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Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/12 03:49 am Title: 8. DOING THE RIGHT THING

Yay. Nice Xmas present haha.

So if there is a crazy killer, who is it? Ugh, so many questions!!

Thanks for the update. :D

Merry Christmas!! :) ♥

Reviewer: steffilu84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/12 04:43 pm Title: 8. DOING THE RIGHT THING

Oh good! I didn't want you to kill him. Just felt wrong. Now I'm curious what Brian got himself involved with. 

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/12 08:51 pm Title: 7. MATTER OF LIFE AND DEATH

No! I don't want Brian to die! :(

And what is up with this coded note. Makes me wonder if it is a suicide. I remember they couldn't find what he cut himself with.

Well, I'll be tuning back looking for updates. Great story so far. ♥

Reviewer: steffilu84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/12 01:28 am Title: 6. OUT OF HAND, OUT OF CONTROL

I am interested to see what happened to Brian and what is going to happen to him. Very mysterious. I can't wait to see where it all leads.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/12 09:02 pm Title: 6. OUT OF HAND, OUT OF CONTROL

Hell of a filler! They can't kill Brian. O.o And I'm pretty sure that Brian will surprise everyone.

Author's Response:

haha, surprise! Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/12 08:23 pm Title: 5. CALCULATIONS, OR: THE ART OF CONVICTION

Wow. It's getting really more and more interesting! And I'm glad Nick decided to help, Frick and Frack forever *_*

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/12 09:25 pm Title: 4. LOST AT MIDNIGHT

I might be selfish but I do hope you will keep up writing this story. It's very unique, original, especially since it's a Brian's story and that's like something really rare those days. lol
It's a challenge, yes, but if you already know where you want to bring the story, then you should try to get it there.

Author's Response:

okay, I'll do my best then :)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/12 08:01 pm Title: 2. SECRETS TO KEEP

wow Brian and a gun!?! what protection did he think he needed?

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/12 01:49 pm Title: 3. SHAMPOO

Mh. pieces here and there let me think that it wasn0t intentional. I've got a theory so let's see if I'm right or wrong.

Good job ^__^

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/12 10:19 pm Title: 2. SECRETS TO KEEP

Wow. This story keeps me wondering and wondering. What is Brian hiding that could have driven him to the point of trying to kill himself?
I love how you have choosen to tell that story, so that we slowly find out the pieces to put the puzzle together.

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/12 06:45 pm Title: 1. REASONS FOR BLAME

ooooooh wow Brian exploding like that is strange. :) keep it up.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/12 03:54 pm Title: 1. REASONS FOR BLAME

So i must say that the summary already had me hooked. This sounds SO good I can't begin to express how I feel about it...but its fantastic. I love a good suspense and haven't read a good one in quite a while...but you've got something here. Hope you continue because it is brilliant so far.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/12 09:58 pm Title: 1. REASONS FOR BLAME

No, I'm not still liking. I'm loving it. =)
I've always believed that Brian had been the one that took harder Kevin's leaving. For all the reasons that Howie listed here.

Great job and I can't wait for the next chap! =)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/12 08:58 am Title: Prologue

Interesting prologue. ^__^ I would love to read more, the world needs more Brian's stories. lol
So, I think you should continue only if you are inspired! =)

Reviewer: Tweetersweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/12 02:14 am Title: Prologue

Yes please 😋