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Real Name: Krystle
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Short Stories:
Better Than Revenge
Happy Birthday Alex
I Hate Valentine’s Day
Merry Christmas Baby
Safest Place to Hide
SHMILY
The "C" Word - Alternate Ending
Understand
Valentine Favor

Novels:
A Fairytale Life – Sequel to The Right Woman
A Second Chance – Sequel to Safest Place to Hide
Accidentally in Love
Alternate Beauty
Get Mine Get Yours
Home
Mistakes Made … Lessons Learned
October Road
Plus Size Part 1
Plus Size Part 2
Speak Now
The “C” Word
The Right Woman
Weekend Fun

Series:
The Heart Series
Joyful Heart, Our First Christmas, Me Without You
The Family Series
Family Matters, Shattered Glass, From This Moment On


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Reviews by Sapphire
Ray of Hope by kevmylove Rated: NC-17 [ - ]
Summary: Past Featured Story


   

~~COMPLETED~~

Raidyn is unhappy with her life, everything in it seems to be a struggle for her, from getting along with her alcoholic father, to her obsession with wanting to be thin. In order to make ends meet she finds herself stuck cleaning houses with her mother; temporarily. But things only get more complicated when she meets Nick Carter while cleaning the Dorough’s home.

 


Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: AJ, Nick
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death, Domestic Violence, Sexual Content, Violence
 Series: None
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 151178
Read Count: 38571


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Published: 08/18/08 » Updated: 03/19/11
Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/03/08 Title: Chapter 23: Secrets and Lies

So many questions! When do we find out who the daddy is? If it's AJ is he going to stop being an ass and do he right thing? Great chapter. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: We find out very soon, I promise. I'm still debating on where to take it. I think AJ just might be it...hehe! Thank you!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/05/08 Title: Chapter 24: No She Wouldn't

Holy crop! Their father is a monster. I hope he didn't do anything to their mother after they left.

At least AJ wants to be a good friend and take care of Mia but he needs to Lose Beth!

Hopefully Ray can forgive herself for what happened to to Nora. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Yes he is, someone needs to knock him out. Haha!! Yeah he wont be able to commit fully if Beth is always around will he. More soon. Thank you girl!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/06/08 Title: Chapter 25: Some Truth

Good chapter. I guess Aj's gonna stay an ass? I hope Nick and Ray fix things.

Author's Response: Maybe he doesn't mean to be an ass, you know. He's just used to his life and he doesn't want it to change. He is being less of an ass!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/08/08 Title: Chapter 26: A Night Out

Great chapter. When are we going to find out who the daddy is? I dying to know. Update!

Author's Response: Thank you, updating in a bit...literally. Oh yeah the daddy results are not far away, along with an AJ tude adjustment. Thank you

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/10/08 Title: Chapter 28: Make it Right

He's marriyibng Beth??!?!?!?! What's is wrong with you!

 

HAHA. Update soon!!!



Author's Response: LMAO!!! I like to make you guys suffer.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/14/08 Title: Chapter 30: I Still

OMG! You are seriously killing me without saying who the father is! PLEASE PLEASE tell us soon!!

And AJ really needs to get it together and dump Beth and be there for Mia.

UPDATE SOON!!!!



Author's Response: Ok...Ok I promise that it's coming within the next two to three chaps. AJ is such a dufus, I think he's afraid of loving her, that's why he keeps beth. Thank you

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/19/08 Title: Chapter 31: Knock Out

Great chapter... seriously who's the daddy! God Stephanie is a bitch!! Update soon.

Author's Response:

I promise you'll know very soon. hehe! she sure is a big one. Thank you.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/20/08 Title: Chapter 32: My Ray

So good!! Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! Very soon.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/27/08 Title: Chapter 33: Testing...1 2 3

great chapter... can't wait for more

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad that you liked. More coming your way very soon. Thank you!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/29/08 Title: Chapter 34: What a Party

oh crap don't kill the baby!!!!

can't wait for more

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 10/30/08 Title: Chapter 35: U R Not the Father

DAMN IT!!! I sooo wanted it to AJ so he would change his mind about Beth!!! Great chapter. Glad you didn't kill the baby. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yeah I know, but if his feelings are true for Mia and he is just in denial he might come around anyway. Although it did seem like the baby was softening him up huh! I thought abut letting her lose the baby, but then I thought that is her reason for changing her ways...so they are both good. Thanks so much. and by the way I can't believe that 'The C Word" has come to an end *clears throat* and what an end missy!!! Leaving me hanging there...Thanks girl.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 11/12/08 Title: Chapter 39: Happy Thanksgiving!

That's it? Can't wait for more. AJ is sooo close to splitting form Beth. Just gotta make it happen!! update soon :)

Author's Response: Yup...my mind was about to combust! He sure is, but who knows if he will have the guts to make the right choice. LOL!! Thanks girl!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 11/14/08 Title: Chapter 40: The Roommates

things are going to get bad. Great chapter! Updaye soon :)



Author's Response: Yeah they definately are, I'm just trying to figure out how bad. lol! Thank you girl...

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 11/15/08 Title: Chapter 41: Afflicted

What a bitch! Ray should have smacked the crap out of her! LOL. Poor Mia... she shouldn't let everyone else tell her whato do with the babies. AJ need to pull his head out of his ass and DROP Beth and be with Mia. Mia was right, Nick s abutt head. Well more than that.

 

Update Soon!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Yeah I would have just walked out of that store! I definately hope Mia doesn' listen to them. yeah Nick and AJ are both butt heads. Thank you girl!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed
Date: 11/17/08 Title: Chapter 42: Secrets and Lies

oh man. this chapter made me very sad. please fix ray and nick and get rid of fhis mother. I don't even know where to begin with Mia and AJ!

update soon!



Author's Response:

I thought this was a very sad chapter too, probably cause of all those emotions flying about. Plus Nick was very mean. Thank you girl!