Date: 10/02/08 04:31 am Title: Safe Deposit
LMAO....good thing they got that code right. or else 48 deaths would happen while they waited out the 24 hours. What is the clue though?
Author's Response: It was pure luck!!! Lol.
Date: 10/02/08 04:24 am Title: The Airport
This little game is freakin twisted. I cant believe that the nightmare isnt over yet for them. How much worse can it get? Will everybody get out alive? And how do they know that the sick fuck didnt already kill Jordan and is luring them in to kill them also?
Author's Response: They've got a ways to go, before it all ends. They don't have any way of telling if she's alive, or not...but I don't think Nick is willing to risk it.
Date: 10/02/08 04:18 am Title: Thorough Explination
Holy hellll....you cant kill Jordan.....that would be fucked up! I cant believe that Nick has so many people after him, and the Mexican Mob protecting him...and and....and....wow, it is a lot to comprehend. You definitely did your research on this one! lol
Author's Response: LOL...who says I can't kill her? I am the one writting the story! *evil grin* I tried to keep it beleivable and realistic, but I'm not in any gang...so i'm sorta winging it!
Date: 10/02/08 04:17 am Title: Pearl's
Yay!!! I am glad you updated....I was begginning to think you abandoned the story!
I love how you are using all of the Dr. S clues...it is great. How awesome was it of Marla to give the boys guns!!!
Can't wait for an update....try not to make me wait so long next time!
Author's Response: Aaaaw, I am so glad that you haven't forgotten about this story! My mind has been going in so many different directions, lately, with this. I'm having issues deciding which path to follow! I am glad you are still liking it, though! Thanks, hun!
Date: 10/02/08 04:11 am Title: Trouble Is
YAY they liked Nick's idea!!!! hehe. But what happened to Jordan? Why is her brother there? It cant be good...and you had to leave off like that. GRRRR
Author's Response: LOL...I'm keeping the responses, kinda, short because I know you're catching up, and will know your answers soon. but, I appreciate you taking the time to review, along the way!
Date: 10/02/08 04:05 am Title: 4 A.M.
I cant believe he hasnt talked to her in 6 months. How he heck will he ever find her? Damnit...I wanna know!!!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW! Geesh! What a mess, for the poor guy! He must be in such heartache.
Date: 10/02/08 03:56 am Title: Helpless When She Smiles
YAY!!! He got the family seal of approval! But what is this about him going back to Orlando? Oh HELL no that can't happen! He has to tell Jordy he loves her and she has to return the feelings and all. There is no way she can send him back. Not after all they been through! *sniffle*
Author's Response: Aaaaw, you're sucked into his little world, aren't you? Teehee. Poor Nick better hurry up and tell her! Thanks for the reviews, hun!
Date: 10/02/08 03:47 am Title: Shhhhhh!
LMAO...yeah.....he is in for it. They all know he likes Jordy...and will love teasing him about it, I bet. I cannot believe Nick would wander around by himself though, considering....jeezie! And with Dane...that was hilarious!!! Gotta love it! :)
Author's Response: Brothers tend to protect thier only sister! Hopefully Nick will make it out alive!
Date: 08/27/08 04:30 am Title: Safe Deposit
i would love to know wat comes next...wat is in the safety deposit box?? do Nick & AJ able to rescue Jordan in time?? is Nick able to be with Jordan in the end?? i would love to know wat happens next....i didn't think that this story was very interesting until now...i gave a it a read now i want to know what happens next....keep up the good work...looking forward for an update!!!
Author's Response: Aaaaw, well thank you for giving it a shot. I appreciate that. I will be trying to update tomorrow or Thursday because I dont have to work. I hope that I will be able to still intrigue you as the story goes on. THANKS!
Date: 08/24/08 04:53 am Title: Safe Deposit
Oh are you kidding me?! What's in it?!?! How could you leave it there? *pouts* This story is getting so good! And Nick was right best place to hide is right in front of you lol
But who got blown up and who shot at them and where are the people that are supposed to protect him??
I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Lmao...so many questions! I have to leave you asking them though, otherwise you wouldn't keep reading now would you? *grin* I promise to update soon, though. Thanks for being so into the story!
Date: 08/23/08 03:37 pm Title: Safe Deposit
What is it?! What is it?!
Author's Response: LOL...you'll have to wait and see!
Date: 08/23/08 06:30 am Title: Safe Deposit
You always have a cliff hanger!!! GREAT UPDATE....although "And To Think I Saw It On Mulberry Street" is only 9 words!!!
Author's Response: Always a cliffie...keeps ya comin back! And I counted that over and over...I got 9 a couple times then I got 10 a few times...oh well, I was tierd! LMAO. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/22/08 12:58 am Title: Safe Deposit
augh!! more soon! I want to know what they see in the box!
Author's Response: Lmao...I shall update soon, I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/21/08 10:05 am Title: Safe Deposit
what's in there?!
Author's Response: Hmmm, I dunno. *grin*
Date: 08/21/08 06:58 am Title: Safe Deposit
way to leave us hanging after the wait. lol great job. hahah why was mulbery so obvious? was that mentioned in the story somewhere else? cant wait for more. that was a funny scene.
Author's Response: Lmao...you know I always have to leave you hanging. Mulberry was only so obvious becasue it's in the name of the book...and it has the eight letters. The guys were thinking it was more complicated than that but it was just a main word from the title. I'm glad you liked it, though! Thanks for reading and reviewing, hun.
