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Howdy, Dee here. I started reading BSB fanfics in 1999 at the advent of the internet and a wild imagination led me to start writing them some time shortly after that. I'm a sucker for fantasy stories (see wild imagination) and have written original fiction that trends fantasy as well. My favorite stories are True Companions focused (because aren't the Boys just like that), so expect lots of loving group moments from me. (If you have any of these for me to read, holler at your girl.) I took a long hiatus from writing, but a persistent character who insisted I finish his story urged me to come back (if you're familiar with my writing, you know exactly who).

In my life away from writing, I'm a teacher, traveler, volunteer, football fan, and coffee enthusiast.

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Summary: One girl holds the the key to Brian's heart but much to his dismay his ever so much more charming little brother Nick has the girl bewitched. Can Brian steal his true loves' affection when Nick is doing everything in his power to win the girl's heart?
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Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Brian
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
 Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 59899
Read Count: 42803


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Published: 01/31/07 » Updated: 04/06/07
Reviewer: nicksgal Signed Liked
Date: 02/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I got a dog. :D Yeah, yeah, I am enjoying this too much for my own good....

I liked it. :) I was secretly hoping you would update soon, my dear and darling beta reader. :*

Author's Response: Yeah? You like the doggie that Nick gave you huh? How\'d you enjoy sleeping with hiw? haha! After I wrote that I thought of you and laughed!

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Date: 02/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Kelly hun, you'd better update soon. Because in a sick, twisted way, I am enjoying this highly. :)

I'd have like to see the original version though. :)

Author's Response: Ah, is Dee reading my stuff??? My chesey, romantic, melodrama??? HAHAHAHA! I must say, I\'m a little intimidated...

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Date: 02/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh Lance..... Hahahahahahahahahaha. But seriously, I loved senior Prom. Maybe I owe some photos some time... :)

And *I* get to hang out with Brian and Nick all the time! *beams*

It's so gratifying when someone else puts you in their story without you knowing. Haha. :)

Author's Response: Well no one loves Nick like you do! -lol but I have a sneaking suspicion you\'re not going to like me too much after this...

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Date: 02/13/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

If Nick chases that hussey.... *huffs*

Good chapter hun. :)

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Date: 02/13/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ouch. I came off as a real wench. *pout*

Shame on Nickolas, stealing Brian's girl. Tsk tsk.

Author's Response: aww give yourself some credit. If I were Deanna I\'d be pretty pissed that some chick was trying to snak my man right in front of me...

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Date: 02/13/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor poor Brian. :'( Sarah must date him.

And clearly Nick is in good hands. Psh. What were they thinking?

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Date: 03/30/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Well it's about time, yeesh.

And I was in this chapter... Sort of.

When is Brian going to tell Sarah that she's his Nick? >_< Er.... That made no sense....

Author's Response: dang it I knew that was going to happen!!! grrrrr!!! I have to figure out a better way to do that. I\'ve actually been struggling with that question since I started planning this story. The total honest answer is that he doesn\'t tell her cause I need him not to or the end of the story doesn\'t work... I\'ve been fighting it for a while now and figured just write it, get through it and then go back and fix it once everything\'s done cause then I\'ll know exactly how it all plays out. Maybe once it\'s finished y\'all can give me some suggestions :) because I absolutely HATE when motivation doesn\'t work or when things are very \"convienent\" so I know I\'ll go back and fix it, I\'m just not sure how yet. ANYWAY... thanks for pointing it out! I was wondering if people were going to do that. :) If you didn\'t say something I might have been lazy and left it... now it will drive me carzy until I fix it -lol as for the \"it\'s about time\" comment, I think it just feels like that cause you\'re getting the chapters days and weeks apart. I just read them all the way through again and when I did, I didn\'t really feel that way. I mean for them it\'s only been like 3 days, how quickly must one move? I dunno though, I wrote it so I\'m kinda partial... how about everyone else? What do you guys think?

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Date: 02/26/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I was nowhere in this chapter. *pouts* But I was beginning to miss this story. :")

Nick.... If he brings her flowers... I'll step on him.

