[Report This]Date: 03/22/05 11:51 pm Title: 1
Awwww such a cute chapter. Nick and Kevin are adorable. And I'm loving AJ and Brian too, they are so funny. Great job mare :)
Author's Response: Thanks Maria! :D
[Report This]Date: 03/22/05 03:37 am Title: 6
Love the story, love the suspence and many other things. Keep updating!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks A.W :D
[Report This]Date: 03/20/05 05:02 am Title: 6
OMG! What's with this FREAK!?!?! Why's he pin-pointing Kevin? Why'd he toy with 'em with that last girl, huh? WTF is going through this Bastard's mind? Why is he killin' the kids? He ain't gonna go after poor, lil, innocent, naive Nicky, is he? He damned well better not! I'ma castrate the f*cking Bastard! Also, c'n you PLEASE update Tuesday isntead of Wednesday? I'm leaving Wednesday night for my Uncles....UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! ~Lenni~ P.S. Happy Easter!!!
Author's Response: Whoa! So passionate. I take that as a big compliment Lenni. Thanks so much! I updated early just for you! Enjoy and Happy Easter!
[Report This]Date: 03/20/05 02:29 am Title: 6
The killer is getting personal with Kevin. Way too freaking personal. I've seen enough C.S.I. and S.V.U. to know that. And him moving home for awhile? Not exactly the smartest move, considering Nick's a little itty bitty that the killer can fantasize over.
Author's Response: aww let's see what happens *she says as if she has no clue what will happen next lol* ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/19/05 03:22 am Title: 6
Love the story....I hope Kevin gets this psycho....and he better not go near Nicky. How cute are Nicky and Kevin? *squee* too cute. I love Nicky lol....too adorable for his own good.
Author's Response: I know Kevin and NIck too adorable. lol I agree with the squee! Thanks :D
[Report This]Date: 03/19/05 01:11 am Title: 6
Aww! Poor little girl! It makes me so sad to read stuff like this. I'm happy though that you updated today! I'm missing my weekly fix of the FBI with Numb3s the TV show because of stupid basketball! *pout* Anyways, as always, can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: I LOVE that show! i'm addicted in fact that's what gave me the idea for this one! shhh don't tell anybody though. hehehe
[Report This]Date: 03/18/05 06:27 pm Title: 6
so did you have the little girl disapear from gymnastics since i just got home from gymnastics lol you are so evil but i love how emotionhusband number one gets great job
Author's Response: aww that's a neat coincidence ;)
and i'm not evil i'm an 0-;) how many emotionhusbands do you have>? lol
[Report This]Date: 03/18/05 12:30 am Title: 5
Killer's looking to hook up with Kevvy-Boy... Missing one my ass, he's scoping out prospective little boys from Kevin's family... But that's just an assumption. And, how freaking precious is Nicky? *collective sigh of cuteness*
Author's Response: aww I know Nicky is too cute lol Thanks I think he does work much better as an 8 year old than a ten year old. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/17/05 12:42 pm Title: 5
Another one of those days! I think I know what's going to happen and I'm not liking it! Please update soon! I love this story soooo much! As I've said, my life's ambition lies within the lines of this story. FBI meets CSI. Can't wait til Friday! Please keep little Nicky safe.
Author's Response: Aww So do you plan on going into detective work? How cool! And thanks i'm glad you are enjoying this! :D
[Report This]Date: 03/17/05 03:26 am Title: 5
great job but you didnt email me telling me you updated!
Author's Response: oopsies! Thanks for reminding me lol
[Report This]Date: 03/15/05 05:16 am Title: 4
Dude! Can't you updated Wednesday night? PLEASE!?!?! I might not be "un-loppy" by Friday night - I'm getting my wisdom teeth pulled Thursday - I might be outta sorts 4 a bit. I LOVE this fic!
UPDATE A.S.A.P.!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: aww maybe it'll be fun for you to read a new chapter while you're loopy?
[Report This]Date: 03/14/05 04:58 am Title: 4
such an excellent chapter i really enjoyed reading it you are so good and creatvie and i love my kevvy and ajs such a brat and so aj great job
Author's Response: Aj great job? lol I'll pass that along next time I see him. Or i'll tell KEvin to pass it along. ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/13/05 10:09 pm Title: 4
First off, sorry for harping on your other chapter. I didn't realize that you had other words getting edited by an editor. That's why I absolutely hate giving advice on stories, because I'm afraid that people will take it wrong. So, I'm sorry on the first account. And, second, I'm amazed how you can take the seriousness of the first portion of a chapter and turn it to complete hysterics by the end. Describing the five children gave me heebie-jeebies. That's why I'm a little nervous about going into Pediatric Nursing. Dead kids just make me so sad sometimes, because they had their whole lives ahead of them, and to be brutally taken? *shudder* And the Precious Moments figurines? I love PM and that's just a little creepy. But AJ and Howie? Pure hysterics. I loved that part of the story so much and I was honestly laughing. Such a little punk-ass AJ is.
Author's Response: It's okay no worries and yes I think with a story like this it's important to blend comedy with the sadness so there will be a lot of nice family chapters to balance out the FBI ones. A lot of times both scenes wil be in the same chapter.
Dead kis never a fun site. I went to a child's funeral today. Nothing is harder.
[Report This]Date: 03/13/05 02:48 pm Title: 4
All Kev has to say is smoking smells and girls don't like the smell of stale cigarrettes on guys it's soooo unattractive! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: If only it was that easy right? Thanks Roxy!
[Report This]Date: 03/12/05 05:55 pm Title: 3
I'm speechless. You created such great characters already, so early on in the story. It's great. I love this story and can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: thanks Roxy! I have had a bad bad day and really needed to hear that. :) another update tomorrow lol
