Reviewer: PureChaos92 Signed
Date: 08/04/08
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I love this story so far!
I just wanted to piont out the small fact that it's actually Bobby Jean Carter.But,a lot of people make that mistake,I did. I love how you switched things up like,BJ being older.Haha, I have the same problem with not being able to finish a project.I have four uncompleted stories on here right now.
Author's Response: Ahh, lol. Why did I always think her name was Billie Jean?! *MJ's song starts to play in my head* Well, another thing I'll go ahead and say I switched was her name... the mobsters already called the father Bobby, so... ;) Thanks for pointing that out for me though, would have never known!! Lol. And ugh... I'm seriously pissing my readers off with not updating or completing their favorite stories, I'm so bad at that, lol. But thanks for reading my story and for the correction and the review hun!! =]