it was different what happend with my sister but im from scotland so it could be different x Nick is right she will regret it if she did not see the baby my sister got to see my nephew so did I we got to hold him too.  it happend 6 months ago and my sister has her good days and bad days so it is a long way to go for Adie and Nick. Also it times like this you find out who are your true friends are.  I will send you the song u can used it if you like but listen to the words x

Author's Response: It is such a horrible thing to go through and my thoughts go out to your sister and to you. Nick and Adie have a hell of a long way to go if they are ver going to make it through to the other side intact. The song would be great actually, thanks xxx

Wow you are on a roll with these updates!

I just don't know what to say to this situation. Adie is going to retreat back into herself and that is the part of her that I can not stand. It seems like she is going in circles and that she will never truly get out of herself. I understand this is a hard situation for her but she needs to realize that it is hard for Nick too, she isn't the only one suffering here. Adie's character plays the victim card waaaaay to much and I'm sick of it. I personally would like to see Nick's side of the story for once. You give us a little taste of his perspective but then put us right back in with Adie's view point.

I hope that you don't end this story with them apart. I really would like to see things work out of them eventually and I know that they will work through this, however I have a feeling that with the loss of the pregnancy that if and when Adie retreats back to her old ways Nick won't be there to help her. Which I think would be good since she needs to learn to take care of herself & love herself before she can be with anyone else. That's the biggest lesson she needs to conquer.

Keep up with the fast updates!

Author's Response:

It is a really difficult situation because every time she tries to break out and be more open and more optimistic something comes along to knock her back down. She is going to blame herself a lot in the next few chapters, she is going to withdraw from everyone and she is going to make a lot of people angry at her. It is going to get to the point where people get so sick of her that they won;t want to be around her anymore and I think Nick already realises that.

You are right in what you say about her needing to love herself before she can be with Nick completely.

Thanks for the review

Amazing, amazing!!!  You really captured all of the emotions both of them were feeling, this chapter was utterly heartbreaking. 

So odd that you mentioned the aspirin, same thing that my SIL I told you about had to do, she has since had 2 healthy children...but the only thing that made the loss of the first one better is to have another.  So I think that's where you may take this, if of course, Adie cooperates, which she is not known to do.

Awesome job!  More soon!