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Hi! My name is Melissa, but most of my friends call me Mel for short. I've been writing fan fiction on and off since I was 16 and I'm now almost 23, so I've definitely came a LONG way in my writing lol. Still though I've yet to ever finish anything. (Well outside of two stories WAAAY back but they were horrible! lol) I live in NY about an hour from NYC and I'm going to school to become an elementary/ special ed teacher.I've been a fan of BSB since I was 15 and Nick has always been my favorite. I've had the pleasure of meeting Brian, AJ, and Nick in the past, but the only one I have a picture is with AJ.

Pleasecheck out my story Under my Skin as well as Sexcapades which I am cowriting w/ my dear friend Laura.

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00Carter by Himitsu Takana, Rose, RokofAges75, Purpura Lipstick, nicksgal, DragonStar Rated: PG-13 [ - ]
Summary:


Swashbuckling pirates... gun-wielding Disney characters... moonwalking penguins... mind-numbing reality show singing competitions - you never know what the day will bring when you work for Himitsu Takana. And secret agent 008, better known as 00Carter, is ready for anything… just so long as he’s back in time to score with one of his beautiful Carter girls.

He’s Carter… Nick Carter.

Along with the elite agents of HimTak, he’s out to save the world, one mission at a time.

Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys, Fanfiction > Music > NSYNC
Characters: AJ, Brian, Group, Howie, Kevin, Nick
Genres: Action, Adventure, Alternate Universe, Humor, Science Fiction
Warnings: Death, Violence
 Series: 00Carter
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 248682
Read Count: 162573


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Published: 06/11/08 » Updated: 12/24/12
Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/24/11 Title: Chapter 23: Bunnies In Black: Part 5

Oh Nick... That's all I have to say...  He's something else isn't he? It's a good thing Pearl was out in LA. More importantly the baby! I had a feeling it was an alien! Now I'm too busy wondering the HOW of it all and I wonder what they are going to do with it. I knew that Mulder and Scully sounded familair too but I just figured it out now. X-files!



Author's Response: LOL but that's why we love Nick! And no kidding, Pearl would murder him. (She still might...) Glad you liked the alien baby. One thing about this story, is that there's a lot of pop-culture references. Exboyband members...always the unpopular ones...are part of an evil organization led by Howie. Random flashes in the pan for music, TV shows we loved lol. We knew once we decided on an alien story, we'd have to toss in X-files references :).

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/24/11 Title: Chapter 22: Bunnies In Black: Part 4

One word for this chapter EWWWWW! Emerald deserves a raise or something. SOOO gross! But I think she's definitely on to something with that tattoo.



Author's Response: LOL That scene with Emerald and Hef has to be the grossest thing I've ever written or researched. But glad it was effective! LOL Thanks, Mel!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/24/11 Title: Chapter 21: Bunnies In Black: Part 3

Hmm... I'm more intrigued than ever about how Bree's baby ties into their mission. Obviously they are trying to get info on that Playboy model that Jim slept with. Had to laugh at Red with the, "Does this tail make my butt look big?" line. AJ could definitely pull of a sketchy looking guy named Rico. Can't wait to hear what the girls uncover!



Author's Response: Oh there's a definite way the baby ties into the mission. Don't forget about that baby for a minute lol. AJ would be an awesome pimp LMAO. Especially with his look at the NKOTBSB NYE performance LOL.

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/24/11 Title: Chapter 20: Bunnies In Black: Part 2

Yay the girls get a mission even though I know they are not liking the fact they have to masquerade as Playboy bunnies. LOL So funny when Nick came back expecting all the girls to be all over him and instead he gets Lancy LOL. Poor Nick... Something tells me Nick may try to stick his nose in this mission somewhere.



Author's Response: We thought it'd be cute to give the girls a mission instead. Poor Nick lmao, all he wanted was his ladies. At least he has Lancy! Hehe. And maaaaaybe, I mean, it's not 00Carter without the Carter... lol

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/24/11 Title: Chapter 19: Bunnies In Black: Part 1

Ooh! I'm already super intrigued! At first I thought that the baby had just been a stillborn, but now that it was revealed that it was actually Bree who died and Emerald said something about "it being in contamination" I think that she maybe gave birth to something inhuman which has me totally curious. Can't wait to read more! By the way that pen light that erases someone's memory is total bad ass!



Author's Response: Julie wrote the opening scene and I'm (Rose) still completely in love with it. I'm glad it grabbed your attention! And we love our little penlight, our tribute to "Men In Black"'s "neuralizer" lmao. :)

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/24/11 Title: Chapter 17: Ice Ice Baby: Part 4

This is totally reminding me of that one Austin Powers movie with the "Laser." Only Nick would sneeze and cause Brian to mess up on the wires and trigger the alarms. It was also nice to see that Justin hesitated for a second. I think that somewhere deep down the old justin may still exsist. 



Author's Response: LOL That's definitely where we got it from. We figured every supervillain needs to have a plot to take over the world with a giant "laser," so this is Dr. Rough's go at it. Thanks for the thoughts!!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 1: Carter... Nick Carter: Part 1

So far I've been very entertained by Nick's character. I'm wondering what exactly the "precious" is and why its so valuable, but I am sure that it will be explained within the next chapter or two. I am enjoying the introduction to the characters that we've met so far.



