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She had always known what she wanted and had worked hard to make her dreams a reality, nothing would come between her and her ambitions....
....even if it meant saying goodbye to him
Well, it's ABOUT TIME!
For both of them, I mean. Nick, for making the small gesture to move on (the phone # deletion) and Adie, for finally getting her head out of her butt and doing what she should have done a long time ago.
Looking forward to the next installment. ;o)
Author's Response: Glad that you liked it. There is so much more growth to come from the both of them! Thanks for the review!
Now THIS is the chapter I've been waiting for! Go Nick! Adie has a lot of work ahead of her -- as she should.
Author's Response: I knew you were going to like this chapter! See I told you it was coming! LOL! Thanks for the review!
Hmm....I believe Nick will agree to go with her, I just hope he doesn't make it so easy on her. She needs to really fight for him by saying the things she should have said months ago. Just hope Nick doesn't get so frustrated that actually jumping out a moving car would be less painful than staying in it with Adie! LMAO
Also loved the brief scene with Aaron. Was straight & to the point, which seems to be the only way Adie listens to anyone. Fluffy words & actions don't seem to work with her. Blunt honesty is the best policy!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Hun!
You are complete right about Aaron, he was straight and to the point and that was definetly what she needed!
She has a lot of explaining to do and nick is going to make it anything but easy! She is really going to have to fight to him an for them!
Thanks for the review hun x
“I won’t let anybody hurt you.”
Nobody could hurt me like you have anyway, Nick thought to himself.
Profound words, Nick.
Great chapter. I'm glad Nick is gonna make this real hard work for Adie.
Author's Response: It will be even harder in the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
This just keeps gettin better & better. I'm glad to see that Adie has become the "strong" one, as Nick really needs to let go & let her do that role now. As it has become quite obvious Nick has tons of pent up anxiety, over many things, that is slowly starting to release itself. His eyes should be swollen shut from all the crying after a couple more chapters! But good to see him let some of that go. Adie's big girl pants fit her well. ;o)
Author's Response: You have hit the nail on tv head! Adie is being strong and she wants Nick to lean on her but sadly u can only lead a horse to water u can't make it drink! He is having a hard time being vunerable and you see how he deals with it over the next few chapters! Thanks for the review!
Excellent! I love where this is going. But, I'm sure you have some more drama up your sleeve. Nothing can be resolved that easily! ;o)
Author's Response: There is more drama coming but at least for the next chapter happy Nick and Adie will be back! It won't last that long though! Thanks for the review!
Oooh look out, Angel's in attack mode ! This actually, doesn't surprise me. Out of all the Carters, she is the most protective of Nick's heart. This should be good!
Author's Response: Yep Angel in attack mode = lots of anger! Thanks for the review!
Being single in the city isn't always what the television shows make it out to be. It's not one swinging party after the next. Sometimes being alone is just that, lonely. What happens with two people; one a humble passionate pastry chef from Manhattan and the other, a single father in LA; find out they're not so alone after all?
Oooohh...good story so far. Now, if I was her, I'd hop on the internet and start reading my ass off about Nick! ;o)
Author's Response: you know i thought about that, but i think she wants to be surprised!
I think I wanna slap a few people. First, the papps for always ruining everything, and Marie, for reacting the way she did & shutting him out. I hope while in the dark & she's laying there by herself that she sees she was a bit hasty in her reaction!
Author's Response: oh yeah she knows she freaked out and messed up. but hey she's human and is entitled to mistakes, it'd be a REALLY BORING story if she was okay with it from the get go. thanks so much hon
Marie needs to take my approach to life: How boring life would be if we always followed the path of least resistance.
Author's Response: awesome! hehe thanks so much hon!
Your stories are not formatted in a way that makes me want to read them. They need work, sorry.
Author's Response: What do you think needs work other then not being formatted???
She was beautiful to the eye. Long blonde hair, perfect body, greenest eyes anyone had ever seen and a smile that could eat your soul. Heads turned whenever she walked into a room and she knew it.
He had women falling at his feet everywhere he went, he played on that. They knew it, and he knew it but that didn't stop them following him. He played it with no strings, getting what he wanted and saying goodbye. It was easier that way, knowing he would never be in the same city for too long. It was hard to keep a relationship and he liked it that way. His life ran in a way that made it perfect for him.
Until he met her. Until she twisted her way into his life, and changed it.
I'm in the minority because I like Lindsay a helluva lot more than Paige. Paige is an irritating self-centered immature girl. I say go Nick & Lindsay!
Sequel to "Beautiful Lie" and 2nd part of the Beautiful Lie series.
Nick Carter. 31, and in love with two woman, and a father of one. Now he's engaged to one woman, can he resist the urge to be with his first true love? Or does he live happily ever after with his other love?
Never cared for Paige much, now this just seals the deal for me. She may play the victim role really well, but she's no delicate flower like she wants to make them all think she is. Not gonna lie, now the story is losing it's luster with me. Sorry
Damn, Brian. You really know how to hurt Nick. Just because you're thinking it, doesn't mean you should say it out loud. It would serve Brian right if Nick keeps him at arm's length for a long, long time.
God bless Zoe. She said the exact words that Nick needs to listen to. Too bad he didn't have Zoe with him while growing up. He wouldn't have half the shit to deal with now, if she had been along for the ride.
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