Reviewer: scarlett Signed
Date: 05/28/08
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Two
i'm close to tears with this confrontation that has happened. i can't believe that Kevin would open up that quick. and i can't believe either that he would blame the fact that he's trying to be a father figure, or a big brother, to everyone. everyone has choices. he could have done it in a simple way and don't complicate things too much. **sigh** anyway,i'm just rambling. and, i think it was Lenni who saw Kevin and ran after him with that stick. LOL. so much for the seriousness of the moment, haha. you managed to insert a comic relief in the situation. haha. nice one. keep up the good work. couldn't ask for more. i'll just wait here for any updates. =)
Author's Response: lol...Kevin DID seem to open up rather quickly, didn\'t he? is he being honest? or is this a game he is playing? Yes...that part was writted in honor of our dear Lenni, lol. I am gald you enjoyed the tad of comedy stuck in the middle. I appreciate your feedback and will update again soon!