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Help with a technical question in description and dialogue writing.
RokofAges75:
LOL no problem... and I wasn't trying to be self-righteous by pointing it out either; I swear. But since you were asking about the mechanics stuff anyway, I figured I'd mention it. ;) I know it's late, so no worries LOL.
nicksgal:
Julie's right. You only need to split up paragraphs when the action or dialogue belongs to a different character. :)
Sakabelle:
Personally I like to sometimes break off a sentence from my paragraphs (like you're doing here) when it's some sort of... major point, if you know what I mean. I do that a lot and I feel like it adds something to that statement. Like, it was important enough to warrant its own paragraph. You know what I mean? lol
RokofAges75:
^ I know what you mean, and I totally do that too. I like the dramatic one-liner set off by itself LOL. That's basically what I meant when I was saying you can break it up if you think it looks better, cause I do that sometimes too.
Sakabelle:
It makes things more dramatic! That's what I was trying to say in my post but for the life of me I could not think of the word dramatic! LOL Thanks Julie!!
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