Date: 10/26/08 02:10 pm Title: The Warehouse
Holy crap....they get there on time, (that we know of) and the fucker gives Nick a concussion! lmao. Great! AJ and Nick definitely have a unique relationship. I love it. And they stole a car...sweet!!! haha.
Author's Response: LMAO...yeah AJ and Nick have a unique relationship...that's cuz they're both 'special' HAHA!!!
Date: 10/26/08 07:45 am Title: Explosive
so i guess we assume they die? lol. loved it!
Author's Response: lmao...nobody knows! Thanks for reading, hun, I have enjoyed having you as a regular reader/reviewer! *muah* I am really happy that you liked it.
Date: 10/26/08 07:20 am Title: Explosive
WTF?! Are you shitting me Kristal?! You're freaking kidding me, aren't you?! I'm getting Punk'd huh?! Just because it's taking me an extremely long time to get my AIM back, huh? IS THIS YOUR PAYBACK?!? This ending was unfair, and you know it!! :( How the hell can you end it like this?! We don't even know if they get to live or die... all I know is that if they were to die, Nick and Jordan would die happy campers because they'd die together, with their love for each other confessed, and poor AJ dies alone with the two lovebirds. *shakes head* You are soooo mean!! You're right, I do hate you and will not talk to you for the rest of this week because of this ending...
Infact, I will NOT talk to you until I see a sequel missy!!
Author's Response: I almost put it in the ending notes...but there is not going to be a sequal...sorry. :-( At least I know you must have really enjoyed the story, to be so mad at me, right? *sniffles* I hope you talk to me again soon, Rebby...you know I luv ya! Thanks so much for sticking with the atory and sending me awesome feedback! *muah*
Date: 10/24/08 11:28 am Title: The Warehouse
What the fizzuck Kristal? Are you freaking serious?! I can't believe you're gonna end it like that, what the hell? Lol. And what do you mean there's only one chapter left? Are you crazy?! Lol. Man, I don't want the story to end so soon, but I can't wait to read the last installment!! And you wanna know something funny? I was just thinking about your story tonight, wondering when you were gonna update it and what the update would consist of because I was watching Live Free Or Die Hard tonight. :)
Author's Response: roflmao...you are gonna be sooooooooo mad at me! I am going to try having the update up sometime this weekend but I think you all are going to be a little less than satisfied. *muah ha ha ha!!* I love that movie, by the way...I like the whole series...Bruce Wiliis is awesome! Thanks fro the review, Rebby!
Date: 10/24/08 09:29 am Title: The Warehouse
I'm laughing out loud like a fool at 1 in the morning with the 'goose sir...whatever thingie' and AJ saying 'WTF' I can see his face. Oh yeah now the two BSB's are bad boys...I like it. So...you are finsihing this in the next chapter...and I can't wait to see what twist you bring to it this time. OH NO...I hope you finish tomorrow. I wont chat until you do... *Snickers* love ya
Author's Response: I was laughing myself, everytime I was writting in the Dr. Suess parts. My girl loves Dr. Suess almost as much as she loves Dora! That's how it got used in the story, to begin with. I needed something that hasn't been used that was cruel on some leval. I figured it was kinda cruel because what adult (that doesnt have kids) has Dr. Suess memorized? It made them have to really think. I wonder if it hurt? Anywho...yes...they are being bad boys...Nick is finally growing balls! lmao. I'll try to update soon.
Date: 10/24/08 09:21 am Title: Pearl's
A place that sells green eggs and ham? Hum...I think i've seriously heard of that before, then again I did work and live in Hollywood where anything is possible. These guys are in for some serious action. I wont be able to sleep till I read it all...I just can't.
Author's Response: I've served graan eggs and ham at a few different restaraunts that I've worked at...usually only for St Patricks Day. Yep, you're right, there is more action to come!
Date: 10/24/08 09:13 am Title: Safe Deposit
Poor guys reciting Dr Suess, the word was so obvious. Of course I would have never got it, especially if one of them was with me. Oh man what the hell was in the box woman? Ok...I can't stop reading so I'm off to find out. good chaps girl.
