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You love, you lose, you learn...then you learn to love all over again. Because sometimes...the place that may seem like the end...may very well be the beginning.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw YAY Alex!!!!!
Author's Response: Hehehehe! I knew you'd love it! :) Thank you!
I love it when people capture the sweet, romantic side, of Alex. Even all the other guys have said that Alex is the biggest softy, in the group, and a hopeless romantic. I think some people tend to forget that, judging on his outward appearance. Honestly, I think the sunrise is something Alex would actually do, in reality. He's a very kindhearted person, and you do well portraying that softer side, of him, without making it seem unrealistic. Loved the chapter! Update again soon.
Author's Response: You're so right. He is so sweet and romantic and tender and caring and I think it gets lost in all his tattoos and rough outer appearance. I'm enjoying bringing the sweet and loving side out in him and I thought the sunrise was so fitting. I think he'd probably do something like that in real life lol.. lucky chick lol. I'm trying hard to portray him right and I just hope I'm doing him justice. Thank you for the feedback, it really keeps me going. :)
OH HELL FUCK NO!!! I know you did NOT just seriously post that! Are you out of your pea pickin little mind?
I have half a mind to crawl through this screen and do two things...1 give you a stern talking to, for writing this chapter the way you did...2 Smack that good for nothing, suck up, egotistical, sorry excuse of a man Andrew, up one side of his big head and right down the other! How dare he?
I can't imagine how Morgan must feel...oh I would strangle him, for showing up like that! And then the family just feeding his dumb little ego...GAH!
Can I just hug Alex? Cuz you know...since Andrew is fucking everything up for him and Morgan...I'll gladly heal his heart! Oh you betchya! He must be crushed! All the thoughts going through his head, right now...oh I bet he's ready to chop Andrew's balls off! I'll go get the machete, for Alex to use...........
YOU BETTER UPDATE TOMORROW...(or I'm gonna...gonna...do something not so nice, LOL)
Author's Response: LOL I love your reviews! You are such a passionate person and I love seeing that in the reviews. Aww and yes, you can hug Alex and slap Andrew... how's that? LOL you crack me up and I'm glad you're still enjoying the fic. Hehe, sorry about not updating the next day ...but I tried not to make you wait too long.
Oh uh...*blush*...sorry...I ramble a little when I get all fired up, over something!
NOW UPDATE!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww hehe, you're fine in my book. :)
Yeah Hazel_85...I tend to get carried away, but trust me that is FAR from being the longest review I've left, LOL. I don't review every chapter, so I tend to leave chapter sized reviews, when I do.
I'm still mad at Andrew! I'm about to take him out to back forty and send him the way of Old Yeller! Gah!
Author's Response: HAHA the way of Old Yeller. I'll letcha at him, how's that? Hehe.
Alexander James McLean...you better be using the term "possessive" lightly! Don't make me take you out to the back forty, too!
Author's Response: LMAO you crack me up! I love your reviews! Thank you! And yes, he means it very lightly. And it if changes, I'll definitely let you at him. :) Thanks again!
OK, so I finally got all caught up. I've been working like crazy and had no idea how far behind I had gotten!
I still love this story! There has been so much going on that I don't even know where to begin! So I will go with some main points, and hopefully get back to my detailed reviews next chapter.
I love how you didn't make meeting mom all peaches and cream...that it took time for mom to accept her. I really think Denise would be leary of his girlfriends, because in reality, he has been burt so many times. I don't know that she would be quite so rude, but do feel it was more realistic that "Hi, I'm his mom, oh I just love you!"
Being a drama lover, I enjoyed, yet was infuriated with the whole Andrew thing. I'm glad that Alex was so protective, and ready to seriously pound the guy. I'm also quite happy, Andrew has been taken care of.
I'm on the edge of my seat, with all this argueing. They deserve to be happy. But, I agree with the women, about him paying for other people's shit. What's up with that? It's not right, but yet, it would not surprise me one bit, if AJ really did that. He is such a soft hearted person, no matter what he likes poeple to think, or how he comes across. AJ is a badass, but AJ is not the real person...Alex is, and Alex is a soft, caring, and trusting person. I can very much believe that something like this would really happen, and am glad that you are able to write and deliver a story that is fiction, but very believable. This is part of the reason I enjoy this story so much...I can really buy into it, without thinking "Yeah right, Alex would so not do that".
So in closing, I love the story...look forward to more...and think you have done a great job with the story-line.
Author's Response:
Yay on getting caught up! I've been wondering if you were still reading hehe. And I totally feel ya on the working like crazy thing. It's been taking over my life and it shows in my lack of updates. But I'm going to try harder.
I'm so glad that you brought up meeting his mom. I didn't want it to be like every other fic out there where they meet and they love each other right away and there are no real issues. It doesn't work like that in real life and I wanted to portray a different side of that. As for the rudeness; I would hope it wouldn't go down that way lol, but I wanted to add a little more drama than usual. But they made up ...so long as that sticks, I think things will be okay.
LOL and yes, it was about time Andrew was put away. I don't think he'll be back for awhile at least, if he comes back at all. It's not something I have written out, but I'm not going to worry or focus on that for a bit. There are bigger things on the table right now. And yes, if Alex had been let alone to do what he wished with him, Andrew would probably have ended up in the hospital. I'd considered a fight, but then thoubht better, because in real life, it probably would have landed Alex in jail. Oy vey.
