Date: 10/23/08 04:37 pm Title: Getting Down To Business
You are twisted...then again I read the begining a while back and maybe you mentioned that he had a girlfriend with that name. I wouldn't trust her either! Nick is a dork for going in there and I'm just waiting to see what twists you got going... *Biting nails, runs to read next chapter*
Author's Response: Yeah...AJ mentioned it in his Nickalex message to Nick that he and Sharon broke up. Keep biting those nails...the action and sespense is looooong from over!
Date: 06/25/08 02:11 pm Title: Getting Down To Business
Oh yah... and CURSE STUBBORN NICK!! Lol.
Author's Response: you gotta love him, though!!
Date: 06/25/08 02:11 pm Title: Getting Down To Business
Okay, I sooo had a feeling that this Sharon was the same Sharon I was thinking it was, but I wanted to continue on in the story before I said/asked anything. Damn bizzle. She seemed suspicious at first, but with the way you write, you make it hard to figure out who's side she's on. Damnit Kristal!! Lol. Just keeding. Off to read the next chapter. :]
Author's Response: LMAO. It was supposed to be a bit confusing, a lot of people forgot about Sharon being mentioned before...that's why it worked as a good twist. So, I guess you are liking the story, huh? Well, thanks for all the reviews, hun!
Author's Response: LMAO. It was supposed to be a bit confusing, a lot of people forgot about Sharon being mentioned before...that's why it worked as a good twist. So, I guess you are liking the story, huh? Well, thanks for all the reviews, hun!
Date: 06/07/08 07:08 am Title: Getting Down To Business
WHOA! Good use of foreshadowing in earlier chapters, Kristal. I totally forgot that AJ mentioned to Nick in an e-mail that he'd broken up with a Sharon! Hopefully the whole rescue mission goes well..
Author's Response: the foreshadow was quite by accident, lol. you'll have to read on and see how the rescue goes.
Date: 04/28/08 02:35 am Title: Getting Down To Business
Nice plan. The ex-fiance thing was a bit of a shocker, but a good twist. I just hope they can get to the guys! Great chappie!
Author's Response: I like twists. Can you tell? Hmmm. Maybe we need a few more. anyways, thanks, again, for reading.
Date: 04/14/08 03:40 am Title: Getting Down To Business
Hopefully this Sharon chick really is out to help. If not...she needs to DIE DIE DIE!!!
Author's Response: LMAO. I don't even know how to respond to that...lol. Is it getting any more twisted for you? Oh, boy...I have some ideas for the chapters to come! I can't even process all the thoughts I have. Maybe I watch too many action movies.
Date: 04/13/08 06:16 am Title: Getting Down To Business
awesome update! i really hope everything goes okay, and no one gets hurt! i cant believe sharon used to be aj's ex!... update soon!
Author's Response: I have the next chappie ready to go up and will probably update today sometime. ;-) I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for always reading!
Date: 04/12/08 11:41 pm Title: Getting Down To Business
update soon
Author's Response: okay ;-)
Date: 04/12/08 08:13 pm Title: Getting Down To Business
Wait so how many are actually going into the building?!?!? AND SHE'S AJ's EX?!?!?! Talk about a twist! I don't know if I trust her now...and how can you end it there?! lol I hope you update soon!! Pretty please :-)
Author's Response: yeah. that was an unplanned twist, lol. back in th de-coded chapter, in AJ's message to Nick, he mentioned breaking up with Sharon. I just noticed that TODAY! LMAO. I had already named the leader of the fan attack Sharon so the I was like "hmmmm, this totaly reads 'unexpected twist'." roflmao. I'm a dork...I know.
I am working on the next chappie now...it should be up soon!
Date: 04/12/08 07:28 pm Title: Getting Down To Business
nicky to the rescue!
Author's Response: lol...MAYBE! who knows what might happen though. do you think it's going to be that predictable? or maybe there's another twist! hmmmmmm.
