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Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/09 06:34 am Title: All in my head

Great chapter. Let's see what else Nick finds out in this meeting. Can't wait to read another chapter. By the wat I'm teaching fourth graders. They are a handfull. Take Care!



Author's Response: Definetly a handful! LOL! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/09 04:46 am Title: All in my head

I feel like we are on the verge here...Nick is about to blow, and for good reason...I love the way you showed him indifferent to the situation with the counselor then jumping Adie's ass for something unrelated.  And on the flip side, I love that you showed her CANCELLING counseling, which she MAJORLY needs...and then admit she is avoiding him to protect herself.  Good stuff, you rule, update soon!!!

Author's Response: There is going to be a revealing scene in the n ext chapter where Adie realises something and Nick won't even have to say a word! She definetly needs to therapy sessions but with him going away soon things are going to get more difficult for them, and certain things playing on Nick's mindre going to cause trouble! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/09 02:51 am Title: All in my head

oh!!! can't wait for more!  Post soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/09 08:25 pm Title: All in my head

man he was a lil nasty to her but Im glad she told him what was wrong and hes going to go with her. cant wait for more!

Author's Response: He needed to be though to make her see and admit to him what she was doing and why she was doing it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Southern_Sweetheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/09 05:23 pm Title: All in my head

I liked this chapter. My favorite part though was how you ended it. Adie is suprising me in every chapter, the way she just openly said, "I want you to come with me." & "I don't want there to be anything between us by the time she comes." is a HUGE thing for her. I am so glad that she is finally talking and showing her past and emotions.

Nick is doing a good job too. I really hope that he doesn't hold in his feelings anymore because that would just ruin the progress that he is making. I agree with him on the situation with Adies job. I dont really like her character working at the ER either while she is pregnant. I know he has an issue with her working their period but I just think its unsafe & unhealthy for her since she is pregnant. Not only is she putting her and the baby in danger but she is also around the sick people and what not. I just hope nothing happens to her or the baby.

With Nick going on tour things should be getting more interesting since they are back together and Adie is hormonal as ever! I hope that the baby doesn't come early as I really want Nick to be there (although the birth is still far off....hopefully!)

Nick & Adie are making good progress together. I just hope to see more scenes of them "in love & happy" especially before he goes away. It would be a nice change since we haven't seen that side of them in awhile.

Great update and hurry back with the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It is a huge step for Adie to invite him alng but I think she wants to have everything sorted and out nthe open by the time the baby comes. I'm not sure if that is going to be possible because there is a lot of stuff! But she is a bit of a control freak like that.

You are going to see more of Nick over the next few chapters, I'm not sure if there is going to be anymore diary enteries, I need to think about how to slot them in but there is going to be a revealing therapy session in which Adie will realise a few things about him. It's going to mke her see why he has been so shut off. And you are going to get your wish about seeing them more in love and happy because I have a few aww so sweet scenes coming up!

Thanks for the review!