Date: 05/21/06 02:20 pm Title: Part One
Hi there. Sinc eyou were so kind to review my story, I'll be doing it for you too. ha!
What else can I say that I definitely like it. I still can't figure out thoough if she wants Nick or Aaron... My humble opinion: GO FOR NICK!!!
great job, hope you update soon.
Author's Response: I don't know who I'm having her go for just yet. You'll just have to wait and see! lol. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05/19/06 09:48 pm Title: Part Four
Usually, I don't read these types of stories. Mostly because the writers have a poor sense of grammar and some of the meaning of the story seems to get lost behind the lack of description. But what you have here is absolutely mesmerizing. You're a wonderful writer. Absolutely wonderful... Though, leaving all these horny women on the verge of an explosion might be a bad idea? Haha.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. Hehe. I know what you mean about the whole lack of description thing, along with the grammar AND spelling of course! I'll be sure to get the rest of this written and posted soon! :-D
[Report This]Date: 05/19/06 09:36 pm Title: Part Four
Usually, I don't read these types of stories. Mostly because the writers have a poor sense of grammar and some of the meaning of the story seems to get lost behind the lack of description. But what you have here is absolutely mesmerizing. You're a wonderful writer. Absolutely wonderful... Though, leaving all these horny women on the verge of an explosion might be a bad idea? Haha.
[Report This]Date: 05/19/06 05:13 am Title: Part Four
*clears throat*
You kinda left a gal hanging... Er, not really *hanging*, more... Well, y'know. *blush*
Hope you update soon. Thisisreallyhotyanno?
Author's Response: WOOOOOH! lol. and so I've been told! hehe, I'll update soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/19/06 04:34 am Title: Part Four
HEY!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: lol, I'm working on it! It just I have 19 fics going, AND my personal computer crashed so I don't have much time on the family one! :-( That was my inspiration back on Nick's birthday! :-D
