[Report This]Date: 10/28/03 08:21 pm Title: Fates Collide
This story is so unusual! I like the characters, a lot of suspense. It sounds like you really get into their heads. Good job, will be waiting for more!
Author's Response: Hi Deanna, Thanks for your kind words. I really worked hard on this story and I'm glad you enjoy it. Autumn
[Report This]Date: 10/21/03 04:54 am Title: Pure Innocence
I really enjoy this story, but can I make one suggestion? I think you should separate your paragraphs with spaces so the readers don't get confused. It's a little annoying to see one huge paragraph, but that's all I have to say about that! Your story-line is quite good and the interaction between the characters is quite sweet. I suppose I can imagine Kevin dancing in an apartment hall with a little girl singing about Grilled Cheese. Keep up the great work! I'm amazed!
Author's Response: Hi Anastacia,
I have been working on the formatting of my sotries but it seems like it doesn't get through when i post it. Still working on it though - thanx for the tip!
Autumn
[Report This]Date: 10/20/03 03:17 am Title: Intrigue
I love this story, I read it at fanfiction.net, and I was wondering if you could email me chapter 2 cause it is a little messed up on this site, and you should post your stories at http://www.fiction-girl.org/archives it is the same as ff.net.. oh and my email is melissamcgregor@bigpond.com
Author's Response: Hi melissa, I received your email and responded to it. Do you have everything you wanted. Please email and let me know if I can help you out. Autumn
[Report This]Date: 09/20/03 08:41 pm Title: Ken and Barbie Dahl's
I really like this story. I just think you need to separate your paragraphs better. Other than that, it's a great plot. One of the most original. I'm really wondering how Ellena's brother connects into all the missing pieces.
