[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:54 am Title: Chapter Six
I can tell that Adonica likes Kevin after that kiss! glad all is forgiven! great chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:53 am Title: Chapter Five
Kevin had ever right to be mad but I hope he forgives them soon! awesome chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:52 am Title: Chapter Four
Aww poor Kevin they are palying a really mean joke!!! great chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:51 am Title: Chapter Three
that was a great chapter as usual!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:50 am Title: Chapter Two
Aww thats so cute Kevin has a crush ib Adonica! great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:46 am Title: Chapter One
I hope that Kevin will be careful and not get hurt the way he is driving! great chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:45 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Aww I hope that Kevin and her get together!!! great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/04 12:43 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
oh my god that was such a great chapter!!!! update soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/08/04 04:40 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Adonica knows what she should do. She just doesn't want to admit it. Dumb broad... Just kidding. But Alaura's situation is much more delicate. I just can't imagine being so okay if my dude was fathering another baby that wasn't coming from me. I think we'd have a minor situation on our hands. But, I'm glad you updated. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/04 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
ok, i hadn't read this story before, but i'm glad you told me you updated it cuz its GREAT! but i don't want Adonica with Rich, i want her with Kev, cuz Rich is an Arsehole!! And its so kool that Devin is alright with the fact that Alaura is carring AJ's kid but i got a feeling that, that is all about to change, i might be wrong but i just gotta feeling. The chapter when everyone went to the amuzement park had my heart pumping so fast it wasn't funny, i thought something had happened to AJ and Brian, but its so sad that the little boy died. Please update soon and don't wait as long as you did before hehehehehehe :) It really is a great story but so are all your others :)
[Report This]Date: 01/07/04 02:02 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
that was sssssoooooooooooooooooooo goood!!!!! i hope that you update soon! awesome chapter and its about time that Rick wakes up
[Report This]Date: 01/04/04 07:04 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
That really had to hurt Kevin. I mean, liking a girl who likes another guy - damn, right back in high school! Can't wait to see who finally nabs the prize... Even though women shouldn't be looked at as prizes - can we tell I'm not a feminist? Heh.
Author's Response: lol...I have this plannned out til the end. And there is going to be a sequel too!!! lol. (shhh) Anyways, thanks for reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/15/03 07:34 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
great job please please update soon and let keving have her
Author's Response: YAY!!! I got a review!!! *jumps up and down in excitement!!!) ya have no idea how happy I am! lol...you shall see who gets her...wow...I make it sound like tug of war or something! hehe. Thanks for reviewing! I'm going to try to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 01:01 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Dress shopping gives me the willies. Never in my life would I be caught dead in a dress... I mean, it's all tom-boy in this writer. Haha. But, Rich is definitely turning into a...hmm...what's the word? Ah, yes, JACKASS! I really love this story. You're doing fantastically.
[Report This]Date: 11/30/03 05:03 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
great chapter! got confused cuz i read the next one first! ttyl
