your charm. Shay is funny. She just smiled and left him wondering. I want to read more of this. I am so hooked.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Nick is obsessed. LoL I love that Shay's got some 'tude...

Reviewer: silverdiamond99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 08:41 am Title: Chapter 5

I have enjoyed your first five chapters--great characters.



Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 5

I wanna kill Richard Simmons! lol This story's just getting started...

Author's Response: You're not alone. Help Me Help You kill Richard! LoL, sorry but that was my personal favorite line out of the whole chapter. :)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Finally I found some time to respond/review to your new story. It's different than the others but I like it! Lots of humor in it. And I can see some romance coming soon hihi. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I'm glad you found time! It is different, but then again I think people get tired of reading the same old thing. I know I get tired of writing the same old thing! I missed having more humor in my stories. This one's fun. :)

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

amazing job cant wait for more



Author's Response: Thanks!