[Report This]Date: 01/29/04 05:30 am Title: Inside Your Heart
Wow...such a wonderful chapter. Sorry it takes me so long to read your chapters! Gonna read a few tonight to catch up! ANyways, it is so sweet that they planned a surprise shower for Yasmine!!! And that girl not knowing who they were and NIck hitting on her..lol...then she blew him off. HILARIOUS! I cannot believe Kelvin though! He is so up to no good!!! And he looks like Aje? *shudders* thats freaky! HOpefully Yas will catch on to him or someone will find their conversation that was recorded!Really great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/12/04 04:42 am Title: Trouble In Paradise
Aww...how sweet that Yasmine is going to have a girl! And she felt it kicking! It's great that Nick can joke around and make her smile/brighten her mood. Kelvin though...he is a sleaze and needs to back off and leave her alone. He's already done enough damage! Great chapter. I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 01/08/04 04:46 am Title: A Voice Within
Dude, the chick told him to go get the stupid package. Ain't his fault that Mr. Psycho was waiting in the bathroom. *shivers* Ain't that I creepy little image? I really like your story, though. Definitely emotional on all accounts.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/04 08:41 pm Title: A Voice Within
ok first off, the chapter A Voice Within has been added and extra 5 times, like its chapters 17 - 22... and i love this story but why won't Kelvin leave her alone? i know he thinks he Loves her and she will love him but to Rape her 2 times, thats just plain wrong, Poor Yas, i hope she will be able to get through this, PLEASE DON'T KILL HER OFF, DON'T MAKE HER KILL HER SELF OK PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! Oh and please update soon :)
[Report This]Date: 01/06/04 02:54 pm Title: A Silent Content
wow, i just read your story in one night and its a lot to take in. YOUR STORY IS BRILLANT, AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE, I HAVEN'T READ ANYTHING LIKE IT BEFORE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. One thing please make it a happy ending... and make Nick and AJ find out that Kelvin did it before he takes Yassmine and Faith... PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE... hehe... Cheers...
[Report This]Date: 01/06/04 02:54 pm Title: A Silent Content
wow, i just read your story in one night and its a lot to take in. YOUR STORY IS BRILLANT, AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE, I HAVEN'T READ ANYTHING LIKE IT BEFORE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. One thing please make it a happy ending... and make Nick and AJ find out that Kelvin did it before he takes Yassmine and Faith... PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE... hehe... Cheers...
[Report This]Date: 01/05/04 06:57 am Title: Diverting Hearts
Great chapter...and so exciting that Aje got to see the baby on the ultrasound! The letter from K.C was creepy! Woah...if I got something like that, I'd be locking my doors and sleeping with the lights on!!! And the kiss that Yasmine pestered A.J. for... woah! AJ knows he loved it! Sounds like Yas has some serious feelings for him! Loving the story!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/04/04 10:07 pm Title: Mixed Emotions
Another great chapter though...talk about bad timing though when Nick decided to get out of the car. Sounds like Aje wasn't ready to admit his feelings to her anyways though! I'm glad that Nick and Yas sorted out their feelings and stuff after Nicky pissed her off! Great job. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/04/04 09:49 pm Title: Falling Deeper
Wow...such a great chapter! So Yasmine likes Nick...Nick likes Yasmine (and has for awhile, I'm thinking, from earlier chapters) A.J. likes Yasmine more than he will admit, but Yasmine doesn't like him in that way. This complicates things! And Kelvin is up to no good...yikes! Wonderful job...can't wait to read on!
[Report This]Date: 01/04/04 05:40 am Title: Dreams Come True
Wow...very emotional chapter. I'm guessing that this Kelvin is the rapist? I wonder if he is one of the ones in the lineup that the police wanted Yasmine to check out...then again, I doubt it if all of this happened in the same day. Poor Yasmine keeps having anxiety attacks too...and wants to be treated like she always has. I am completely loving the story!!! You're a very talented writer.
[Report This]Date: 01/04/04 03:57 am Title: An Apparent Touch
Very great chapter! Poor Yasmine though...she seemed to be doing fine, and then to have an attack. A.J. must have felt so hurt when she told him that momentarily, he reminded her of her attacker. How aweosme though that they all went to see Yasmine sing! It sounds like she is pretty amazing, and them joking with Nick that she should replace him was humorous! Great job. Can't wait to read on!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/30/03 10:45 pm Title: A Growing Affection
Cute chapter. It sounds like A.J. is dealing with Yasmine's rape harder than she is. It's good that the rehab is helping, and it wounds like she is planning on keeping her baby. Frog legs, though? ewww...lol. Anyways, loving this story. Can't wait to read what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 12/30/03 10:05 pm Title: A Step Back
Poor Yasmine...I wonder what she will do about the pregnancy...adoption, carry through and keep the baby, abortion. I couldn't imagine bearing a rapists child. The Howie jokes were cute....very funny. hehe. It was a good way to add some humor in to the story! Great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/03 10:41 pm Title: Healing Soul
Awww...poor Yasmine. I wonder how she'll react when she finds she is pregnant...and what she will do? Guess I gotta read the next chapter! lol. She seemds to be in deinal with things..or trying to be anyways. Great job and can't wait to read more!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/18/03 06:59 am Title: Distilled Reality
Wow...very emotional and powerful. I feel so bad for Yasmine. Poor girl...and A.J. feeling guilty for it. It is going to be an emotional roller coaster for all of them, especialy Yasmine and A.J, I have a feeling. I really am loving this! Can't wait to read on!
