Date: 10/24/08 07:41 am Title: DANE!!!
Hum...she pushes him away. It's strictly bussiness now? I'm the one confused now!! *scratches head* Good confused. Oh shoot who could Dane be...her man. A child. A pet. Hum...
Author's Response: LOL...I don't mean to confuse you. Sorry. You'll find out aaaaaall about Dane in the next chapter!
Date: 10/24/08 05:47 am Title: The Warehouse
I cracked up laughing at the line where Nick said "I know,right?".....that is such a girl thing to say! Anyway! Great Chapter! I can't believe that there is only one left! A lot must happen in the next one!!!! CANT WAIT!
Author's Response: Sometimes, Nick is kind of a bit of a girl, roflmao!! I know...I can't believe it gonna be the end, either! Hopefully it won't take me long to get it all written! Thanks for the review, hun.
Date: 10/24/08 03:11 am Title: It's Not All About You!
*Nods head in disbelief* You are twisted she's from the CIA, no wonder she could karate chop! Oh and Nick is pissed, shit I would be too. It's like she had to befriend him. Aw but then she was hurt that he was mad, hum...I think they like each other, but the circumstances are going to make it difficult. I love this...I cant believe I never came back to finish it *Blushes* sorry!
Author's Response: Aw, I ain't mad at ya, for not reading it, before. I am glad that you like it, though!
Date: 10/24/08 02:37 am Title: Say 'Hello' to My Little Friends
Holy macroll!! She was a CIA how come I seriously didn't see any of that coming. I mean I should have known no normal girl can whoop ass like that. No wonder she's so bossy and mouthy! Poor Nick he's going to be angry isn't he...he better be. I feel like they used him. *Pout*
Author's Response: Nick does feel betrayed, like she was playing him or something. But you'll find out all about his reactions, soon enough! Thanks again for deciding to read.
Date: 10/24/08 02:12 am Title: She's A Mouthy One
She sure does have a mouth on her and it's going to get her butt kicked. I can't believe that bitch Sharon was behind it all...I had a feeling. I was cracking up with Brian's line about Jackie Chan and god bless you...your hilarious. Oh and Nick is a chicken shit.
Author's Response: Nick...a chicken shit...teehee...there's a lot still in store...you're opinion might change.
Date: 10/24/08 01:13 am Title: She Probably Planned This!
LOL! With the girlie movies and Nick turning pink. LOL! I can't believe that Bri and AJ were paying for him to get special treatment. A good and sad thing. I thought Nick was going to beat his little butt! Sarah is seriously a bad ass, she has tactics. GO GIRL!! Did it hurt while you made up that mean stuff about AJ? *snickers* He's NASTY alright!
Author's Response: Bri and AJ just wanted thier frined to be safe...hell...I don't even KNOW Nick and I would pay someone to keep him safe, if he were in that position (provided I had any money). And yes...yes it did hurt me, to write those horribel things about AJ! I cried...I was devestated...I felt guilty for days! Lol...not really...after all, she was making it all up. *wink*
Author's Response: Bri and AJ just wanted thier frined to be safe...hell...I don't even KNOW Nick and I would pay someone to keep him safe, if he were in that position (provided I had any money). And yes...yes it did hurt me, to write those horribel things about AJ! I cried...I was devestated...I felt guilty for days! Lol...not really...after all, she was making it all up. *wink*
Date: 10/24/08 12:58 am Title: 'Serious' Is An Understatement
OMG Nick is such a fool, I can see him stumbling around. Brian seems to be scared shitless. Sarah is the serene woman there *chanting* women rule! Them being married is funny too 'about 8 hours' haha!
Author's Response: LMAO...I am so glad you're getting into the story. I really appreciate all the feedback and I am happy that you decided to read!
Date: 10/24/08 12:46 am Title: SHIT...RUN!!
