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FrickingKaos:
Chapter 8 of If I Knew Then is now posted!
RokofAges75:
Ooh! Chapter 8 feels like an important turning point in the story, with Brian's own true feelings for Nick starting to come to light. I can totally see Brian being in denial about his feelings for Nick because of his religious background and the way he was raised. I can see him trying to fall in love with Leighanne so he can get married to a woman and settle down the way he thinks his parents expect him to. I really appreciate the way you're developing Brian and Nick's relationship slowly and realistically. That's what helps me be able to take a slash story seriously.
I love that Brian kicked Leighanne out and that Kevin stood up for Nick and was so hard on Brian. Good for you, Kevin! I hope Brian apologizes to Nick in the next chapter.
FrickingKaos:
Wow thank you so much for that feedback. I want to make this believable, which is why I'm including real events, and I want to kind of explain how things happen rather than jumping in and being like BAM they're gay. Because it doesn't necessarily happen like that. For me in real life realizing that I was bisexual took a few years of exploring and even dating guys because I thought my parents expected that from me. It's not uncommon for that to happen and I am glad that again, it was believable for you. Thanks again!
FrickingKaos:
Chapter nine of If I Knew Then was posted. Sorry for the delay in updating, I was very stuck on this chapter for some reason, not to mention my Friends rewatch has been messing with my muse. But good news, I just started Season Ten so I should be done with that this week. So hopefully my writing mojo will pick up.
RokofAges75:
Bow-chicka-wow-wow! I have a feeling things are gonna happen in Cocoa Beach! I love that Brian and Nick made up; that was a good idea for Brian to go apologize and book the hotel for the weekend. On random note, I appreciate that you mentioned them waiting for Nick's parents to come back before they left because I was worried they were gonna go off and leave the rest of the Carter kids unsupervised LOL. I also appreciate the subtle hints about Brian's heart condition; I've noticed those throughout the story. I can't wait to see how his surgery will play into the plot and his relationship with Nick later on.
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