Author's Response: The Dr. Suess thing is pretty messed up, huh? Can you tell I have a 2 yr old? I hope you like what's coming next!
Date: 10/24/08 09:03 am Title: The Airport
Lord jesus you've gone all action/suspense movie on me. wow that was a turn there...that I didn't see coming. Actually I haven't seen most of the twists in this story coming. Once again I'm not sure how the hell I stopped reading it.
Author's Response: This whole action/suspense thing is fairly new to me, so I am happy to see people liking it. I am thrilled that it is keeping you on your toes and that you decided to finally read it!!
Date: 10/24/08 08:57 am Title: Thorough Explination
Ok...all I have to say is two words WOW/TWISTED! Wait never mind cause I had to laugh at 'this is a cluster fuck' LOL
Author's Response: You always say that I have a twisted mind, so this shouldn't have come as such a surprise! Oh, and I like the phrase 'cluster fuck' and my mother used to get onto me about saying it so much! HAHA! I'm glad you're still liking the story!
Date: 10/24/08 08:51 am Title: Trouble Is
That was different showing us how they must really be in the studio, I can see my howie and your AJ bickering at each other. Nice how they let him express his emotions through the song. I loved his little talk with Brian about love. Very cute! Of course the cuteness is cut off by a gut wrenching feeling from NIck and her brother appearing at his door. *Scowls*
Author's Response: Yeah...sorry about that ending, but it couldn't all be sugar and sweetness. I am happy that you liked the studio glimpse and the chat with Brian. I thought it was important to show how his life has changed, now that he's out of the WPP. *MUAH* Don't scowl, you know you luv me!
Date: 10/24/08 08:41 am Title: 4 A.M.
He should have karate chopped that fool or done the 'Imma' tactic darn it. At least he has AJ to keep him up beat and laughing with his dumb sarcasm. I loved the butt joke, cause AJ has no butt Kris. haha!
Author's Response: LOL...he should have made a break for it, huh? AJ is always handy to have around...his sarcasm is great! Thanks for all the reviews, Er.
Date: 10/24/08 08:31 am Title: Helpless When She Smiles
Aw he sang. I can so see the group of guys nodding and grinning at his foolishness. Why is she so collected damn it Kristal...Why?
Author's Response: Lmao...yeah...he's kinda calm, isn't he? Why? I dont know...he just is, haha.
Date: 10/24/08 08:23 am Title: Shhhhhh!
This chapter is the cutest. How does he get into those situations is beside me! I can imagine how he felt with all those men surrounding him, feeling like they might pummel him any moment...I mean even her dad. Oh and the shhhh part was funny! They ARE going to eat him alive. *Biting what I have left of nails*
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Nick is always getting himself into something, isn't he? Poor guy. I feel sorry for him being amongst all her family...it's nerve racking for a guy! Don't bite off all your nails, now!
Date: 10/24/08 08:10 am Title: Sunshine and Fucking Rainbows
LOL! NIck is a dufus a fine ass dufus! All he did was talk about Jordan. Loved the emotional issue part, and how worried he was about his emotional sanity. *giggles* She seems so mellow, like she doesn't get any signs from him. Wake up JORDAN!!
Author's Response: She might want him to like her, so much, that she doesn't know if the signs are really there. You know? Like she wants the signs to be real but thinks she's imagining them? Then again maybe she figures that if she ignores them, he won't act on them?!? Hmm. Thanks for all the feedback you've been leaving me!
Date: 10/24/08 07:54 am Title: Piranha
LMAO!! You surprise me everytime woman.The truck was her DANE! lordy...lordy...So Nick's feeling are really increasing, especially wtih *clears throat* AJ flirting like that. He asks to many questions, I would have smacked him or something, but he is funny. I wonder what else you have in store girlie. I'm off to find out.
Author's Response: Yeah, Nick shoulda smaked AJ upside the head. Nick just doesn't know what to do about those feelings that are bubbling inside him. I'm glad you are amused by what's happening!!
