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One thread for all my updates!
honey:
well I've got someone editing it for me right now, and my brother in law is a technical writer by trade, so he s going to like "edit", edit for me. But I would love anything you have where you could point out inconsistencie s, holes in the plot, useless or cringe worthy dialog. Parts where the story drags as a whole. Parts where you would have liked to see more. Anything that seems too convenient anything that seems out of character to any of them... things like that. In fact, maybe I'll move this post to the feedback thread. not that anyone ever responds to that... but you never know. I really would love someone to give me real honest feedback. Sarah seems to be the only one around here that does that for me. And a lot of times she says stuff that I've been wondering about myself and when she brings it up it lest me know that Im not just being overly critical...
nicksgal:
--- Quote from: starbeamz2 on April 19, 2008, 01:16:52 AM ---*raises hand* can I be the whiny whore?
--- End quote ---
I thought we'd already established that. :P
lol Just kidding. :-*
starbeamz:
This is really, seriously random, but I just watched "Say Anything" for the first time ever, and, after I was done falling in love with Lloyd Dobler, I realized that he totally reminded me of Brian in Movie...or Brian reminds me of Lloyd..whateve r. Anyway, I thought it was great that they're so different from regular guys, and that the girls in their lives both acknowledge that fact. Also, the guys that both Brian and Lloyd knew were totally clueless when it came to really knowing what girls wanted lol But yeah, I just thought I'd drop in and say that...
Oh, and if anyone hasn't seen Say Anything...see it! :)
honey:
aww. its been WAAAYYY too long since I've seen that, but now I'll have to rent it again cause I'm curious. thanks!
honey:
ok, um, yeah... so I can't believe I just wrote this... hahahahahaha!
or should I say, Muahahahaha!
Title:Fan Friction
Rated: R, for death and graphic violence
Genre: Supernatural/suspense
Summary: After a psycho fan decides to drop the fiction from fan fiction, Nick Carter is forced into an institution until he can recover form the horrific events. But when he finally makes his way back to the spotlight, his fans start dying. All fingers automatically point to Nick, but there is something about all these murders that just doesn't add up. Something mysterious. Not to mention, they all sound eerily familiar.
http://absolutechaos.net/viewstory.php?sid=8964
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