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BSB and reading are my passions! I think i found heaven in fanfic!! I'm 25 and a wedding planner. Also, I'm from Puerto Rico, and I love when writers connect my hometown with Howie, makes me feel proud!!! If someone needs help with some spanish for a Howie fic, let me know!!!

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The Great Divide by evergreenwriter83 Rated: R [ - ]
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Two hundred twenty four pounds. That's how much Nick Carter weighed in 2006 after finishing House of Carters. He was depressed. His life was a mess. He wanted to turn it around.

One hundred eighty six pounds. That's how much Shay Gerard weighed in 2006 while living in a house with her beautiful actress mother and sister. She was fed up. She just wanted to be herself. She just wanted to get out.

When Shay and Nick meet on a reality weight loss show, sparks fly. But it takes only one night to tear them apart.

They thought they would never see each other again. Four years later, they were proven wrong.
Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Kevin, Nick
Genres: Drama, Dramedy, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Content
 Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 72546
Read Count: 137144


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Published: 10/24/10 » Updated: 01/30/11
Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 11/29/10 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ouch!!!
That really hurts, doesn't it Nick!!! Life is still slaping you in the face!
She's ready to kill him!!! Let her get it all out of her chest.
Oh please amazing writer that you are, give us more and soon, oh we beg you!!!

Author's Response: Did anyone really think his past wasn't going to bite him in the butt? Puh-lease!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 11/29/10 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It's been so long since I had the time to actually read all of your updates, I feel guilty!!!

I was expecting a reunion, but OMG! I was so not expecting a mini Nick!!!! And I feel so bad for Shay because it feels like Nick really took what self-confidence she had left. He needs to make it right again!!!

Author's Response: That's okay! I've been totally busy with school and work--I know how ya feel :)

I'm glad SOMEONE was expecting a mini Nick! I felt I was making it obvious. Nick totally broke her heart and ruined her self-confidence...which was already a little shaky even though she put up a semi-decent front.

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 10/25/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story comes at a very good time for me, I hope it serves me as motivation to keep the hard work ( like going to gym at 5am)!!!
There's not many stories with characters like Shae, so I'm looking forward to see what comes next for her, since I know all too well what is like the diet and excercise!

Author's Response: I'm jumpstarting my diet again too. I had a really rough summer because of...things...and my body rebelled. I've got to give myself a kick in the butt again!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 10/25/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok I hate Richard Simmons too!!
I so don't want to be in their place!

Author's Response: I didn't have to think too hard to imagine the WORST host for a fitness show. Lmao. Richard Simmons is so annoying...

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It makes me feel so sad to read about Nick's drug problem in those days. But it was a part of him. I sincerely hope he's truly done with that!!!

On the other hand, I don't know if it was the fix, but he sounded like a cocky bastard so full of himself!!! Lol
Can't wait for Shay to teach him a lesson!!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 12/06/10 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh My GOD!!!!!
I just had a feeling (kinda longing actually) that this would happen!!!!!!
0_0
This is soooo exciting!!!

Author's Response: A longing? That's awesome :)

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 12/13/10 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Omg!!! Shay in Nick's mind, he's got a problem alright!!! But at the same time i hope he gets to a point he eats all the things he said! (yes I want him to suffer!!! Lol)

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 12/19/10 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I'm so happy she finally got a taste of Kevin, she really needed it!!! Lol! And kevin seems to REALLY like her (I think the love part is too soon, but I'll patiently wait and see what happens)
I'm betting later on she'll feel guilty for not missing Jake in those few hours!!!

Author's Response: LoL ah yes, love is a funny thing :) Shay needed to, ahem, UNWIND, a little bit though...

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 12/30/10 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I felt so bad for Shay. She'll really die if anything happened to Jake.
But I didn't like Kevin just leaving like that. I know he really had no way of dealing with how hysteric Shay was, but couldn't he at least wait until she calmed down???

As for Nick and Lauren, I'm really happy for them, I just hope she truly doen't trade her pills for tic-tacs! Lol!
I want to be selfish in behalf of Jake and say he deserves All of Nicks attention after waiting so long for it.

Author's Response: I would totally freak out if my front door was open and my BABY was gone. I know I'm gonna be such an overprotective momma. And yeah, Kev taking off wasn't very gentlemanly, was it?

LoL only Nick would think about the great tic-tac switch. Jake DOES deserve his daddy's undivided attention. He missed out on it for too long.

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 01/24/11 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Oh My God! That was hot! Lol!
But I still want to slap Nick so hard I imprint my fingers in his face!!! He just knew she would go along with anything he did, that's what makes me mad!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 01/24/11 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Oh my God o_o !!!!
I can't believe how much I'm hating Kevin/Blake/scumbag right now!!!! WTF is wrong with him, midlife crisis hit him full force? or does he want to relive his bsb early days? Lol!
Oh Shay! get out of there!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 01/24/11 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Shay's my ultimate hero!!! That's what he deserved!!!
Go get him Nick!, go get him and kick his ass!!!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 01/25/11 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I'm so happy Nick did this, but I forgot what i was really going to ask...

"I knew it the minute I saw her walking through the lot. She was my perfect rebound." Just like Nick, I didn't get it!!! Lol!
"You know, girls like that are great because they're so desperate for some dick they'll do anything. " That made me see red!!! I wanted to kill him just for that!!! And Shay's MOM also! God I'm disgusted!!!

Author's Response: Well, it's a sad little speech of Kevin. Basically he targeted Shay that rainy night in the parking lot. Did he purposely toss his umbrella in her way to meet her? This points to yes. Kevin played her and Shay fell for it. Shay has HORRIBLE luck with men (as if you guys didn't already know this!)

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 01/27/11 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

"enticing" is not enough to describe it! Lol!
I want to see how this new phase is going to play out, but I'm hoping for great! I really want Shay to have a fairytale relationship once and for all! But that's me.
I also think Nick is really hoping for a chance to feel like a complete father for Jake, with home and mommy in the whole package, he's ready to do that!!!

Author's Response: Enticing isn't enough to describe Nick...but it's a start. I've been looking forward to getting to this last act, or last 20 chapters, for a long time. Hopefully I won't have you all running after me with torches in an angry mob!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed
Date: 01/28/11 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Poor Jake!!! :(
Nick is such a cool daddy!! Love him!
And I'm really hoping Shay surprises him when he gets back! All the workouts have to be good for something!
But...
I'm also hoping Kevin doesn't go looking for her, with Nick gone...

Author's Response: Nick is an awesome dad :) it would figure he'd be good after being so anti-fan :)