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Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/08 05:42 am Title: Explosive

Oh no you don't.....you better freaking let me know if they got out of the freaking warehouse!!!!! You better not leave me hanging!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL....aaaaaw, are you upset with me too? If you wanted them to be saved at the last minute, than you are welcome to assume that that is what happened. I have no plans of a sequal, so you can't be wrong! Hey...at least he finally confessed, to her. Thanks for being a loyal reader and for all the feedback. *MUAH*

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/08 07:07 pm Title: Explosive

WHAT? How the fuck do you end it like THAT? Will there be a sequel? Or can we just assume that they didn't make it? That is SUCH a cruel ending Kristal!

Author's Response: Uhoh...Mel thinks I was cruel! I don't plan on there being a sequal...but then again, who knows. You may assume that they didn't make it or that the Mexican guys came in and saved the day, at the last minute...your choice!!! Thanks for reading, Mel, I really appreciate and enjoyed the reviews you have left!

Reviewer: DragonStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/08 05:10 am Title: Explosive

I meant to add though that I am relieved that they BOTH finally know how he feels about her -- and that she feels the same way(although that was a bit obvious to me lol)!

Just so you didn't think I was being entirely negative about the ending. I did like some of it! ;)



Author's Response: LOL...thanks for adding that. I was hoping them confessing thier love would help outway not knowing if they got out. :-) I'm glad it wasn't too disappointing for you.

Reviewer: DragonStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/08 05:08 am Title: Explosive

:O That's such a torturous ending!!!

I just started reading this story a few days ago, and it's really good!

But that ending, that's just mean! :P I wanna know what happens after that!



Author's Response: Aw, well, thank you so very much for deciding to read. I am really happy that you liked it. I know the ending was kind of mean...but at least he told her! I'm mostly a romance writter, so this was a bit different than what I usually write and I am happy that you liked how it turned out. Thanks for the review, too.

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/08 06:41 pm Title: Explosive

ooh your evil if you leave it like that. evil evil evil. ahh. at least she finally knows. i can live with that i guess. great story!

Author's Response: Aaaw, do you really think I'm evil? LOL. I figured everyone would be all giddy and happy that he finally confessed, to her, his love. I am glad you liked the story. Thanks for all your feedback, along the way, it's much appreciated!

Reviewer: Nikki P Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/08 06:08 pm Title: Explosive

Well do they make it out in some way? Anyway? What happened to the group that was following Nick to protect him??

But at least the boy FINALLY told her that he loved her-took long enough! LOL Poor AJ though for having to sit in on their make out session



Author's Response: They just might have made it out...perhaps the Mexican group came in, in just the knick of time. Then again, maybe not. LOL. It takes a man's life being in danger, for him to fess up to loving her...typical ain't it? AJ probably would have hit Nick upside the head, if his hands weren't tied! Thanks for reading and for all your reviews...I have really appreciated it!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/08 02:18 pm Title: Explosive

That cannot be the end, damnit! You lil...:o( I mean, I dont know if they got free just on time....or if they became body part stew with the explosives went off...or what. But at least Nick finally told Jordan how he feels. THat, in itself, is something to be happy about. Awesome ending. I loved this one from beginning to end! You rock!!!

Author's Response: Aaaaw, thanks so much, Ahsley! I appreciate you reading this story and constantly giving me feedback. I know the ending threw everyone for a loop and hope you all aren't too mad! Thanks again for everything!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/08 07:45 am Title: Explosive

so i guess we assume they die? lol. loved it!

Author's Response: lmao...nobody knows! Thanks for reading, hun, I have enjoyed having you as a regular reader/reviewer! *muah* I am really happy that you liked it.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/08 07:20 am Title: Explosive

WTF?! Are you shitting me Kristal?! You're freaking kidding me, aren't you?! I'm getting Punk'd huh?! Just because it's taking me an extremely long time to get my AIM back, huh? IS THIS YOUR PAYBACK?!? This ending was unfair, and you know it!! :( How the hell can you end it like this?! We don't even know if they get to live or die... all I know is that if they were to die, Nick and Jordan would die happy campers because they'd die together, with their love for each other confessed, and poor AJ dies alone with the two lovebirds. *shakes head* You are soooo mean!! You're right, I do hate you and will not talk to you for the rest of this week because of this ending...

Infact, I will NOT talk to you until I see a sequel missy!!



Author's Response: I almost put it in the ending notes...but there is not going to be a sequal...sorry. :-( At least I know you must have really enjoyed the story, to be so mad at me, right? *sniffles* I hope you talk to me again soon, Rebby...you know I luv ya! Thanks so much for sticking with the atory and sending me awesome feedback! *muah*