And you're completely right about AJ/Alex. I wanted to show a vulnerable side to the man and show that sometimes he didn't have the control of his life that he wanted or felt he deserved. I want to bring up some issues between him and Morgan that aren't in all the other fics and something that could possibly happen. A part of me thinks that AJ does struggle with how he sees and feels about himself.
And thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it and I love hearing what you think. I like to know if my readers think of it realistically or if there's something going on that doesn't sit right with them. I'm so glad I'm able to keep it believeable and that I'm continuing to draw you in. I look forward to hearing more from you. Thanks so much!
...............................................................................................................*smacks alex*
Author's Response: Haha, that made me laugh out loud. Thank you! *smacks him too*
Ok...so I totally "squee"d when I saw this update! I had to go back and read the last chapter, to make sure I was on the same page, though, LOL. I really liked this chapter and Travis knew what he was talking about! Very well done girlie, and I'm anxiously awaiting more!
Author's Response: Hehehe aww yay for squee's! Thanks so much for noticing that Travis' intentions were purely innocent. He was just someone for Morgan to talk to. I'm trying to get the rest out there for you...thanks for sticking with me! :)
Don't be mad?!? DON'T BE MAD?!?! What the hell woman?!? GRRRRRRR! I swear to God above...the next chapter BETTER be Alex realizing she's right and running to her, dropping to his knees and begging for another chance! He better open up to her damn it! Here I am...faithful reader and reviewer...on edge, waiting for each update...and THIS is what you give me?!? *huff* I feel like crying now! You big meanie! I don't hate you...but...but...I'm not very happy! *pouts and runs away crying*
Author's Response: Awww lol wow, I really pissed you off, didn't I? LOL, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to. But it's all falling in place perfectly for my plan. Just trust me, which I know you may not want to do, but please do. If I promise you cookies, will you come back and read the rest of the chps? hehe, I hope so because I really do enjoy your reviews. :)
The Backstreet Boys have reunited, after a several year break. They're interested in returning to the studio, but old resentments die hard. Brian and Nick remain contemptuous towards each other, and their fighting is hindering the group. Unexpectedly, they are forced to put themselves in each other's shoes... literally.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian, Group, Nick
Genres: Dramedy, Humor, Supernatural
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 34323
Read Count: 40302
Alright...so I finally decided to give this one a look-see. I read through the whole thing and I am liking it, so far. It gets pretty confusing Brian being Nick and vise versa, but it's a cute story.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know what you mean. Brian and Nick in switched bodies is a visual thing, so its not always easy to get it to come across in writing. I'm glad you decided to give this story a try and that you like it so far. :)
Just a short story of Nick having a convo with his love!
Aaaaw, I like this version better, than the bit I read before. His daughter sounds so cute! It turned out very nice, Erika. ;-)
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm glad that you like it, you know lil stories that suddenly pop in your head. I used to enjoy writing them all the time. *sigh* thanks hun!! love ya!
( Sequal to Sinister Devotion) Crystal thought Jack was dead...and she was right. Jack did die that fateful day, at the farm; however, Alex McLean is still alive and kicking. He's got a new life, but the past, still seems to haunt him. What he doesn't know, is what is in store for him, now.
~~ON HIATUS~~
Ok I know...I know...I've been absolutely horrible at remembering to review. But...here goes...
DON'S ALIVE?!?!?! (Ok, so I already knew this, but you can't blame me for hoping you might change it around a little) Crystal knew about this...why the FUCK wouldn't she tell Jacklex from the start?!? I mean, sure I can understand her being afraid of his reaction, but it's not like it's her fault! GAH! Why won't this Don fucker die? I mean what does a person have to do? Now that Jacklex is aware of this, maybe he'll be able to hunt his ass down and really knock him off!
I'm still glad that Jacklex is showing more emotions and losing more of the Jack side, while he gets in touch with his Alex side...although we'll always call him Jack from time, to time!
The openind scene tugged at my heart. I can see both sides, here. He really has to work at proving himself, if he ever wants a chance at truely being with Crys. She went through a lot, when he left, and I can only imagine the pain she has had to deal with. Of course, as a man, he doesn't really see that...otherwise why would his thoughts have immediately drifted to the time they were together, intimately? He's got to realize that she's a sensative person, and she just doesn't want to experience the pain of him bailing out, on her, again. I'm holding hope that he will find a way to prove himself, to her. That he will admit his feelings and that they will be able to be together.
You know I absolutely love this story. Even in times like this, when I help out a lot or contribute to the scenes...when I read the chapters, I always feel like I am watching a movie, or seeing it play out in real life. I love your writing, I love jack, and I love you too girlie! Please update soon!
Well damn...it's about time! I even had to go back and read some, to remind myself of where we were! Do you have any idea how much I miss helping you work on Jack?!? *sniffle* Damn I am hating how much I'm workin now!
Jack still sounds like Jack...and his stubborness is getting annoying! You have a voice fucker...use it! GEESH! It's only three little damn words! It's not like you're selling your soul to the flying dutchman or some shit. *shakes head*
I still love the suspense and action, of this story and really hope I don't have to wait so long, for the next update! Miss you girlie!
Author's Response: Hell yeah its about time!! J/K I know you are really busy nowadays. We definately miss brainstorming with our muse. Right Jack? He's a little on the mute side, but he misses ya too. Well I'm glad you are still loving it. I thought I would put in a little lovey dovey moment. Haha! Jack is definately a stubborn ass.Those three words aren't always easy to say! Especially for him.
I miss ya too! Hope you are doing well. I shall be updating soon.
AJsutiepie...it will be her last update for a while because she isn't going to have internet for a little while...hopefully it won't be too long tho.
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