Author's Response: Thanks, Mel! I know you're reading this for the challenge, but we really do appreciate you giving it a try, and we're looking forward to your honest feedback, positive or negative! This first episode is definitely more of an introduction to the characters than anything else.

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 2: Carter... Nick Carter: Part 2

Why do I get the feeling that his "precious" is not something that is that big of a deal to anyone, but Nick? His interrogation methods are very amusing for sure and again good character introduction to JC, Diamond, and AJ.



Author's Response: LOL Your feelings may be correct... ;) Thanks, Mel; it's fun reading your reactions to each chapter!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/20/11 Title: Chapter 3: Carter... Nick Carter: Part 3

*groans* I should've known his precious was just a slice of pizza! I am glad that Nick finally got a mission because it seems like he was getting pretty bored. I am definitely intrigued though to find out what happened on his last mission to get him  the time off. I am also intrigued to find out what the new mission entails!



Author's Response: LOL You know Nick... he gets bored easily. The next episode is where the story really begins, once he goes on his first mission. We hope you enjoy! Thanks again for the reviews on the first episode! :)

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/21/11 Title: Chapter 4: Idolize Me: Part 1

Hopefully you get this review since I'm on the mirror site Chaos created while AC is down. I had to laugh at the part where Nick sticks the mission note in his pants and they go on fire. I kind of felt the last scene with Diamond was a little choppy compared to the beginning, but I am assuming there may have been a change in writers in the two scenes. On to try and read some more and see how this mission takes off!



Author's Response: Got the reviews - that's dedication, reviewing even when the main site's down. We appreciate it! :) LOL Nick putting the self-destructing note in his pocket is pretty classic 00Carter. You're write; there were two different writers for the two scenes, so that's why it didn't flow as well. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/21/11 Title: Chapter 5: Idolize Me: Part 2

This chapter was really entertaining with the Global Idol auditions which is obviously a cheap rip off of American Idol. I even think you got Randy, Paula, and Simon down to a T. Could totally picture them saying those lines to Diamond during the audition. And we got a glimpse about what happened on Nick's last mission. Did he accidentally kill Justin?



Author's Response: Thanks! It was fun writing the Randy, Paula, and Simon rip-offs. And good question... :)

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 6: Idolize Me: Part 3

I think I may have an idea who is behind this one... We'll have to see if I'm correct. Nick's audition was pretty funny although I'm not sure if I believe that he could actually make up a song as cheesy as If You Want It to Be Good Girl... on the spot like that. I think that probably takes some calculated thought lol. Again it may be the change in writers, but I found it odd that in the last chapter and then again in this chapter there were scenes with Pearl and AJ that didn't identify that they were the characters in the scene right away if at all. That was a little confusing at first. I had to go back and reread those scenes a few times, but I got it now!



Author's Response: LOL Yeah, I agree, IYWITBGG is too awesomely bad to be made up on the spot. As for the scenes with AJ and Pearl watching, I know they're confusing, but intentionally so... I'll say more in my reply to your next review. ;) Thanks Mel!!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 7: Idolize Me: Part 4

I knew it was Justin! I do have to admit though that I was pretty confused this chapter and had to read things a few times. Some of it could be me because I tend to read fast and in stories where there's a lot of action in it I tend to skim over important details. Why was Nick auditioning again? Was this the next round of auditions? If it was I wished that it was clearer. And that scene with who I assume was Pearl and AJ was confusing. At first I thought they were bad guys watching Nick and Diamond so that could've been more specific. All in all though I am intrigued to read one and find out why Justin left Himitsu Takana.



Author's Response: I must admit, some of the scenes in this episode were meant to be confusing. Was it really Pearl and AJ watching... or was it someone else? You'll find out in the next episode, which follows up to this one and clarifies things a lot. You get the whole Justin back story in the next episode, too. If you were to go back and reread some of those scenes after reading the next episode, they should make more sense - not that we would expect you to; it's nothing that important. As for the question of why Nick was auditioning, his mission was to infiltrate the competition to track the terrorists thought to have already infiltrated it... and that mission continues into the next episode. It really could have and should have probably all been one continuous episode, but this was back when we were trying to keep things short - ha! ;) Thanks for the great questions and insight, Mel!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 8: Remember Me: Part 1

Now it's starting to come together! It figures Nick would do something like accidentally shoot himself in the arm and cause Justin's face to practically be eaten away by chemicals. I find it interesting that Agent K favors 008. Aww... Kevin always did have a soft spot for Nicky :) lol



Author's Response: LOL at least it was an accident. (Although actually Nick's arm got sprayed with the chemical, he didn't shoot himself. But I may not have made that clear in my attempt to be vague-ish lol). I love the Kevin/Nick bond, so it tends to appear in anything I write in haha.

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 9: Remember Me: Part 2

This was an uncomfortable chapter for me to read due to the very gory image of Justin's eye popping out of his head and Lancy's x-rated day dreams about Justin and Nick *shudders* lol. Too close to slash for me. I know that you guys love the gore and I'm sure that had to be a Julie scene with the eye popping out right? I'm not one for squeamish details so I guess this was a challenge for me. Anyway I really liked the flashbacks in the chapter and how we got those flashbacks through different character's perspectives. Things are definitely becoming a lot clearer now.



Author's Response: LMAO You called it! The eye popping scene was mine. I definitely tried to make it as gross as possible. :) I'm so glad things are becoming clearer now thanks to the flashbacks; that's what we were hoping for, anyway! Thanks, Mel!!