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RokofAges75:
I enjoyed Chapter 13. I'm sure I've told you this before, but I love how you are weaving real life events into the fictional storyline. Things are simmering with Lou and with Brian's heart problem, and they're going to come to a boil sooner or later. Can't wait for more!
FrickingKaos:
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on April 22, 2019, 12:56:03 PM ---I enjoyed Chapter 13. I'm sure I've told you this before, but I love how you are weaving real life events into the fictional storyline. Things are simmering with Lou and with Brian's heart problem, and they're going to come to a boil sooner or later. Can't wait for more!
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I am glad you’re enjoying this so much because I wanted this story to be accurate, so I decided to make it believable, I would put in real life events from the boys career and lives. Things are definitely about to go for a different turn. Thanks for the review.
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 14 of If I Knew Then is now posted!
RokofAges75:
I love Nick and Leighanne teaming up to convince Brian to go to the doctor! In real life Leighanne really did give him an ultimatum to get him to have the surgery already. You may have already come across this, but if not, Brian's chapter in this book Taking on Heart Disease could be really helpful as you get further into the story: https://books.google.com/books?id=j-Pc9RfM2DoC&lpg=PA109&ots=HkckjYJxne&dq=Brian%20Littrell%20heart%20disease&pg=PA109#v=twopage&q&f=false
FrickingKaos:
--- Quote from: RokofAges75 on April 29, 2019, 09:24:12 PM ---I love Nick and Leighanne teaming up to convince Brian to go to the doctor! In real life Leighanne really did give him an ultimatum to get him to have the surgery already. You may have already come across this, but if not, Brian's chapter in this book Taking on Heart Disease could be really helpful as you get further into the story: https://books.google.com/books?id=j-Pc9RfM2DoC&lpg=PA109&ots=HkckjYJxne&dq=Brian%20Littrell%20heart%20disease&pg=PA109#v=twopage&q&f=false
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Thank you so much for that. I was about to look up some stuff for when i do get into this portion of the story. I know that Leighanne pushed him to do it but since this is about Brian and Nick, I wanted to include him too. This should make the fact that Nick doesn't show up to the hospital even more hurtful knowing that Nick wanted him to get the surgery.
Thanks so much for the advice and feedback as always. I appreciate it
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