Date: 08/06/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter Six
Wow! This is amazing. It's so refreshing to see somebody get into the mind of the killer and make them seem almost as though they're the victim. I love it. I will definitely be looking forward to more of this story. Soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this story a chance! I really appreciate it and am so happy that you are liking it, so far! i will try to have another update up soon!
Date: 08/05/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Six
YAY! UPDATE! Okay, so, Alexander is this punk kid who just showed up D...that's...that's great! I love it! And the fact that you still made him the same way (as in being a punk) and as a cop! Even all the more better. And I know with Alex on the case baby, it's gonna get solved!
And doesn't Theresa see here...Eck..but what's awesome is that The Defacer still isn't sure about what's going on or what to do with his feelings! I mean, he's still bouncing back and forth about killing her. *shakes head* okay, sitting on the edge of my seat...DEMANDING more now! So, can't wait...as you can tell...waiting!
Author's Response: LOL...I'm glad you liked Alexander showing up Howard. *sigh* Alexander's wonderful, ain't he?!? You're right...with both Alexander AND Howard...the case will definitely get solved quicker!
Theresa...well...you'll just have to wait and see what heppens there. I have big plans for Theresa! There should be more soon!
Date: 08/05/09 05:37 am Title: Chapter Six
Very creative and well written! Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not sure if you've read any of my other stories, but this one is a bit out of my box. It makes me so happy, to hear that you are enjoying it. I appreciate your feedback!
Date: 08/04/09 01:03 am Title: Chapter One
Very intriguing, Kristal! I like the writing style you have used for this one, since it's kinda important to have the detail in there for a story like this. Very good start!
Author's Response: Thanks, again, Steph! I'm thrilled that you liked this chapter! I'm just hoping you will like the rest, too. I really appreciate the feedback. *MUAH*
Date: 07/28/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Five
OH MY GOSH! They were right next to each other! Gosh! *shakes head* at least Howard is smart to know that he's not 100 perfect, this defacer! But damn, he's smart! And I do have to wonder if and when, he'll be caught! I'm sooo looking forward to more! ECK, another great chapter girlie!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this story...I'm taking it pretty seriously...it's hard to change my writting style, but so far I'm having fun with it. Thank you for the review hun!
Date: 06/30/09 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Four
WOW! It was a great chapter, seeing into HIS life, part of what's driving him! I was hoping this would come, so thank you! And boy, I can not wait to see what's going to happen!
Author's Response: Don't worry, this won't be the last glimpse, into the killer's life. There will be plenty more chapters that let us into his mind, and life! Thanks so much for reading and for the review...very much appreciated!
Date: 06/27/09 06:40 pm Title: Chapter Four
Now that was an amazing chapter! So now we know why the Defacer is commiting these horrific murders and leaving the victims disfigured.
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Oh I am so glad you are enjoying the story! I've got a lot of ideas, so hopefully I will get more up soon. Thank you so much Steph!
Date: 06/08/09 09:27 am Title: Chapter Three
wow i love this story. i'm a big fan of detectives stories.I already know this one is gonna be awesome. So update more1!!!!
Author's Response: Oh man, I am so glad you like it! I've mentioned it before, but I get nervous about this one, because I'm not used to writing these kind of stories. Your review means a lot, thank you!
Date: 04/16/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Two
I'm so digging this story. I want wait to see what happens and what, if anything, Dorough finds! Great job!
Author's Response: Really?!? Oh good! It's a different type of story, than I usually write, so hopefully you will continue to enjoy it! Thank you, so much, for giving it a chance!
Date: 04/16/09 08:30 am Title: Chapter Two
Hopefully now that Howie is on the case, the Defacer will be found! Love the suspense in this story :)
Author's Response: Who knows, if Howie will crack the case, or become a victim, himself. Hopefully he will get some leads, and get the Defacer behind bars. Thanks for reading, Steph!
Date: 04/15/09 01:09 pm Title: Chapter Two
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy you like it. I'm still nervous, about this one, since it's not my usual type of story. Thank you for reading, and your review is appreciated!
Date: 03/30/09 11:21 am Title: Chapter One
Ahh man, I thought you was gonna write more to the preview you showed me of this! But either way, you done a wonderful job at weaving a beginning that really draws the reader in. The picture you painted with your details was both exciting and terrifying all at the same. With a story line like this, it can be difficult to write in such a way that you are able to really draw the reader in so that they feel as if they are right there witnessing the scene as it takes place. You caused this to happen successfully so major props to you! Keep up the good work with this because I can definitely see a masterpiece in the making! And on a final note, UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response: I was going to write more, but I decided upon a different way, to break up the chapters. They are going to be shorter chapters, than usual. Thank you for reading, Ashley, I'm glad that you liked it. I am stepping out of my box, with this, and am really going to try focusing on more in depth detail. *crosses fingers* I hope it comes out, the way I want! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03/30/09 07:24 am Title: Chapter One
Wow, this has me hooked already. I wonder who this serial killer is? I have an idea, just not sure if it is who I'm thinking. Poor Vanessa, when she regained consciousness, I thought she was going to get away.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Nope, poor Vanessa didn't stand a chance. I'm really glad that you liked the start, of this. It's something new, for me, so hopefully I will be able to pull it off! Thanks for the review, Steph!
Date: 03/29/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter One
HOLY FUCK KRYS!! This turned out GREAT!! I love this, I havent read a grusome fic like this in a long while!! Im so looking foward to more of this!!! UPDATE SOOON HUN!!! You got me hooked already!!! xoxo
Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you enjoyed it, so much! Thank you for reading, and leaving me such nice feedback.
