Date: 02/23/09 05:51 am Title: Before the worst
It was wonderful. I loved it. They're back together and that's what matters, everything else will come later. Can't wait to read another chapter. Take Care!
Author's Response: Are you sure eveything else will come later? I'm not so sure myself because they are going to be tested to breaking point within the next few chapters! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/17/09 08:31 pm Title: Before the worst
thanks for the update. that was some hot and passionate lovemaking! haha. i like how they're working on getting things back together. can't wait for the next chapters. keep it up. :)
Author's Response: There is still lots more drama to come!
Date: 02/17/09 03:22 am Title: Before the worst
Oh boy...I think we are in for it, things went TOO smoothly here! Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Things did go a bit too smoothly and lets just say Nick is in the "I'm so glad she's back" mood that he hasn't thought about how she hurt him, about how much she has lost his trust! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/17/09 02:05 am Title: Before the worst
I was wondering when you would update, and you finally did!
I really liked this chapter. It was completely raw & emotional. The way they were with each other was great! I am so happy that they finally opened up to each other in more than one way, and I can't wait to see what happens in therapy.
The scene you wrote where Nick went eye level with her stomach was adorable. The way he just started talking about baby stuff and what he was learning was so cute, I am glad you added that Adie needed to see that. I'm glad Nick finally cried in front of her, and I mean really cried. She finally needed to realize that him breaking down his walls wasnt going to fix their situation, she needs to do it too.
Great update and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I have to admit that this chapter and the previous have been the hardest to write because I don't want to give too much away at the moment but I also do not want it to seem like everything is fine and fixed and that they are going to live happily ever after! There is lots more to come about how they are both going to deal with how she left and Nick hasn't even begun to show her how she hurt him!
The scene with Nick was purely to show Adie how wrong she did have it, how wrong she had perceived him and his notions about not being a Father, just because someone says no to a hypothetical situation doesn't mean they won't change their minds when faced with the real thing. But then again can we really blame her for that after what Mark did to her?
All in all they have a seriously long way to go and thats not to say something won't happen to tear the apart further down the line! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/17/09 02:03 am Title: Before the worst
great job!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!:)
Author's Response: Thanks! x
Date: 02/17/09 01:09 am Title: Before the worst
I love it and can't wait for the rest to unfold for nick and adie....ur doin an awesome job.
Jill
Author's Response: A new reviewer! Welcome and thanks for the input keep it coming! Thanks for the compliment!
Date: 02/16/09 11:40 pm Title: Before the worst
aughhhhhh more soon must have more!
Author's Response: Hopefully by the end of the week!
Date: 02/16/09 11:28 pm Title: Before the worst
cannot wait for more. I love how Adie is finally breaking down her walls...
Author's Response: Yep she is but it is going to take a while before thinkgs sart getting better for them completely and then you never know what might crop up to pull them even further apart!
Date: 02/16/09 10:56 pm Title: Before the worst
yay I like the journal entreis. that was beautiful though. they are so great together.
Author's Response: Lots of people liked the journal enteries, I think they worked very well and it's agreat way to story tell. Thanks for the review!
