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FrickingKaos:
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on March 17, 2019, 07:30:24 PM ---Bow-chicka-wow-wow! I have a feeling things are gonna happen in Cocoa Beach! I love that Brian and Nick made up; that was a good idea for Brian to go apologize and book the hotel for the weekend. On random note, I appreciate that you mentioned them waiting for Nick's parents to come back before they left because I was worried they were gonna go off and leave the rest of the Carter kids unsupervised LOL. I also appreciate the subtle hints about Brian's heart condition; I've noticed those throughout the story. I can't wait to see how his surgery will play into the plot and his relationship with Nick later on.
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LOL I’m glad you liked that I did not leave unsupervised children. I also am glad you noticed the subtle hints at Brian’s condition because while I am including the surgery there’s something else to it that I hope you will enjoy. I do love Cocoa Beach though, I went there before the 2014 cruise so lots of great memories in that place, and I wanted to use that as kind of a backdrop for this next part. thanks so much for the review as always!
FrickingKaos:
Chapter Ten of If I knew then is posted.
Hey, I rhymed :P
RokofAges75:
Ha, of course there's only one bed! Convenient, Brian. I loved them watching Dumb and Dumber and saying they wanted to wear the orange and blue tuxes, like they actually did on the 2011 cruise! I'm glad Brian is starting to acknowledge his true feelings, even if he's not ready to admit them to Nick yet. I can see him getting closer. I love how you're taking your time developing this. Great job!
FrickingKaos:
Thanks so much for the compliments. I know back in the day Brian would say that his favorite actor was Jim Carrey so I pictured the two of them watching that movie together. I kind of wish Brian wore the blue tux instead of AJ on the 2011 cruise. I didn’t go on that one but i have seen videos from Prom Night.
I am glad that the pacing is at the right speed for their feelings because when it comes to things like this it takes time to realize what you want. I know before I came out of the closet last summer it took me a few years before I was fully comfortable enough to admit that I liked girls too. I drew a lot of my own experiences into this story so I am really happy that it is realistic and believable.
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 11 of If I Knew Then is now posted :)
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