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FS for May: Story #100 - Hope is the Last Thing Ever Lost by Mare
Rose:
Lol I didn't know that's why he's so fixated on birthdays but that's hilarious.
mare:
Yes! I had to find a way to mock that lol
RokofAges75:
Hilarious!
julilly:
As we come into the final week of this featured month, I hope everyone has taken the time to read Hope is... and have enjoyed it!
Mare, since you posted this story as you wrote it, is there anything you look back and wish you had written differently? What is it and why?
mare:
The only thing I have really regretted about this story is my descriptions and actions during the van scenes. I really screwed those up big time because when I initially began writing the first scene after the crash, in my head I pictured a tour bus but when I wrote it, I went with a van. The problem was as I started to describe how the van crashed, I wasn't thinking van, I was thinking big tour bus. So a lot of those action sequences just don't make much sense, especially when the wolves finally show up. Believe me I cringed every time I read those scenes back knowing it was too late to go back and change things. We'll just have to go with the idea that it was a really big van I guess lmao...oops!
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