Okay this review will be short & sweet. I'm glad to see that Nick didn't stay behind to talk to her. I think if he would have he would've given in right away and they wouldn't be able to work anything out, they would just get back into the rut they were stuck in.

The conversation that Aaron had with Adie for a few brief moments was very simple and straight to the point. I'm glad he said that to her, she needed to hear it. I'm glad she saw that side of Nick, she needed to understand every aspect of why he is hurting and how much he is hurting.

I like how you took a turn in this story by them going on a road trip. Them being alone for 3 days should be interesting, the conversations they are about to have are hopefully going to be eye opening, soul bearing and full of emotion and love. I can't wait. Update soon!

Author's Response: I think nick has finally snapped and it has made adie realize that she can't keep pushing him! She does love him and she does really want to be with him but in order to do that she has to open up to him. It's going to be hard but by putting them in the situation where they just can't walk away is a good idea. Aaron was complety right, he as blunt and to the point which is what she needed! Thanks for the review Hun xxx

Oh he will go. I think just for the simple fact that she said she has lots to talk about. That is what he was looking for. And realizing that she's right...that they are trapped in a car he might finally get the answers he was looking for. This is what they should have done instead of her going to Nepal.

I can't wait till the next chapter to see what he decides and how it turns out! Thanks for the quick update....do it again!! lol

Author's Response: Glad u liked the update Hun. I think your right because this should have happened a long time ago x

Yay another chapter! I loved how you made Adie fight for the relationship in this chapter. I also loved the roadtrip idea. Can't wait for an update! Oh yeah I loved that you basically mixed Nicks real life girlfriend and Lauren and the cupcake and the picture of her looking at him...Great Job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Hun. I thought mixing is real life with the story makes it more belivavle.

Go Nick! Good for him. LOL. Awesome update!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Well well well...looks like someone is bringing their A-game.  AWESOME CHAPTER!!!  I think that this is your best yet in this story...you did an amazing job conveying the emotion.  I love that Nick just kind of snapped, it is like he is suddenly seeing everything very clearly and getting angry, justifiably angry.  It's about time!

I like the way that you had the night she arrived go, and his reaction...so perfect!  I love how blindsided Adie is by this whole thing, because really, she has been the one in control and doing what she pleased without thinking of him for some time now...and my how the tables are turning.

I don't know if she is ready for this...or has what it takes to make him stay.  I love that although he went off, his mind is somewhat clear, and he is finally thinking and not letting her manipulate him.

I am really interested to see how Adie develops in this new scenario.  I have a couple of theories on what she will do, both are very extreme in two completely different directions.  I can't wait to see what you do, you always surprise me.

Keep up the great work...you are getting better and better and so is the plot.  Can't wait for more, you are also so good about sticking to writing and updating regularly, I miss those days!  I am feeling inspired today so hopefully I will get something out soon!  HUGS!

: ( poor nick. that just made me so sad. cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks hun. I think the next chapter will make you sad too! x

Okay I've had a very emotional weekend and today is no different. I've just watched The New Moon trailer so I'm freaking out and then I see that you've updated, so I'm freaking out even more.

This was the best chapter you've ever written!!

It has so much raw emotion and love in it, that I feel it pulling at my heart strings. I am so proud of Nick for so many different things. The fact that he finally stood up to her and confronted her about everything is amazing. I honestly am not surprised that he is tired of fighting; I'm not gonna lie there is a part of me that wants him to walk away from Adie, but the other part of me wants them to work this out. So I'm torn, either way though I'm sure I'll love how you end this story.

I'm glad that Adie has finally admitted that she will fight for them, the question is though, is she strong enough to do so? But I am disappointed in her, because once again someone has to force her emotions out of her. I thought it was quite funny when she tried getting out of talking to Nick a few times, I know all of us girls have tried that once or twice in our lives.LOL.

The way you write these two characters is really interesting; as I was reading them in this chapter I felt like I was standing there in the same room with them. I felt Adie's heart break, I heard the sound of Nick punching the wall and screaming at her. I can visibly see Adie crying. This definitely was an amazing chapter. One quick note, I love the title you chose for this chapter. I don't know if you did it intentionally or what. But "masquerade" fits well. Nick and Adie have been wearing masks the entire story and for the first time they are taking them off to face the truth. I just hope that they are both strong enough to handle the truth. Please update soon!

Author's Response:

You keep saying that!!! I am just glad that my writing is improving and getting better. I was up till two am writing last night because once I got into the flow, into the whole emotion of it I found I just couldn't stop.

I am feeling what you are saying about wanting Nick to walk away for his sanity but on the other hand I really want them to work through it too. They have been through so much to let it tear them apart but the jury is still out on that at the moment, I have two endings in my head and I am just going to see how things pan out over the next few chapters!

I think Adie is strong enough to fight for them, I think Nick showing how fragile he is, how hurt he is helped her to realise that she wasn't the only one who lost Molly. Then again with his explosion I think she is going to be scared of him but you will see all of that in the next chapter.

Thanks so much for what you said about actually seeing and hearing them. I know how amazing that is when I read stories, to feel like you are actually there watching these people, like you are in the same room is a huge testiment to the author and I am really shocked that I have been able to create that for you. This is just a little hobby of mine and to know that you enjoy it that much pretty much made my day!

I love the song Masquerade and none of the other lyrics fit about from the verse that Nick sang at the end, it just made perfect sense to use it in thia chapter and it fit as the title as well. They are both so lost at the moment and it just goes to show that you can put on  a mask but if it's not who you really are everyone will eventually find out.

Thanks for the amazing review and hopefully more will be posted soon! x

....wow.....just....wow! How in the HELL can she just act like nothing is wrong? Just come waltzing in like that and think everything is back to normal? She's walked out on him what? twice? three times now and she...god words are not coming to mind right now. I am glad he didn't hit her tho...but she needs to let him go cool off. She's made this mess....now she had to deal with the consequences of it....Poor Nick..I really have conflicting emotions on how I want this to end...

Great chapter tho!! Wracked with emotions I tell ya!!! Can't wait to see what's in store in the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad he didn't hit her, I don't think they could have recovered from something like that, I think he would have been too guilt ridden to work through it, you will see how he feels in the next chpater. I think she needed to see it though, she needed to see how frustrated she had made him.

Thanks for the review hun x