Well done. I love reading people's interpretation of the boys thoughts during the documentary filming and I thought this captures Brian very well. He looked so heartbroken during the movie and I felt so bad for him when Nick lashed out like that. Like Nick however I feel that he can be like that again. Great job on this :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! *__* More than what Brian told in the movie, it was what he didn't say that broke my heart. There were so many scenes when he looked so sad, helpless (just like when they were in the gym to rehearse.) that you just wanted to hug him. And the scene after the supposed fight, he looked like he didn't really believe what Nick was saying to him. And I do feel that, no matter what he says or how much we put ourselves in his soes, we will never know how he felt and still feels in this situation. Yes. I agree with Nick. If there is one person who can go back and be Micheal Jordan once again, it's Brian. Thank you again! <3 It means so much for me.

Oh damn this is the story I was getting excited about. I really thought it was Nick speaking at first but it's Brian. I love that you did that. I can't wait to find out what happened. Great Prologue, I can tell I will like this already.

Author's Response: Okay you nailed it being Brian LOL. I double checked to see if I named the other boys and made it VERY obvious but I didn't. So yay you! Yeah no, I'm not gonna start a story like this with Nick. I'm too evil mwahahahaha!

Loved loved loved the description in this chapter. I could picture it as I was reading. The nearly headless bus driver made me laugh a bit even though this was a serious situation. I bet Nick feels bad for mocking Jordan now, huh lol.

I am really worried about who if anyone Nick will meet on this road, and I cannot wait to find out. Great update :)

Author's Response: Awww thank you! I really wanted to up the level in this story and make it so you guys could imagine every detail. I'm so horrible but I wanted to have some morbid humor in here where I can so Nearly Headless Dave FTW! LOL. Nick has bigger problems than how he mocked Jordan haha.

I fucking love your twisted little mind. Having written a crazy fan story myself, I am a huge fan of this kind of story. I am also really anxious about how crazy she is and what is her deal besides saying she's in love with him. I think she put something in the food to drug him which is a fun bonus, but then you add the handcuffs as well. I cannot wait for another update to this. Let the games begin indeed!

Author's Response: Remember these words later. You love my twisted mind. Okay? Raven is an interesting character don't you think?

You are so delightfully evil. I love it. You Give him a shred, a glimmer of hope and snatch it away. Haha. I knew Raven would find him, and I love that you threw "Mine" in there from Mare's story- which is of course one of my all time favorites. Can't wait to see what you have her do to him next. So glad you're back to updating this one even if it's not regular. Was happy to have something to read!

Author's Response: Of course I did. Without hope he'll stop struggling. So I give him bits before taking it back. I thought it'd be fun to have Raven be a real fangirl who reads fanfic and stuff. So why not have her be inspired by Mare? And thanks Tracy!

I'd been meaning to check this story out for a while and never got around until now. But it's very intriguing and I like it so far. I never read Harry Potter fanfiction but when you told me about it this piqued my interest. Looking forward to reading more in a bit.

Author's Response: I hadn't read much of it either before but I've been reading quite a bit recently. There's some really good stories out there. I've been posting on a page HarryPotterFanFiction.com, which has some really neat stories on there.

I mean we all knew that Petunia was jealous of Lily but this really showed it. I feel that's why she is so bitter, because she wanted to be like her sister. Hearing a background story for Snape was awesome too as he's my favorite character. Awesome so far :)

Author's Response: Snape's one of my all time fav characters too. He was my absolute favorite until I started in writing this... Honestly, after all the research and thinking and everything I've done for this story, Sirius has taken a very deep rooted place in my heart, as have James, Lily, and Remus. ... Lily and Petunia aren't twins officially in canon - Petunia's older, though no source knows by how much, which is why I chose to make them twins here. Petunia's jealousy at Lily and her relation to the wizarding world and Sirius and eventually James was one of the main storylines I wanted to explore (there's more about Petunia/Lily Petunia/Snape and Petunia/James to come in future chapters).

James is so similar to Harry but he has the cockiness. Harry was nervous but that was because he didn't know anything about their world. So naturally James wouldn't be nervous. It's fun to kind of see the opposite.