Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed
Date: 06/08/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I just started reading this story tonight, and I am LOVING it so far! I am pretty picky about romance, and this kind of premise doesn't usually attract my attention, but I'd heard such rave reviews about this story that I had to give it a try and see what it was all about. I am hooked!! Your writing is excellent, which is what it's all about. You do a great job writing in first person, which isn't easy! The narrative is funny and draws you right in. Olivia as a main character is very real and relatable - I love that! I enjoy reading about her even when the Boys aren't in the scene, and I like that she's married - that's gonna present some great drama later on, I can tell! It's been a LONG time since I've sat and read this many consecutive chapters of a new fanfic in one sitting purely for enjoyment, and I've missed that! Thanks for writing a story worth reading! I'll leave more reviews as I get further into it and catch up, but just wanted to let you know I'm loving it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for such a great review! I LOVE writing in first person, for Olivia's voice is probably the easiest one I've been able to really define in a long time. Of course, I think the chapters that shine are the ones that include the Boys - I like many others think fanfics shouldn't stray too far away from the main purpose - to be ABOUT the Boys. I look foward to future comments as you get farther along in the story. :)