Oh wow that was a close call, I'm telling out Sarah is a tough cookie. I can see big ol Nick making way in the dark haha! since he is a bit of a dufus. My brain was thinking if she is feeling for someone in the dark, I wonder what she might come upon... *Wink wink* Ok enough being bad. So I thought it was cute how he wont let her stay alone. Sarah your not wonderwoman! Great chap!
Author's Response: You goof ball! Leave it, to you, to come up with that view of it, lol. "What she might come upon." lol...Nick being tall, I think her hands would be higher than that. *rolls eyes* I am glad you have been enjoying the story!
Date: 10/24/08 12:27 am Title: My Life Is A Twisted Movie!
Damn those girls can kick some ass can't they! Poor Nick he almost got blown away...lord jesus. I liked the seductive Erika and her display.
Author's Response: LMAO...I guess any girl could kick butt, if she was protecting any of the Boys. Poor Nick? He can't help but to get himself in sticky situations, huh? I think it's kinda funny!
Date: 10/23/08 04:37 pm Title: Getting Down To Business
You are twisted...then again I read the begining a while back and maybe you mentioned that he had a girlfriend with that name. I wouldn't trust her either! Nick is a dork for going in there and I'm just waiting to see what twists you got going... *Biting nails, runs to read next chapter*
Author's Response: Yeah...AJ mentioned it in his Nickalex message to Nick that he and Sharon broke up. Keep biting those nails...the action and sespense is looooong from over!
Date: 10/23/08 04:20 pm Title: Meeting Sharon
That sounds dangerous and I love the boys and all. But I'm a chicken shit and I would be hiding in the car woman. You had some funny lines in their serious meeting...like the hoops and mini skirt..LOL! Or the cell phone playing 'Red High Heels' *Snickers* what an imagination of yours. Off to the next one.
Author's Response: LMAO...hiding in the car, huh? sounds like you, lol. And, you know I can't be super serious, without some kind of comic relief! Thanks for all the reviews you've been leaving, I really appreciate it!
Date: 10/23/08 04:13 pm Title: Attention All Backstreet Boys Fans:
Oh my imagine all the fans in one place, ready to kick some ass! Your so funny! Nickalex (Sounds like a laxative or gum) LOL!! Poor Kevin you named him 'Monkey Butt' although it does sound like him. Because of this chapter I must go and watch Ace Ventura to get it. *hugs*
Author's Response: haha..BSB fans are the most awesomest, aren't we?!? What else would you have me name Kevin? Is there something more fitting? lol. Ace Ventura rocks...have fun watching it!
Date: 10/05/08 04:18 pm Title: Pearl's
i love it thank god you updated i tought you forgot this story :) i was waiting like a puppy for update lol
anyway now update soon please
Author's Response: Aaaaw, don't worry, I haven't forgotten. I'm sorry it has taken so long, but I'll try to update again soon! Thanks for not giving up on the story!
Date: 10/02/08 06:40 am Title: Pearl's
DAMNIT KRISTAL!! THIS ISN'T ENOUGH!! Lmao. Um... can people tell that I'm the IMPATIENT one?! Lol. Thanks for updating hun, I love you! Haha. Can't wait for the next update, which will be sometime real SOON, right?! :P
Author's Response: You crack me up! At least I updated! Yes...I am pretty sure you are OBVIOUSLY the impatient one! I love you too, though, Rupert! ;-) I'll try to get another one done soon, okay? Thanks for sticking with the story and it's slow updates!
Date: 10/02/08 04:39 am Title: Pearl's
Holy wow....at least they found the place, but why are bombs going off when they are in their time frame? WTF?!?!?! lol At least all of these people at the bank and restaruant are being helpful towards solving this. What is the next game though? UPDATE....AGAIN...you cant leave off like this
Author's Response: Typical...you take forever to read and then demand an update. LOL...just playin. I am glad you were able to get caught up, and I am happy you're liking it. I will try to get another update posted soon! Thanks for all the feedback...it's great!
