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Now its becoming clear! I gotta admit, I kinda figured something like this ought to happen sooner or later. :D i love this story! this got me hooked. mystery, action & drama all in one! Looking forward to the continuous chapter updates! :D
Author's Response: haha, I think I would have failed in my writing if nobody saw this happening XD
(there might be some kind of plottwist on my hands though)
This is great!!!!! :D Your story plot is amazing!!!!! I liked it! :) And now the story is unfolding one by one. I can't wait for your continuous updates, and thank you for the fast chapter updates before. ^_^
And its on!!! the mystery case to look and truly figure out who Peter is and why he did what he had done to Brian is so on!! I cant wait for your next update. I can't wait to read more from this story and I cant wait to find out who is Peter! I find it cute, that now Brian is awake, Baylee surely holds a special place in his heart. ^_^ I salute Howie for his dedication to solve this mystery. I hope to read more on this story. amazing job on the plot! :)
Very nice story. I am looking forward to it every day. it caught my interest. thank for keeping up the updates. please dont stop and truly finish the story. It is wonderful. :)
Author's Response: thanks, it's nice to hear you like it :)
I will try my very best update and finish the story, though I really gotta go wherever the muse leads me
Danger danger!! This is awesome!!! but seriously, it can be hard for nick. He sees his best friend, but also knows he's far from the Brian he knows. Nick should annalyze things and hopefully puts his trust on Roland. because this brian certainly is not the one he knows. :) please keep updating. :D you got me hooked!! :D
Author's Response: We'll see in the next update whether Nick makes the right choice :)
thanks for the review!
Nick made a wrong decision, he tries to fix things and now Kevin is in for the ride of his life! This is so wonderful. thank you very much for keeping the updates at wonderful moments. :) I can't wait for the rest of the story. I'll be looking forward to it. :)
This chapter is great. :) the race for a life changing event is on! please keep updating. and i hope that the other boys will soon make an appearance. ^_^ Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! We will have to wait and see if the other boys will get into the story :)
"You gain strength, courage, and confidence by every experience in which you really stop to look fear in the face. You must do the thing which you think you cannot do." - Eleanor Roosevelt
OH MY CRAZINESS!!! This is one hell of a world gone wrong! Oh Brian is really one trouble maker. Though I know he didn't mean it. He just wants to help and protect good ol' Kev. But disaster is bound to happen. This is nuts! Now Howie's in terrible condition to be of any help to anyone or himself. and i can so feel a guilt trip coming Brian's way, I just hope he gets to calm himself and not brood over it, but i have a feeling its far from happening based on his character. Darn this sarah girl! She drives me crazy! You got her character way of the charts for a fan and a villain. She's sooo delusional! what's wrong with her? is she some crazy girl from a mental institution or something cause her way of thinking is far from normal. Nick finally found the nerve to answer her! ha! I can definitely feel the evolvement of this story, and i am incredibly excited for the chapters to come! more twists and turns, more trouble and tests for the group. Its only my prayer they all come out alive... though i am pretty sure they will be all harmed. Gosh!! You got me stuck on this story far to long dear, and i can't stop! so you can't stop. hehe. :) please update soon. im looking forward to it. One storm of hell is coming their way. ;) Oh, and greetings from my country the Philippines, that was just hit by a storm, so im sorry that i wasn't able to review the previous story about Kevin. hehe. Till your next chapter! :D
Author's Response: Wow - you're reading this all the way from the Philippines! I heard about the storm on the news. I hope that you and your family are all doing okay! Thanks for such an intense review. It's nice to know that you are so hooked on the story. Don't worry, I have no intentions of stopping until it is finished. So, you will get to find out what happens in the end. The boys sure are in a bad place at the moment and there are definitely some more twists to come. :D
That's it! Kevin and Howie planning out self defence for themselves! After the incident with Tony & Joey, it cant be helped to really think something is off. and with the police themselves not giving much information, something smells too fishy. I just hope they won't be led to a worst situation. but, that too is impossible since the story is just beginning to open up. hehe. Nice of you to mention Leighanne & her twitter posts. ^_^ but, i guess i like Leighanne so for now I really don't understand their problem yet. haha! this is fanfiction anyway, and everything is possible. I'm glad for your continuous updates on the story. I am always looking forward to each new posts. thank you very much!!!! :D
Author's Response: Good to hear from you again! You know that the situation is just going to get worse from here on out. If it didn't than there would be no story. ;) I find it so funny that everyone is suspicious of the bodyguards and the detectives. Perhaps you're all correct though ... you will have to wait and see.