There were two places where names were wrong... I was "Cindy" and Sarah was "Morgan". Just thought I'd point that out! Good once again! :)

Author's Response: grrr that is so frustrating... I always proofread after I finish, then I put it down for a day and proofread it again when its fresh and I still can\'t manage to get them straight. I swear my brain doesn\'t even know the difference. There was a reason when I started writing this story that I had changed the names of all the characters and now its driving me crazy!!! Thanks though! I changed them for any future readers. And yeah, actually *you* have only a minor part from here on out... sorry. But the story is about Brian and Sarah after all. I was missing this story too. I just have had a hard time finding my groove since I got sick, but I think I am getting back into it again so hopefully I won\'t take as long to update as I did this time. Plus I\'m like a chapter and a half away from being done with \"Not Your Average Cinderella Story\" so then I won\'t have that one to work on anymore. That should speed the process on this one. Although I have a lot of people wanting me to finish \"The Day I Fall\" next... (thats a Nick story) I dunno, we\'ll see.

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Date: 03/29/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

*unties boxing gloves* And here I was looking for a fight and get flowers instead, what luck. :D

Except I'm a little hurt... Your discription of the kind of girl Nick needs, which made him think of Deanna... Yeah, that's totally me. Bah.

And there were a lot of witty lines at the end and I laughed, like out loud, honestly. *claps* Y-chromosome... Hahahahahaha...

Author's Response: aww, well I thought you deserved some flowers... (sticking with my cheesey romance and all) hehe. But I\'m sure there\'s someone out there that would fight you if you really wanted. I bet Lance would let you beat up JC :)

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Date: 03/28/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oi... I hate love triangles...

I just rememered why romance annoys me.

Deanna ives Sarah the double cheek slap: "Obviously Nick never noticed you before and he's just a big flirt. Nothing has changed."

Deanna gives Brian the double cheek slap: "Do something already! Change your own fate!"

Deanna gives Nick the double cheek slap: "Stop breaking girls' hearts!"

Yeesh....

Author's Response: hmmm Deanna mus be pretty tired after all that slappin! So it\'s finally getting to you huh? I have to admit, you\'ve lasted longer than I expected. :) But don\'t worry, they\'ll all come around really soon.

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Date: 03/26/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Drama... Draaaaaaaaaamaaaaa....

And I love cheesecake. Mmm....

My Japanese teacher laughed at me when she asked me what I wanted to eat, and a thought about it, and finally said: "Ano... Chisukeki o tabete kudasai."

Haha. ;)

Author's Response: I happen to like drama... and thats a really long word for cheesecake! lol.

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Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That sneaky Brian! Teeheehee....

I liked it. :) He's a clever one.

I hope everything works out for them! :D

And yeah, Nick better remember his awesome girlfriend!

PS.... There's one point where Brian was named "Daniel."

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Date: 03/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow! Sarah is a master! :o I need her to help me buy a car!

I hope Brian keeps her in Chicago with him... Meh heh heh heh.

Oh, in this paragraph: "After an hour and a half or so of paperwork...." Y ou switched to present tense for a little while....

Author's Response: SEE I RESOPND!!! I STILL LOVE YOU! and yeah, Sarah is an expert. She grew up in a garage :) I asked my father in law (a mechanic) about some easily spottable problems that used car salesman might try and get away with cause personally, I can put gas in my car and change a tire and thats about it... But I still lobe them! and oh man I would kill for one of those Porsches! That model is my favorite car. ps... thank\'s for the corrections! My brain is goofy sometimes.

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Date: 03/24/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Gourmet corndogs huh?

Where am I?

And make her stop gushing over Nick before I start a fight. *readies boxing gloves*

Author's Response: you never know, there could be gourmet corndogs... and again patience... you\'ll be back soon enough. but you better make sure those gloves are tied tight. haha.

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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor Brian.

And I demand a sex scene from both him and Sarah as well as Nick and Deanna. *nods* Chop chop.

Also.... In the paragraph where Sarah is talking about how she loves the sea, you wrote "see" instead. :)

Author's Response: As soon as I get me some demon lovin\'. Haha just kidding. Actually this story won\'t have any sex in it. In fact I\'ve never actually written a full on sex scene. I\'m not real big on the visuals... Welcome To My Heart had some PG-13 sexual content and \"Cinderella\" had some serious violence and sexual assult but that\'s unusual for me. Normally I\'m pretty mild. Yo\'ll just have to imagine it... You want a good sex scene though, read the story that\'s featured this month. Those girls can write some hot stuff ;)