Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed
Date: 05/02/08
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
Leave it up to AJ to be the sarcastic one, lol. And I seriously didn't think Brian was gonna mentioning anything about his condition worsening, but I was wrong. Well... he didn't really mention it, he more just blurted it out in the heat of the moment. And of course, knowing AJ, he's gonna go back to the guys and tell them what he found out... or maybe I'm wrong. It's really sad witnessing everyone falling apart at the seams, but I hope a miracle happens and things turn for the better. I'm really glad that I started reading this story... even though it's got me hella emotional, it's extremely good and your writing style is superb. I've said this to you before, but I'll say it again, with the way you use your words, it's in such a descriptive manner, which makes the story so much more vivid and realistic, and your words aren't repetitve, which is really good. Personally, I tend to lose interest in a story rather quickly if the story revolves solely around just one guy, and the others make quick and small cameos... I'm all about group stories. But your story drew me in and captivated me from beginning to end, bringing me into this world of words, causing memories to resurface, causing my senses to come alive, all by simply reading words, it's quite amazing actually. Lol. All I can say is great job on this story thus far, and I seriously can't wait to read more from you. =]
Author's Response: You think it's got you emotional just reading it? Try writing it. LoL. All I've got to say is that the story is going to be emotional major until it's finished. I actually wrote the epilogue back in January because the idea for it sparked in my mind and I figured it would be better to get it written down before I forgot the idea and then I would have nothing when it came time to write it. Although don't even try asking because I am not going to tell you what happens in the epilogue. LoL. Many readers have tried asking what's going to happen throughout the rest of the story and I don't want to say because I think that just totally eliminates the whole purpose of reading it and finding out as you go along. But yeah. Thanks again for all the reviews you've left. Who knows, maybe I will have some inspiration to help me crank out another chapter soon! Hopefully... [Ashley]