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Reviewer: Ruby Maye Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/08 08:20 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down

awww...i hope things will work out with Nick and Adie. love the story girl! keep it up! :)

Author's Response:

There is a lot more to this story then first meets the eye so keep on reading! Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/08 07:46 pm Title: Something that I already know

that was a really good chapter. with a lot of emotions on both ends. they are so good together yet yeah something is missing and its the complete trust

Author's Response: Trust is a huge issue for this pair. Nick doesn't trust Adie enough to show her his true self and that really hurts her. She has never done anything to show him she is untrustworthy, well apart from with holding that Mark and her were engagded but that will all come out a bit later!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/08 07:45 pm Title: Something that I already know

oh wow. that song really works with it. and makes me really sad. agh. poor things.

Author's Response:

I love STIAK and it just fit so perfectly! Originally she was supposed to hear it at the concert that night and make a desicion but I thought it worked better this way! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ally Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 12:21 am Title: Just like a pill

omg...i just found this story and read the entire thing...i am so hooked..cant wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Wow that's a lot of reading. Glad to hear you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 06:22 am Title: Just like a pill

Great chapter.Love the suspense, is biulding by the minute. Woder what her reaction will be. Please update soon; Take Care!

Author's Response: The suspense is just going to get worse over the next few chappies but ultimately you guys know what is going to happen! LOL! This story is far from over though, I would say we are about half way done!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 05:37 am Title: Just like a pill

OMG  more soon!!!!!

Author's Response: You should have some by early next week as I am going away for the weekend!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 03:46 am Title: Just like a pill

YAY!  I was so glad to see an update, you know I adore this story.  Nepal huh?  Hmmm...definitely something to think about, especially if you look at where we started.  I think this was a really good time to throw Mark in the mix because Nick is screwing up, and it shows that he knows she deserves better!

Great stuff, update soon!!!

Author's Response:

Awww thanks sweet! Nepal is going to cause lots of problems! You are so right about Nick, he knows he is screwing up but he can't seem to stop himself, it's all part of his pattern. He doesn't like people getting to close to him, he thinks that if people know the truth about his family, if they see how it has effected him they will think little of him, pity him and he doesn't want that. He is too blind sighted to see that by blocking her out of such and impotant part of his life that he is pushing her away!

 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 02:54 am Title: Just like a pill

Yikes! Busted! Come on Nick! It's really sad that he doesn't trust Adie. For him to assume that she must be forgetting to take her birth control pills to trap him is pretty effed up, especially cuz she never gave him any indication that she would try something like that. Her name's not Shayla! LOL

Great work! I loved the Grey's Anatomy line. I thnk Adie still has feelings for Mark and I have a feeling things are gonna hit the fan soon. Can't wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

I know and it is that lack of trust that will be his dimise! If he doesn't trust her then what's the point in being in a realtionship? It's definetly something she would'nt do. She wants him to want this as much as she does, wants him to be with her because he loves her and not because he feels he has to be. She is definetly no Shayla but he doesn't see it that way!

 

There are definetly still feelings there for Mark and I think it's because of how much he has changed. She will keep wondering to herself "what if I had stuck around and given him the second chance?" It's certainly a dangerous time for Nick and he has messed up big style, the argumnet is going to be hige!

 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rachel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 12:46 am Title: Just like a pill

Omg. He seriously checked the bottle. Oh no he didn't. I wonder how he's going to explain this and I hope its not the I was looking for meds excuse. I want more drama. lol.

Great job! I can't wait for more. :-)

Author's Response: I know how awful is that? He doesn't trust her and the shit is really going to hit the fan! Drama is soon to follow!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 11:02 pm Title: Just like a pill

oooooh crap. i cant believe he got caught doing that. agh. this makes me so sad. what was angels question by the way..?

Author's Response: Angel's question was in the chapter called denial and it was "how long is it going to be until you sabbotage this relationsip? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/08 09:28 pm Title: London Calling

Hum,is stranger going to cause any fights? Have I told you before that I love drama? lol. Nice chapter, poor Nick thou, hope he gets better soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Take Care!

Author's Response: Stranger may cause some problems but not in the way you all think! The next few chapters are going to be the catalyst for the spilt so keep your eyes peeled!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/08 09:02 pm Title: Birthday Blues

Great chapter. Is so nice to see the realtionship he has with her parents, is so cute. She's growing more restless every minute. Take Care!

Author's Response:

He's very close to her parents and I think she feels that's why he is with her, to replace that bond with her family. I don't think she begrudges him that though I think she is pissed off because she knows her family will have a lot to say when they break up! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/08 09:06 pm Title: London Calling

What a bummer, she gets there to see him and he's all sicky!  And what a whiner he is, but it is kind of endearing, for a second, my hubs is the same way...sick men are the pits!

I am interested to find out who walked up at the end...update soon, keep up the good work!



Author's Response: I know but she got to take care of him too, even if he was annoying as! LOL!

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/24/08 08:36 pm Title: London Calling

haha. i love the lil cliff hanger with the boy smiling at her. dun dun dun. lol. we will all assume all kinds of things about him now.

Author's Response: Oh I know! That's why I did it LOL!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/08 02:23 am Title: Birthday Blues

I had a feeling that this would happen...I wouldn't have been satisfied with a promise either, total cop out on his part.  Great update...can't wait for more.  One of the coolest things about reading this story is that you know she left him, but you never know when it is going to happen, watching the build up is exciting!!! 

Author's Response: To be honest I don't think it is a cop out, he does want to let her in but when he's done it in the past he has been really hurt. He's got a lot going on with the tour and such and the current moment isn't the best time but I don't think Adie sees that! The breakup will be coming very soon but don't worry this story is far from over I think we are actually only about a quarter of the way through! Thanks for the review!