And my heart rate shot up... aww man!! your killing me crazy with the suspense cliffies. haha! But still, gotta admit this is what's making me look out for your updates daily. Yes, i am pretty much obsessed with this story of yours. I am extremely curious as who is this guy threatening the boys! It could just be anyone from anywhere. yes, the police can be involved, and by the description you wrote on Joey it is very hard to believe that he is not involved. But to think that the person or men pursuing the boys still hasn't made any physical damage makes him much incredibly difficult to read. I wonder if your story will also be a mind game, as it is physical. because, receiving threats even though the police tried to hide them, meant that the man hunting the boys has ears and eyes watching their every move. and gosh! he just found out exactly where they are hiding right now! he was able to send the mystery letter personally to Howie! Oh, this is crazy!!! but i like it. haha!!! XD im just so hooked! thank you very much for your constant updates and replies to our reviews. it makes me feel happy, reading your replies and of course, your stories. thank you! :)
Author's Response: I'm so flattered that you're looking for the updates on a daily basis. I hope to get another chapter up in the next day or so. I've just finished moving, so everything is crazy in my life at the moment. It's interesting that you mentioned that some of the torture might be mental as opposed to physical. I was just writing a chapter where mind games play a role. It's like you read my mind!
Dear me... are you ending this story already? :,( I know that stories must come to an end at one point, but i am sure wanting more from this one... i have mixed feelings of anxiety and relief. relief because the boys are safe and saved, anxiety because i am now wondering what will happen next. oh please!!! don't let anybody die, well howie or aj for that matter. hehe. and wonderful display of how they were found by the police. also, amazing descriptions on how Nick feels about everything. I love his part with Brian, very nice input on how close they really are which also applies to the previous chapter, on how Brian is now recovering from his relationship with everyone else. I am so pleased with the friendship of those two and you put a wonderful emphasis on that. I am looking forward still to your next chapters of course! and definitely hoping more from this story, but if you do decides for this story to end already, that is of course your call. ^_^
- and yes, as reply to your previous reply to my review, i am reading from the Philippines, and i am a Filipino. its nice how the internet brings nations & people of different cultures closer. ;)
Author's Response: It's not going to end RIGHT away. I figure that I have maybe 4-5 chapters left to go in order to get everything wrapped up. I love writing the Brian/Nick relationship, especially because fiction allows me to make them best friends once again. :P Thanks again for all of your wonderful comments. It's nice to know that I'm not the only one who doesn't want this story to come to an end.
I love this story and it already got me wanting more since the first chapter. thank you for keeping up with the updates. please dont stop and enjoy writing this story till the end. I'll be looking forward to more of the chapters. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!! I'm glad that I had you hooked since the first chapter. I will try to keep up with the updates as much as possible ... sometimes life gets a bit crazy. :)
Oh please keep on updating!! i am so thrilled to see the recent chapter you have placed. :D and once again I am very excited for the next. you are a great author. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! I hope to have another chapter up shortly. :)
Wonderful!! I am so excited for your chapter updates. thank you thank you for updating! :D Kevin do have a point with his annalyzing. Where is Lauren really? I can't wait to read the chapters to come. thank you very much for writing! :)
Author's Response: You're so welcome!! I'm thrilled that you look forward to the updates. The next chapter is posted. You will find out Lauren's whereabouts soon ...
WAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!! A CLIFFY!!! my heart just stopped!! now is the body really nick or not???? man!! you got me on the edge of my seat! I can't sleep im thinking about this story. haha!! you are wonderful! please update soon. I can't wait! :D and thank you for keeping up with the chapters. ^_^ thank you very much for being a great author.
Author's Response: LOL - I'm terribly sorry if I have disrupted your sleep patterns. Please apologize to your boss for me. I know how hard it is to function at work without sleep!! :) Anyways, the answer to your question "is it really Nick" has been posted in the form of the next chapter. Enjoy!
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