Date: 06/10/09 12:13 pm Title: Headlights on Dark Roads
I love your work by the way where are you getting all these backstreet boy songs because I want them lol.
Author's Response:
Some of them are on youtube. It's amazing because they just all seem to fit!
Date: 06/10/09 04:40 am Title: Headlights on Dark Roads
love this story. Your an amazing writer. cant wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so so so much!
Date: 06/10/09 04:12 am Title: Headlights on Dark Roads
“I won’t let anybody hurt you.”
Nobody could hurt me like you have anyway, Nick thought to himself.
Profound words, Nick.
Great chapter. I'm glad Nick is gonna make this real hard work for Adie.
Author's Response: It will be even harder in the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/10/09 02:31 am Title: Headlights on Dark Roads
Another one...and another great one at that! I liked this chapter, I knew Nick would go...had he not, this story would be over and we would have just read an epilouge! I liked how you wrote Adie being glad he was asleep, how he was cranky when he woke up and it turned into a fight. I liked that Nick wanted to bring up the first impression, even though he was mad, he was looking for something good. It is going to have to be up and down...highs and lows of their relationship are going to have to be rehashed for them to talk this out. The softer side of me liked that he climbed into bed with her in the end to protect her from murderers...cute.
Keep up the good work, I am so impressed by your drive and motivation! Hugs! More soon!
Author's Response:
I tried to fool you all but you knew he would go! LOL! That probably classes as my worst cliffee!
I think Adie has finally realised how far she had pushed him and their relationship and you are going to see a lot more of that in the next chapter. There were a lot of high moments in this chapter but there won't be so many in the next! I think is actually going to regret getting into bed with her but at the same time if he didn't then you wouldn't get the next emotional chapter of the story. Everything happens for a reason!
Looking forward to an update from you Lady!!!! Hugs!
Date: 06/10/09 01:41 am Title: Headlights on Dark Roads
Another great chapter! I loved how you made Adie more sympathetic in this chapter and not all selfish. I also LOVED how you made them remember the past and what made them fall in love. The end was the cutest thing ever. How he teased her about the murder and she teased him about the gremlins lol...so funny. I loved this chapter. I can't wait for an update. This goes without saying but your an amazing writer! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks. I think it's time Adie realises that she needs to take Nick's feelings into consideration. They needed to remember all the good stuff rather then just focusing on the bad, because that will be in the next chapter. Thanks so much for the amazing compliment!
Date: 06/09/09 10:58 pm Title: Headlights on Dark Roads
OMG! more soon!!!
Author's Response: Hopefully by the end of the week!
Date: 06/09/09 10:50 pm Title: Headlights on Dark Roads
aawh, red it in one breath...
Beautiful!
Loved the comment about the Gremlings ;)
Author's Response: Thanks hun. I couldn't let something like the gremlins comment pass us all by!
Date: 06/08/09 04:26 pm Title: Last Request
Well Well Well ....
I agree with Adie!If Nick didn't care about her anymore at all he wouldn't be in Vegas until that.But I think he's making the same mistake not letting her in again...if they're gonna talk he needs to tell her what is it that he wants to hear from her...she loves him but she doesn't know what else to do because everything she has done seems to be the wrong thing!poor Adie !so he needs to guide her
I hope he notices that!
Great chapter as always!
keep the good work!we love it! =D
Author's Response:
I think you might be the only one who feels sorry for Adie! Yay and Adie fan! LOL! Nick needs to give her one last chance because I think he would regret it for the rest of his life if he didnt. You will find out in the next chapter if he goes with her!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/06/09 06:32 am Title: Last Request
Great chapter. And I think he is going, well I hope he does, he should give her and their relationship one last shot. Hope to read the next chapter soon. Take Care!
Author's Response: One last shot indeed. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/04/09 05:28 am Title: Masquerade
Well, it sure gets more complicated every time. Gotta love the drama. Great chapter.
Date: 06/03/09 10:08 pm Title: Last Request
It's the funniest thing, on my way home from work I was listening to Unbreakable and Treat Me Right came on and I thought of your story. I think the song suits it well, dontcha think? :)
Author's Response:
Yeah you're probably right. The idea for the title of the story actually came from a song called All Hail The HeartBreaker by a band called the spill canvas. Awesome song and amazing group! Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/03/09 02:45 pm Title: Last Request
Hmm....I believe Nick will agree to go with her, I just hope he doesn't make it so easy on her. She needs to really fight for him by saying the things she should have said months ago. Just hope Nick doesn't get so frustrated that actually jumping out a moving car would be less painful than staying in it with Adie! LMAO
Also loved the brief scene with Aaron. Was straight & to the point, which seems to be the only way Adie listens to anyone. Fluffy words & actions don't seem to work with her. Blunt honesty is the best policy!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Hun!
You are complete right about Aaron, he was straight and to the point and that was definetly what she needed!
She has a lot of explaining to do and nick is going to make it anything but easy! She is really going to have to fight to him an for them!
Thanks for the review hun x
Date: 06/03/09 12:07 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.
Date: 06/03/09 05:14 am Title: Last Request
AUGG!!!!!! I soo hope that he does go!!!!! more soon!!
Author's Response: You will have to wait and see won't you! Thanks for the review
Date: 06/03/09 03:32 am Title: Last Request
Yes, I think he'll go...this is the last shot...he'll give her a chance. Otherwise, I do believe our next chapter will be an epilouge :o) Wowza, you are on a roll...share the mojo!!!
I liked this chapter, it was one of those necessary, bridge chapters you have to write to set up the others but you did have some meat in here. You showed that even though it has merely been a couple of hours, Nick is kind of standing strong and not running back. But by the same token, he can't just completely let go, he proved that by going downstairs. I think Adie knows that, hopefully she won't use it to her advantage and she will be straight with him, really put herself out there and be transparent. I also really enjoyed the Aaron scene, pretty to the point but necessary! I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!
As for me...I did START today...I would use that term loosely considering not a ton of progress has been made...once I get going its going to roll out, just need time to focus. It is just going to be one really, really long scene...but with a lot important things happening...I am shooting for early next week if not before. I am having oral surgery next Thursday so I definitely want to update before then. Hugs!!!
Author's Response: Maybe it will be the epilougue! LOL! Glad you liked the chapter Hun. You are right in what you say about nick being at the end of his rope, he is completely exhausted but at thecsame time he just can't give up on her, he already told rachel that. He just has no more fight left in him and it is herye to take over. By him going down to see her shows her that, it shows adie that she still has a chance but she will have to be completly open with him and it is going to be very emotional. It will do them both the world of good to get everything out in the open but some of it is going to be really hard to hear. Hope your surgery went okay Hun, will be looking toward to an update soon xxxx
