Reviews For Without a Trace
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Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/13 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Three

oooh what is going on. I am defintely invested and need to know what is going on and how these guys link to the boy and what they discovered.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/13 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Three

Oh, shit. Why ain't nobody helping them? I bet they murdered Seth. That, or he was apart of it. Oye vey.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: Alexsgirl_ritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/13 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Three

It's 6:34 pm and I should be going home but instead I stayed for a while to read the 2nd update of the day. I love Jared. He's not like 'I-m the man and I should protect you', Emma told him to run so he ran. I guess, Emma won't be able to board the plane. And Jared would be on his own wondering where the hell should he go. I love this story. I can't wait for more. I don't care if AJ or the other guys aren't in this story. This is a good one. :)

Author's Response: I've kind of explained Jared and his lack of "chivalry" in the chapters following this comment but I figured I'd follow up and say that Jared's lack of ballsiness is kind of why I'm loving writing him. LOL