Date: 02/26/04 12:46 am Title: Ellena's Cross
please update soon, great chapter !!!!
Date: 02/05/04 02:26 am Title: Ellena's Cross
Ahhhh...A-S kick Eric while youre over there for me will you.He is really getting on my nerves.I cant belive I waited so long to read this.This is and awsome story.Continue pleaz!
Date: 01/06/04 03:42 am Title: Breakthrough
aww man, you left it there... bugger!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)
Date: 12/27/03 01:45 pm Title: Kevin, The Incredible Hulk Wannabe
This story is amazing, i love it... please continue... and update asap!!! Cheers K*T*B*S*P*A
Date: 12/13/03 06:15 am Title: Kevin, The Incredible Hulk Wannabe
great job i hate ken
Date: 12/13/03 05:32 am Title: Gaining Trust
such a great job but damn brian is a jerk
Date: 12/11/03 07:22 am Title: Gaining Trust
I realy love the story!! I would only suggest longer chapters but if that will mean I have to wait longer for a post forget it. GREAT story
Date: 12/08/03 06:20 am Title: Gaining Trust
Hi, I love this story! But I have read it before, I am not sure where but I think it was fanfiction.net. I remember the ending, please port it soon
Date: 12/04/03 03:04 am Title: Gaining Trust
Can we say asshole? Jezz, Brian needs to lighten up. Ellena ain't a bad girl. Damn, damn, damn. More please!
Date: 11/25/03 06:53 am Title: Confession
great chapters i hope you update soon
Date: 11/25/03 05:50 am Title: Twinkle, Twinkle Pop Star
that was sweet
Date: 11/25/03 05:36 am Title: Ken and Barbie Dahl's
im loving how this story is coming great job
Date: 11/25/03 05:05 am Title: A Glimpse
that was awesome i totally know the whole cheerleader deal since i am one and no one loves us
Author's Response: Hi Anita,
Thanks for your reviews. I was also a cheerleader in school - the capatain actually! Keep reading - I love to hear from you!
Autumn
Date: 11/19/03 02:54 am Title: Fairy Tales
Can't imagine Brian being the hard-ass about Kevin's relationship, but he does have that holier-than-thou appeal. Go figure. Great chapter. I love Ellena and Kevin. They're cute together.
Date: 10/28/03 08:26 pm Title: Fates Collide
Ok, this story is worth the read if only for the 'Kevin plays with Barbies' scene. You had me laughing out loud! Excellent storytelling, Will watch eagerly for updates.
Author's Response: Hi louise,
Thank you for your review. I based the character of Lacey on my two neices. I am trying to update this story regularly on Monday and Thursday mornings. Autumn