Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed
Date: 08/19/08
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
I promised I would have this read and reviewed before we meet up on the 23rd and I figured it was about time that I stopped procrastinating and hold up my end of the bargain. I'm horrible at reviewing sometimes, but when I say I'm going to review it, then I will review it.
Anywho, I sense some really strong emotions coming through what I've read so far. I haven't the slightest clue about what exactly happened between Ashleigh and Nick, but I know it's left her with some bitter feelings and you've conveyed that very well through Ashleigh's outright hesitance to even attend the concert. I like what I have read so far and I'm curious to see where you've taken this! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Aw thanks Ashley! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! You'll find out what happened between Ashleigh and Nick a little later on in the story (both through the flashbacks and through their interaction in the present). I'm glad you think I'm pulling it off well so far! Thanks again hun! :)