Date: 03/05/15 10:03 pm Title: An Oasis or a Mirage?
Hmm so interesting that he keeps having these little visions of things he wants. Like for Lauren to be there, then the rabbit because he was hungry. I think due to his head injury, his brain is playing tricks on him. I am really excited about this cabin though because it looks so damn promising.
The thing with Lou doing something to Aaron kind of makes a lot of sense in a way because it would explain a lot of his behavior, especially if something really did happen in real life. It would explain his constant need for attention and his attitude, plus his insecurity. I like that you threw that in there instead of having it had happened to Nick. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I like playing with the psychological aspect of my characters in my stories, as you know. Glad you caught it in this one. I'm excited about the cabin too. You SHOULD be excited! LOL. With Lou that was exactly my thoughts. I honestly don't think Lou really "tried" the way he did with later boybands with our Boys. Mainly because they were his first attempt at a group to make him rich. Everything was new and had to be on point. Aaron however was easy prey cause he wasn't the first and he was solo. Plus it'd explain a lot of his behavior (including a LOT of stories about him hooking up with 15-17 year olds). Also, Nick's too obvious. Thanks Tracy!