Date: 12/15/08 03:02 am Title: Hush Hush
Oh, please don't tell me that you are going to have her lose the baby? Take the advice from me and don't do it! Besides if you do I'd have to call you a hypocrite Lol j/k.
Seriously though Amy... Your writing is blowing my away with how far you've come. It just keeps getting better.This is such a complicated situation. I want them to be back together, but I'm not sure how Nick will react to the baby, especially after accusing her of not taking her birth control. That kind of looks bad. I just hope that they can have a happy ending!
Author's Response:
I know it sounds a bit similar to someone else's story! LOL! I swear I have had this all planned out before I read LTOS! There is soooooooooooooooooooo much more to come with this story and FYI the baby is safe for now! I think a lot of people are going to be pleastenly surprised by Nick though, there is definetly going to be some growth from him but that does not mean Adie is going to welcome him back with open arms, you know the saying too little to late?!
Thanks for the huge compliment about my writing, I can see a marked improvement as well and I think it is because I do have to really think about where I am taking my stories and my characters. I still have a long way to go to catch up with you though, so hurry up and update, I need a Nick and Alyssa fix!!!!!
Date: 12/11/08 07:25 am Title: Hush Hush
You're so evil, lol. Great chapter, but the wait is going to kill me, hope her and the baby are ok. And let's just hope Nick keeps thinking the same thing once he finds out she's pregnant, if she still is. Looking forward for the next update. Take Care!
Author's Response: Waiting is good, it gives you something to look forward too! LOL! I think Nick is going to surprise a lot of people but you are just going to have to wait and see arent you! LOL thanks for the review!
Date: 12/11/08 03:20 am Title: Hush Hush
OMFG!!!!! MORE post MORE!!!!
Date: 12/10/08 08:08 pm Title: Hush Hush
yeah Nick kick out his so called people he calls friends x oh it so sweet that Nick starting has operation win Adie no guy will do that for me and he give her a little kiss x and then Adie falls really hope that she ok and of the baby too x
Ok Nick gonna try be more open and talk about things what is Adie going to bring on the table I mean Nick is not the only has to change
I what do you mean about next week we have whole seven days you are nasty lol only kidding x keep up the good work
Author's Response: I hear what you are saying about Adie and she definetly needs to meet him half way because it just can't all be on Nick. Things are going to get interesting over the next few chapters. Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/10/08 04:02 pm Title: Hush Hush
You are so cruel to live us hanging like this when you are going to be MIA for a few days and not update!!! This chapter is good, I must say that I love the little blips into the past...very sweet.
Also, I did not see him showing up at the hospital or her falling coming...sneaky sneaky...will she be the one to tell him or will a doctor or someone else let the cat out of the bag...update soon, loved it!
Author's Response:
MWHAHAHA!!! It was all part of my evil plan! It was just how it has worked out which in a way is quite good for me because I know how much you guys are dying to know what happens! LOL! I have just started work on the next chappie but there is lots of subject matter to cover and I definetly won't have it ready by tomorrow! Sorry!
I think the blips into the past are important and they are going to play a big part in the latter part of the story. I think it also gives you a glimpse of what they were like pre all these complications. As for Nick showing up at the hospital...they guy needed his stiches out...is it really his fault she just happened to working on that same day?! ;) Well maybe! LOL! And anyway there may not be a baby to tell him about now!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/10/08 03:53 pm Title: Hush Hush
UGH ANOTHER CLIF HANGER!!!!!!!!
Seriously can we stop with the clif hangers??LOL.
I really hoped that this was the chapter that she told him but oops nope she might not be preggo now. In a way it might be good that she isn't pregnant anymore but then its sad because it is a baby. I'm torn as to which way this will really go.
I like how you wrote this chapter, especially the scene between the two of them and how he barely kissed her that was really sweet and it goes to show you that you can really effect someone with a simple touch.
I hope you've never had that kind of trouble at work. I also can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Sorry but cliff hangers = suspense = you guys coming back for more! LOL! I was actually going to let this be the chapter but I decided to split it because I didn't want you guys to know whether the loses the baby or not right away. It adds to the drama! Also it would have been a long ass chappie!
As to the kiss, I think he wanted to show her he still loved her, we all know he has a difficult time in verbalising stuff and I think in this instance actions said a whole lot more then his words could have. It wasn't very passionate, it wasn't lust felt, it was a small peck but sometimes I think it is those sorts of kisses that mean more! Just damn bad timing with the guy that came in. As for your question about having to deal with that at work I have to say yes I have had to restrain many people but fourtunetly I have never been grabbed at, spat at yes, but not grabbed at!
