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RokofAges75:
Enjoyed the new chapter! I liked the tension in the scene with Brian and Nick riding with JC and Justin. Everything is starting to come out now (except Brian - ha!). Keep the updates coming! :)
FrickingKaos:
If I Knew Then has been updated to Chapter 17!!!
RokofAges75:
Ooh, I loved this chapter! From the conversation with the rest of the Boys about Lou to the confrontation between Leighanne and Brian at the end, it was dramatic and entertaining. You do a great job writing dialogue. I can't wait to see how Brian reacts to Leighanne's ultimatum!
FrickingKaos:
I actually really enjoyed writing this chapter, I spent all night last night writing that scene with Brian and Leighanne. Thank you for the compliment as well, I tend to do better with dialogue than I do with descriptions, at least I feel that way. I think I've gotten much better over the years with it.
I am about to start Chapter 18. If my momentum keeps up, I might be updating on Sunday or Monday. Thanks for the feedback
FrickingKaos:
Chapter 18 of If I Knew Then is now posted. Sorry for the late update. I meant to post this Monday but I've had a lot going on personally and my creativity is not what it should be right now.
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